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Reviews for Pleasure Slave

By : Capitalist
  • From ANON - Zika Silver1 on September 28, 2005
    This is wonderfully written, I can't wait to read what happens next! I love this story so much, but I have to be a little critical. My main concern is the protective relation between Touya and Sakura. In this story, Sakura is 15, if I recall correctly, and is very innocent/naïve in a lot of areas. But she acts more like a 10-year-old and way too innocent for "very very very sheltered and protected" by brother. Touya's protectiveness is reasonable, with the story, but for that level of protection in their village?
    To me, it seems like Sakura has suffered from either a developmental disorder, or some head trama (aka, blow to the head) when she was younger that affected her mental age. Having a younger sister with a disability would cause Touya to become more protective, especially if she is his only remaining family. It explains a lot.
    But it's just a suggestion. If you want to know more about this sort of stuff, just email me. Otherwise, KEEP FIGHTING TOUYA!!!!
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  • From ANON - northstar on September 28, 2005
    okay...so I reviewed once...but I got to the end....and wanted more! I understand life gets busy and sometimes, even when there's time to write, its hard to because you're too drained or just so not in the mood. Happens to me. Never the less, being a fan girl myself, I can't wait to read the next chapter!!! I love your story! Yue's a little out of character with the sadism....but in this story, I like him this way! Touya's really very much like himself, its sooo yummy! Really, I shouldn't be squealing over your story....I'm more mature than that, but.....I can't seem to help myself. It makes my own little inner sadist so happy (yes, it scares me to admit I have one). I would love to see Sakura fall in love with Li and/or Tomoyo. I like the way, in your story, that the two siblings' relationships with their potenial loves have such different flavors. With Yue's and Touya's relationship, it's like a bitter wine mellowing and sweetening over time. With Sakura and Tomoyo/Li, its like a sugar confection melting on your tongue with a burst of tangy citrus in the middle. Also, your villian is so evil! It's cliche, but he's a villian you love to hate. I hope this doesn't spoil the plot line for anyone--if I'm right--but I would hate to see Yue's master come between Yue and Touya permanently. I'm guessing that Yue's master shares Yue's bed (as his lover) and is the reason why Yue refuses to share a bed with anyone else. Some kind of confrontation between Yue's master and Touya is probably in the works, but I would like to see Yue and Touya together in the end. As a side note, bravo on spelling and grammar. I can't say whether your story has no errors, but not once did either of those trip me up while I was reading your story. Either you've done a fine job cleaning up the story, or you have an excellent beta, or both.
    Anyways I encourage you (stongly) to keep writting and I will be looking forward to your next update!
    :)
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  • From ANON - northstar on September 28, 2005
    Oh yes, eight chapters and your muse is finally getting to the main part of the story. I am so glad my muse isn't the only one. Funny how those quickie porno fics turn into full blown stories. Anyways. Great story. I'm on chapter eight now and looking forward to reading the rest of what you have posted.
    Bravo and all that jazz!
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  • From ANON - Jessica on September 21, 2005
    This story was so friggin awesomeley good!! Every time I had to leave the computer, I wanted to read more and more of it!!! By the way, when are you going to write more, and could you just kill that Ralen dude...He's annoying..(J/K) Anyway, I really hope you write more soon!!! It was awesome!!!!
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  • From ANON - Saline the Salt Lake Queen on September 20, 2005
    Eeeeeekkkk!!! *sqeels with joy* This is soooooo unbelivably good! When I first got the chapter where they told Sakura "I think Master Yue is going to enjoy you" I almost stopped reading. I am *not* a Yue/Sakura fan. But I remembered the synop saying it had yaoi in it so I kept reading. Jeeze am I glad I did. "Nway, tis good wench! Write more soon!
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  • From ANON - Saline the Salt Lake Queen on September 20, 2005
    Eeeeeekkkk!!! *sqeels with joy* This is soooooo unbelivably good! When I first got the chapter where they told Sakura "I think Master Yue is going to enjoy you" I almost stopped reading. I am *not* a Yue/Sakura fan. But I remembered the synop saying it had yaoi in it so I kept reading. Jeeze am I glad I did. "Nway, tis good wench! Write more soon!
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  • From ANON - Morwen Re on September 16, 2005
    dude, are you ever going to update again? i've reread this fic a couple of times already and i still want to read more of it! >o< please please please update again soon! O.o
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  • From ANON - chi on September 16, 2005
    i love dis story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    pls pls pls pls pls update soon
    pls
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  • From ANON - Outlaw Angel on September 11, 2005
    wow...you trully are good...i think you are lettine touya and yue fall for eachother....very good indeed...please update as soon as you
    can cuz I so totaly love the last 2 chapters yuo finally updated.....good job....keep up the good work...
    ya ne!!!!
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  • From ANON - lita on September 10, 2005
    I love it so far. You are simply an amazing writer. Please keep it up. I love this story, I also love the way it is going... Can you please email me when you write more... please.... Hopefully hear from you soon... Lita
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  • From ANON - ms. paper on September 06, 2005
    Please, I do hope that you'll update your story soon. It's really very well written. I love the way you write each and everyone of your characters even the villain! I have never been so hooked on a fanfic before! I read it all in one day and I was actually late meeting up with my friends because I just couldn't stop reading and even when I was already out, I was still thinking of this fic and wondering what will happen! I just can't get enough of it. This is one of the best CCS AU fics that I have ever read and I hope that you'll continue it. I have been checking everyday to see if you have updated and I won't get tired of checking everyday. I would love to read more about Sakura and Syaoran in the coming chapters! Thanks so much for sharing this story with us, may there be more chapters! Looking forward to the updates! Take care!
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  • From ANON - jam on September 05, 2005
    awwwwwww man your killin' me! just killin' me! is that what you wanted-for me to die, cause i will if you don't hurry the hell up and update this story! s'good story by the way, your doing quite a fine job! keep up the good work! AT EASE SOLDIER!
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  • From ANON - Mewling on September 03, 2005
    Waah. Has the Touya and Yue part of this story become more popular?
    I haven't criticised in a while...It was good as usual.
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  • From ANON - emiko on August 31, 2005
    this is a great sstory. please,please,please,please,please,please,please,please,please, update. i love where the story's headed
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  • From ANON - Sess\'sBewitchingBabe on August 30, 2005
    OH MY GODDDDDDDDD! (squels) Ok I'm better now.\

    Your one of the most talented authors I've ever read! Few ever become really good writters in such a way. Bravo!!! More, More, More, is all I can say. Update soon! I want to knoiw what happens next!
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