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Reviews for Pleasure Slave

By : Capitalist
  • From ANON - Fay li Lo on August 29, 2005
    Hey Hey Hey!! love this fic sooooooo much..best i ever read...man i can't wait to see hot Touya shows Yue his thanks and i do hope that sometime in the future we learn where Yue went for 3 days and also i can't wait to see what happenes between Sakura and Lee..well lz update soon and have fun writing..^-^
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  • From ANON - jam on August 24, 2005
    ya just gotta write more, ya just gotta
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  • From ANON - Shaylan Torasin on August 17, 2005
    I simply LOVE your fic. I've been looking for a pairing like this for a while now. And so far, yours is the best (and the only one) that I've found. Not that I've been looking hard enough, but still... I love how you portrayed Touya here. You made him submissive while not taking away his "manliness". However, I feel like your work lacks more description. You might want to try emphasizing some things. Like in the seen between Touya and Aya after he was taken, you might want to actually try describing to the readers what exactly his expression looked like. Also, with the bedroom scenes, perhaps you could try making it more stimulating? I'm not saying it's boring or anything. I like how you presented it. At least your work is a far cry from most of the others I've seen...
    Of course, these are all just suggestions. I hope you don't take offense to anything I've said. I've been told I'm too blunt and too much of a critique.
    Hope you finish your story soon! I eagerly await for your next update.
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  • From ANON - yuki on August 16, 2005
    umm oops..my bad i put add.net when what i really meant to write was AFF.NET..^-^..sr about that Ra-kun..mistypes that..the 'd' is so close to the 'f' that i made a mistake..anyway..plz update soon..^.^
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  • From ANON - Hoshi no Senshi on August 16, 2005
    Hey loved the last chap. and all the other..i can't wait until u write the next one...oh plz write more soon..if this is not enough prase i will try harder..just let me know..^-^
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  • From ANON - Iz on August 15, 2005
    This is interesting. I dont normally come to this site (i stick to the less risque ff.n, lol) ill have to remeber to check back often, make sure you update!!
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  • From ANON - Racella on August 13, 2005
    I forgot to ask about Erol!
    whare's he? is that whare Yue went?
    so meny questions! hope thare anserd SOON!
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  • From ANON - Racella on August 13, 2005
    YEHA! Gimme some Sakura/Siyoran ACTION!
    Q. Whare is Kero? And Ruby Moon? She's kewl!
    KILL BLONDY! DON'T LET HIM TOUCH SAKURA!
    Turn Yue into a goodguy, evil isn't becoming of him.
    & to any who knows whats ADD.net?

    U RULE!
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  • From ANON - Tamara on August 13, 2005
    EEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    I LOVE THIS STORY!
    WRITE MORE SOON!
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  • From ANON - Yuki on August 13, 2005
    I love this fic sooo much and know that it is the best out of all the CCS fics on ADD.net..i just can't wait until the next chap and really hope that update soon..^__^
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  • From ANON - chekiita on August 12, 2005
    oh i do love this fic, it's always a pleasure to read, it's so worth the wait,
    great chapter, you can see the relationship between the characters developing and touyas mind working, it's very curious how yue treated other slaves and not touya, you can see how yue is infatuated with his new toy.
    and the part with ralen going into the bathroom is just priceless
    love it
    chekiita
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  • From ANON - Carrot on August 09, 2005
    You are seriously a very...very...very wrong person...
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  • From ANON - Rawr! on August 09, 2005
    I am absolutely in love with this story! You have a beautiful writing style and your whole story is creative and interesting. Much
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  • From ANON - Inulover16 on August 09, 2005
    Hey i really love ur fic soo much..in the begining i thought that it was good but as i neared the last update that u did i was really happy that it seemed to get even better..I really can't wait to findout what happenes and to see what that thing was Touya felt when..umm.they were..*blush* anyway i can't wait to read more about what Sakura does with Li and also how Yue feels about her brother..well plz update soon..oh and don't forget to have fun writing..^.^
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  • From ANON - wildly_unreal on August 08, 2005
    Noooo!!! You stopped so soon! Please! More!! *fangirl squee*
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