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Reviews for Pleasure Slave

By : Capitalist
  • From ANON - Emeraldwolf on August 08, 2005
    woot!!! another chapter. ^__^ i really love this fic. your characterization is wonderful. although in this chapter i was missing Li. i love that kid. but lots of Touya and Yue goodness is never a bad thing. hehe. rock on!
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  • From ANON - Your biggest fan aka LuV2Writ3 from ff.net on August 08, 2005
    Heya! I have read this fic like three times now! I absolutely love it! I told my self that I would review every chapter some day, but (and I hope you forgive me) I decided to just review this chapter for now. I probably would go through every chapter individually and review each of them, but time is not on my side and I am just lucky to be able to review this one.

    I frequently check to see if you have updated this story, for I really love it, and was ecstatic to come on a couple of weeks ago and find that there were new chapters up. My sister looked at me strangely when I started screaming out in glee. ^_^ Oh well.

    My favorite parts are the Touya/Yue parts, for I am a huge yaoi fan, and my love for Touya and Yue are just as strong as my love for yaoi. I started reading this a loooong time ago and was wonderfully surprised at how hooked I was on it. I love the characters, the plot, the brother/sister relationships. The way you portrayed Touya is just breath-taking. Especially since Touya went all over the country just to find and free his sister. Even when mostly everyone was saying that it was a lost cause.

    And Yue is just so mysterious and wonderfully written. He's powerfully adept at everything, and yet you still subtlly show his weaknesses. I think that it's important to show that not everyone is perfect. And you do that with exceptional ease.

    One of my favorite parts of the whole fic was when Touya got sick and Yue was actually concerned and made him eat. I don't know, maybe I am just weird (and that's quite probable) but I just adored that part.

    I also love the way you have the subtle hints of the start of feelings for your characters. Most authors/authoresses just jump right in and have their characters proclaiming their love for eachother, even though they hated eachother just a few paragraphs ago. I love how everything is developing in a nice and easy to follow and very believeable pace.

    Well, um, I hope that you are not annoyed with me for writing such a ridiculously long review (sorry, couldn't help myself, as I said, I absolutely adore this fic). I was wondering if you would e-mail me whenever you update this fic? I know that it might be annoying to do so, but if you wouldn't mind, I would really love to get an email whenever you post a new chapter. I don't have an account of adultff.net, and I don't go on here often. The only time I really do is so that I can see if you updated.

    So, if it wouldn't be too much trouble, would you e-mail me? ^_^ Thanks for writing an awesomely wonderful fic. Can't wait to hear from you, or to see a new update!

    ~~LuV~~

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  • From on August 05, 2005
    One thing for another. Nice chap. ^.^ smut! and a little bit of fluffiness! heheheheh great chapter! Please update when you can!
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  • From ANON - chibifae on August 04, 2005
    i found this story by accident and it was a pleasant surprise. i look forward to updates.
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  • From ANON - luckyducky7too on August 04, 2005
    Great chapter! Please update soon.
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  • From ANON - Kaitos-Micheal on August 03, 2005
    Please update soon (or if you don't have writer's block or when you have time)?! I recently started reading CCS stories on here and I had a instant liking for yours.
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  • From ANON - ayachan on August 03, 2005
    o_O i just realized something... yue only bathes when he needs to? ew... that better be every single day then.. or he better be a super clean person.. wow, that's weird, lol, he's strict about his slaves being clean, but not himself? ... wow, i sound like a hygiene freak -_- anyway.. for some weird reason, i keep imagining touya just playing w/ the water once he got in the tub.. haha, i think that would have amused yue greatly.. but touya's too much of a manly-man huh :P haha, must be some childish instinct of mine to splash around in the water
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  • From ANON - RAW19 on August 03, 2005
    Capitalist says: I do not own these characters.
    RAW19 says: but, you do mistreat them.

    - for the love of god, this fic is sick and wrong, but i can't stop reading it! you are a great author!
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  • From ANON - Lindsay on August 02, 2005
    AHH!! More, hurry more. Please
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  • From ANON - Cheshire on August 02, 2005
    I love your story!! It's so neat how you have Touya as the uke. He makes such a preety one at that!!!! ^_^
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  • From ANON - Bakura on August 01, 2005
    *melts into a puddle*

    I WANT TO SEE HIS GRADITUTE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    PLEASEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    Don't let me wait long, I'll go crazy ;;

    It was a great Chapter, A Yue-Tpuya onw. Write more of these, please ;;
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  • From ANON - ayachan on August 01, 2005
    actually, i take what i said back.. talking to yue about the slave issue would be an interesting chapter, but what if yue finds a new slave o_O then all bets w/ the sakura/ralen/no touching rule would be off O_O and that would not be cool
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  • From ANON - ayachan on August 01, 2005
    o_O ohhhhh, it's getting interesting now! err... wait -_-, not that it wasn't interesting before.. but wow! omg, what Touya did to stun Ralen was just wayyyy too funny!!! good job! hmm.. i'd like to see touya confront yue about this slave issue, that he has just learned, sometime.. well, not confront.. confrontation sounds like touya will be punished therefore in pain.. err.. talk :P.. please keep up the good work!
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  • From ANON - Scorpinac on August 01, 2005
    Ah, Ralen getting taken down a peg and sent running for once, sweet! And Yue's sudden disappearance, curious. And given the timing, one can't help but wonder, what phase was the moon in the last time he was out? Is he perhaps on an Inuyasha like cycle where during this particular time of the month he loses all his powers and turns into, well, Yukito? And what did that odd shadow feeling have to do with it, if anything at all? Ah, well, looking forward to the next chapter, and possibly some more focus on Sakura and her (finally) budding relationship with Syaoran! Laters!
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  • From ANON - Blackrose on August 01, 2005
    This story is getting really good. The characters are fab. Hope they get free though. Or Madison comes back into it. Hope we see something between Li and Sakura. (Sorry. Not used to using their Japanese names.) Looking forward to the next part.
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