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By : Capitalist

From ANON - Ailsa on October 20, 2007
well what can i say? nothing thats not been said before....
But that was just.. beautiful! i would even go as far as to say i enjoyed it more than harry Potter! (not even Exaggerating there lol) And im actually feeling something like i felt after i put down HP and the deathly hallows! :(
if u get it published heres one person who will defo b buying it! :D
I think i speak for all of us when i say this...
Best fanfic i've ever read!

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From ANON - Amanda on October 20, 2007
This is finally the end. For the past year and a half, I have followed this story with love and interest and now it's time to say goodbye. I will definitely miss looking for the updates. But I have a feeling that the conversations that we hold in the yahoo group for PS will continue for a long time to some keeping the spirit of the story alive. So farewell PS! I will definitely miss you!!
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From ANON - LuBi on October 20, 2007
Wow. I've read this complete story and (though I really, *really* wanted a SS lemon)... I loved it. ^^
I would've never guessed you were Peacewish! DudE! That's too freaking awesome! (and now I go all teeny on you.. sorry about that!)

Always a fan...
LuBi.
(LyG4ever / BrOkEn.HeArTs at ff.net)
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From ANON - Rhian on October 18, 2007
That was the best story ever created. Period. I thank you for writing this and sharing it with the people on this site, it was so beautiful. I love how much emotion is in it. I have tears running down my cheeks now because one, the ending was so nice and I'm really happy for the characters, and two, because it's sad that it is over (except for the epilogue)
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From priya on October 18, 2007
Capitalist... i have to say that ur the most brilliant writer ever... EVER!!!! To take charecter that we all knew from a story that was meant for children, u twisted them up into a power play plot while still managing to stay tru to their original personalities...that is a work of a genius.U took us on an emotional roller coster with the charecters...when they were terrified so were we, when they were sad we probably cried our eyes out too, when they were happy we gave out a genuine sigh of relief too!!! to get us to feel wat they felt with just words shows wat an amazing writer u are!!!
but the last chapter... even though it was great, it felt as though it was hurried. Plz don't tale this as a flame coz i would never even THINK of doing that to such a great epic story... I'm just saying wat i think. U tied up all ends AND gave it a happy ending, which is brilliant coz we all thought it was gonna b a tragedy.. its just that it doesn't feel complete...
after so many chapters of refusing to even here the word 'love' from either yue or Sakura touya confesses?? n i still don't feel like forgiving Touya for all that he put Sakura n Yue through...he still seems like a git that should be hit on the head..HARD!! n the all scary n crazy void bein defeated like that.... i don't know...
n the feel of the last chap was diff too..... the entire story was like a dark fairy tale slowly unwrapping its deep dark secrets, but the last chap was almost like a movie ending.....sigh.. its either all this or i'm in denial bout the story ending n will try stop the end from commin at any means possible!!!!!!! where will i look for inspiration for pics now!!! don't leave us capitalist!!!plz plz PLZ!!!!!!!!! *puts in irresistable puppy dog eyes*

but i have to ask.... were YOU...capitalist... happy with the way this chapter turned out?
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From ANON - Tadao Yokoshima on October 17, 2007
Now what are we suppose to do with our lives now?
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From uruki on October 17, 2007
I really love the ending yet I hate seeing the complete fini of a story! Its going to leave me off empty for a while. Your story was truly one of a kind, and so along with your imagination. I haven't read a single story that kept me reading for this long and at the tip of the cliff the whole while. Please, take care, and produce a happy future like the ending of this story for yourself.
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From ANON - strawberry_buttercup on October 17, 2007
well fuck..... it made me almost cry. im so glad its over. happily ever after indeed. don't ever do anything to us like that again, please? angsty, definelty. wonderful story though. it had everything. perfect! i remember reading it about a year or so ago actually. i had pages of it printed out in my room so i could read it on the train whenever u posted a new chapter and i didnt have the time to read it. ahhhh lol. congratulations on finally finishing it though. i bet you're proud, and you should be. it's a awesome achievement.
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From ANON - Cherry on October 17, 2007
Hello, I'm reviewing again for this chapter since I don't think my other review was proper (actually, nowhere even close).

Anyway, thank you very much, Capitalist-san for writing such a long and wonderful fic. This truly was an amazing story, and I'm looking forward to the epilogue. But I thought the ending would be a little more tragic - I like them that way. - and I was kinda surprised I didn't burst into tears at the end. But my eyes were watering when Yue let Touya go, and I don't know which chapter that was, since it all became a blur (probably too much MO~E.) I was super giddy at the ending and I couldn't even speak properly for a full minute after reading the "THE END". I couldn't really believe "Pleasure Slave" was over.

I'm very happy for Syaoran-kun. He got his girl. And, it really took a long time (2 years for us.) for him to get Sakura-chan. All of the characters really developed ('cept Ralen, of course), and I really got pulled into the plot. I'm not really the type to think about what's logically gonna happen next, and I just anticipate the coming chapter.

THANK YOU VERY MUCH AGAIN FOR WRITING SUCH A LONG STORY! It was one of the few reasons I kept checking back in Aff!

I think this is long enough. I really should've reviewed for each chapter. Very sorry.

-Cherry
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From midnightfox on October 15, 2007
My goodness that was so deep and @_@ I was hyperventalating from the suspense. =) another awesome chapter ^_~
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From silvergirlrox on October 14, 2007
Absolutely wonderful!!i couldn't help it!...i cried!! this chapter was the pretty much the end and i was soo sad!!:(

For i moment there i thought you killed touya and yue!! but i kept on reading, and i loved the way you took away his and kero's immortality. At long last they'ss be happily ever after. i mean if he still had his immortality then their love would just end up in tradgedy agian. Another Clow for yue.

i must say that i am really impressed with the progress touya showed throughout the whole fic. I was proud of the way he threw himself off the cliff to save yue. he and yue were the characters that showed the most change, and i was really proud of both of them.i was especially proud when touya finally let sakura go.

i was raelly happy to see li and sakura together agian...even tho they were apart for like 3 hours, probably even less. but i was really touched by her speech/ lecture she gave her brother. i really liked the fact that she was able to break free from her brother. she understands so much now then she did in the bigging of the story. i really hope that she'll go back to touya at least to see him once in a while.

And Syoaran... FINALLY has sakura all to himself!!it really about time!!take that ralen!i's nice to see then together again after their heart wrenching goodbye last chapter. i really cried when they say goodbye and i cried when they got together again! im a really complicated girl! His speech to yue really talked some sense into him and proved how much he progressed as a character. i have to say that his and sakura's love is alot more pure, white, and fluffier then yue's and touya's. throughout the whole fic sakura remained innocent(kinda)and pure never really hating li at all. While yue's and touya's love was, at the beginning, was so hateful and full of revenge. And i like the way that yue Acknowledges this in the last chapter. i really wasn't expecting the void to die though. i htought that we would come and except the fact that clow loved yue more or that yue and kero would maybe ease his pain. cause i kinda felt that he had a grudge for not being wanted. wats up with that?

in conclusion... i hate the fact that the story has come to an end, but im but the ending made me feel all warm and fuzzy. I really must congratulate you on a brilliant story and a job well done! Most authoers wouldn't stick to a story for so long! it really encouraged me to go back to old stories and finish them so thats what im gonna do. It's a work in progress though so i need time!But i really want to encourage you to write another fic. PLEASE DO SO!! and take your time on it... your fans can wait! i mean we waited 3 years for this one!!lol ;)

*silvergirlrox*

ps WRITE ANOTHER FIC. THIINK ABOUT IT!!!!!PLEASE???!!
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From ANON - Korinaly on October 14, 2007
I finally get around to finishing this, after delaying so long. I do that with stories I really like, don't want to end it all.

But Oh. My. God. In Confessions, I was crying. Wow. Now I'm trying to figure out the epilogue. Sakura and Li get married, obviously. However, that doesn't necessarily mean that Sakura has to break all ties to Touya. **rubs hands** or maybe they all move into the castle... Castle full of crazy Li's; sounds like fun!

Anyways, this is awesome, one of my favorite fanfics. Gonna read it over, and over, and over.
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From ANON - illuminated on October 14, 2007
neat fic!
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From ANON - ailsam on October 14, 2007
I turned to this site because my normal fanfiction site was acting up. I do not know if your creations are "true" to character as I am not an anime fan, but I do know your story was very beautiful. I also believe that your story is considerably better than most that I read on any website. Have you considered trying this for real and becoming published?
This story got me genuinely involved and I read it through the night (not easy with four children and a full time job as a teacher!) but I just could not put it down.
I look forward to the epilogue.

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From MistressMizu on October 13, 2007
I promised a good, decent review so I'm going to attempt writing a long one. I sincerely apologize for never leaving a really good one. I'm not sure yet what I'm going to write, but I hope that this makes up for everything.

I'm almost surprised this has a happy ending, but for such an epic story I think it was needed. If had ended otherwise, it would seem all was for naught. In fact, when the Void devoured Yue and Touya, I was very frightened that that was indeed the case. I did a double take. But continue reading and hearing Clow as the narrater, and everything seems much more clear. That was a very nice touch, and truly helped to explain things in a fashion which suited the story. It was also a good way to wrap things up; it added a very nice touch, almost like the signature of the artist on a painting. This was years in the making, and I am very proud to know that you made it! It takes incredible perseverence, patience, and focus to get a monster like this written, completed, and with little to no error.

Touya's character changed, but it took an awful lot to change him. No matter what he was always stubborn, right until the very end. I'm glad he let Sakura go. His possesive nature and outright refusal to let her go was beginning to wear on me. I don't think I could ever hate his character though. I don't think I could ever hate any of them. Especially after this story, and reading all emotions, and knowing their reasons for being. You did an excellent job keeping that all in tact, and there were very few breaks in character personality--but that's what real people do. They change, they do things sometimes that seem very unlike them, and they grow from it, which all of them seem to have done. Perhaps if we had seen more of Ralen (not that I wanted to) we would have seen a change out of him too, but it'd be a long time coming. If he hadn't been a part of the story though, many of things which happened wouldn't have, so I'm glad, in part, that he was there. Of course he was the reason behind many unfortunate incidents, but again, things wouldn't have gone the way they did if not for him. Strange that I'm thinking something like "thank you for writing Ralen's character!" after all he did. Yue--obviously he made one of the biggest changes, although in the end, he is still like the moon which needs an earth to revolve around. At least now he gets to be happily in love, and live and mortal life. Afterall, what is the point of living forever if you did not have someone with you? It would be very lonely, and relationships would be meaningless. People like Yue and Sakura need love. Really I'm a firm believer that all people do, but I feel like some need it more than others (I'm probably included in that) and clearly those two need it in their lives... I think I'm getting a little off course here. Sakura... ah, Sakura. She was so meek and helpless in the beginning, but in the end she was able to tell off her brother, even break away from him, punch him... She understood many things she hadn't in the beginning, be it purely emotional or explicit. I'd have to say the same goes to Syaoran in that regard. He wasn't able to hang around women. He was helpless somehow. He gained a reason to use his powers, he was able to hear Sakura, he was able to do so much!

This chapter was a fairly short one, but possibly one of the best. You did not let me down. Not even for an instant. Of course Yue would plunge himself into enemy territory. He knew his own feelings, and he would rather not live with them when his heart was broken... It was incredible timing on Touya's part. I was hoping, hoping so much!, that he would make it in time. I was so nervous that he wouldn't, once he was in Yue's bedroom talking to himself. Thinking, "Idiot, idiot! Can't you tell?!" I almost wanted to slap him, make him wake up and see that Yue was gone and in danger. I had a feeling as soon as we get Syaoran's side that Sakura would be conveying her thoughts to Spirit. Those two were so connected, and just like Touya, Sakura could use and apply her power. Again I was shouting in my mind, wanting Syaoran to see, to hear, to know that she was the one keeping Spirit from moving.

I'm so glad... So, so glad that everything came out the way that it did. It was excellent, and I seriously cannot wait until the epilogue is up. It's been a long, long ride. I'm actually a bit disappointed that it's over, but it's nice to have closure. I really hope this review has made up for all my lacking ones. Oohhh I really hate to be done with it! Here goes nothing...
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