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By : Capitalist
  • From ANON - desperate on April 28, 2005
    PLEASE CONTINUE THIS!!! I want to know what happens to Touya! Please?
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  • From ANON - Mechafrog1 on April 28, 2005
    I can forgive you for killing off Sonomi, but only because I agree with your reason. She’s to emotional to let anyone suffer who she feels doesn’t deserve it.
    Brilliant, by the way. I don’t understand why people don’t make Touya the uke more often. Sure he's over protective and serious, but in the manga he’s always shy. I mean really shy. Yukito is always very much in charge of there relationship. Touya is also very quiet, Despite talking frequently consistently to Sakura.

    I'm amazed at how in character you’ve kept them all. I think Sakura is coming off a little wimpy, but it was fun to see her beat up on Touya. I guess it must be hard because while Sakura is strong she’s actively non-violent and naturally unspiteful. I think if she does see Yue again it would nice to see her get really angry at him. Can you have her say something really nasty to him? Only one comment, but now that she’s forgiven her brother all that anger has got to go somewhere.

    Someone made the comment that she should go black collar eventually. I'd personally love to see that little bomb go off. Especially say, with a certain guard captain, willingly.
    Amusing thoughts come of Sakura getting cross when Touya tries to kill him, Ralin, Yue and everyone in general.


    Cant say much more, where is the rest of your writing? you write good.
    Go go, kiddo

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  • From on April 18, 2005
    I've finally finished your story and now I'm awaiting a new chapter to come up. So far it's great. You have wonderful vocabulary and your story flows! I wish I had vocabulary such as yours, you see, because my vocabulary is very limited. But hey, I can always read more books and listen in English Class. Um, I'll stop with my personal life. Well, I just reviewed you to congratulate you for such a story. Although, I'm not too interested in Yaoi, BUT, that was before I read your story. Now I'm completely crazed for it! Update soon. Oh anyway, is there going to be M/F in here? =)
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  • From ANON - MILHARU KUN on April 14, 2005
    WHEN?????? PLEASE!!!!
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  • From ANON - Kinda guilty for being here on April 10, 2005
    Touya as submissive. I keep looking but there so hard to find, and when I do find one its usualy badly written crud. needless to say, when I found this one I stayed up all night to get up to date. This is the best thing iv'e found on this site do date. Thank you for writng it.
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  • From ANON - Scorpinac on March 30, 2005
    Just more writer's block, I hope? Capitalist *is* still with us, right? He/she didn;t go and die on us, did they? Cause I *really* wann see the next chap.! This suspense is torture....
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  • From ANON - lili on March 25, 2005
    Haven't reviewed in awhile, but it's still very interesting and like Scorpiniac, I'm eager to see how the reconciliation goes. Hope writer's block or computer problems aren't hurting too bad; been checking up everyday to see how it's going. Hope to see the fic at the top of the page soon!

    -lili
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  • From SpiritDancer1 on March 07, 2005
    I absolutely adore this story--it's beautifully written and quite intense. I'm always checking it for updates and am so excited when you do! I can't wait to read the next chapter!
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  • From ANON - Sadoko on March 02, 2005
    If Magnificence was to take words for beauty then this MASTERPIECE was to be a selection in immediate picking. The EMOTIONS, THE FURY, THE RAGE, THE COMPASSION (Tomoya's part illuminated) was much to be appreciated!!!! THE coldness of Yue exceeds yet melts slightly without doubt the revelation to cruelty will have reflections!!!! I sure enjoyed the remnants of Sakura's innocence feeling not stain's hardness, will Li be involved in the blossoming of romance, my apologies in strong if I neglected notices of anything mentioning the inquisition in prior. Yet I marvel still at how the pieces are well in fit!!!! YOU ARE WRITER VINTAGE IN FULLEST!!!! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE!!!!
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  • From ANON - yamijaz on March 01, 2005
    this is wonderfull!!!! please keep updating I love your story^_^ *kisses*
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  • From ANON - Koozle on February 24, 2005
    I don't think I can properly express how much I enjoy this story... n_n It's rare to find really, REALLY good writing in just about any fanfiction, but you, my dear, have not only taken the cake, you've run off and scarfed it down. I'm totally engrossed in your plot so far, and look forward to reading more of your work. Congratulations, and keep up the excellent work!
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  • From ANON - sevenofblades on February 22, 2005
    Hey!! This has been a really good read and I hope you keep writing! I do admit that if I ever got my hands on Yue in this fic I'd see how he'd like it with the roles reversed.
    Please give some form of a heart, I can't stand to see how he treats Touya so callously, like an object. Otherwise I'll start ranting how pointless your story is and demonizing it every other minute (JUST KIDDING!! LOL!!!). Anyways, make ups all happy and put up a new chap soon!
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  • From ANON - xxkurenaixshixx on February 21, 2005
    OMFG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!.....i stumbles upon this fic and DAMNNNNN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!.....
    i freakin LOVE IT!!!!!...an UKE TOUYA!!!!!!@_@....WHAT MORE CAN I ASK FOR!!!!!
    DAMN!!!!!!.....i am sooo loving this YuexTouya thing going on...and that is what
    i am reading this for ^______^.....man all that Touya ANgst......^____^.....

    i dont care what other people say please keep writing YuexTouya....

    i WANT MORE!!!!T____T....i was gonna cry cause it the chapter ended....UPDATE!!!T___T
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  • From ANON - Christina on February 19, 2005
    This is a good story! But please! I want some m/f action...like Syaoran and Sakura! Please! BTW, this is such a beautifully written story! Please continue!
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  • From ANON - raver on February 15, 2005
    well, I'm pleased at the latest pieces of work. a little late, but entertaining nonetheless
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