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By : Capitalist

From ANON - Scorpinac on February 14, 2005
Ooh, a twofer! Works for me! And yes, that is quite satisfactory, my dear. Just glad Ralen didn't "jump in" to join the fun more throroughly. And it really was just a matter of time until Sakura learned the truth, wasn't it? All godd things, etc. Now, if she could just find a way to escape the cage, or at least get some books to read while in there. And as to the back story, makes sense to me. And you're absolutely right, Sonomi Daidoji practically dotes on Tomoyo when she has the time in the normal universe, no WAY she'd just stand by and let her little girl get sold into slavery, no matter how bad the financial situation. And from the sounds of it, that family's, or at least Tomoyo's father is, probably in something akin to "Debtor's" Prison(they used to have those establishments back in the 1800's, and maybe the early 1900's, too. It's my understanding that Charles Dickens's family spent some time in one whilst he grew up elsewhere on the outside[course, that may have bee fanciful story telling, but who knows.].). Well, try not to take too long on 17, ya'hear?! We wanna see the reconciliation! Toodles!
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From ANON - ayachan on February 14, 2005
well.... it's nice to see Tomoyo being so kick-assish.... but.... wow... Ralen is such a pervert.... o_O... i would so tell you to let him die and rot in hell, but if he did, then there would be no conflict on Sakura's part.... bah humbug....hmm... don't know if it's just me or not, but Ch. 15 didn't seem as ... captivating as your story has been so far.. it sounded rushed, but please keep up the good work ^_^ and update soon! your story is just toooo addicting
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From ANON - somnambulating on February 14, 2005
omg ur story sux.. (Is that getting old yet?) I'm done. Really. I feel better now.

"That's pretty much it, if you're in it for the yuri." MY ASS. This chapter made me very happy, and really, only you would have come up with such a scenario. I knew Ralen was a little sicko, but who knew Tomoyo would match wits? It's hard to say who really won, though.

It was nice to see Sakura have some human contact. And I'm glad she understands her brother a little bit more. Their relationship up to this point has lacked any real depth; it's just been "I love you" and "I love you, too" and comfort and bunnies and secret dirty things. But now it's like something finally opened up in Sakura's head and she's realizing that there's an adult world out there. I'd like to say I'm looking forward to seeing Sakura talk to her brother with her newfound revelation, but I have a feeling you're going to prevent that from happening so easily.

In all sincerity, though, never stop writing. You're one of the few good authors out there, and you're the only one who knows how to make Li kick ass in just such a way that makes you feel guilty for liking it. Your stories are also the only ones I don't just skim, I read every word. Especially the Yuri words. More plz, kthx.
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From ANON - somnambulating on February 14, 2005
Whoo, two chapters. Before I forget, I wanted to ask you if you're planning on doing anything about Sakura's birthday? You made kind of an issue out of it waaaay back in chapter one, and then no more. Surely Sakura has had that to think about while she's been chillin' in her cage?
This chapter, coupled with 16 (which I'll review on its own) is a powerpunch, but on its own it is kinda short--even if it's twice the length of my average chapter. I was quite impressed with Sakura's confrontational skills. It was like, bam, take that! I'm hoping this means she'll crawl a little out of her naieve shell of oblivion. I know you've gotten compliments on your interpretation of Sakura here, but, of all your renditions, this is my least favorite. I'm hoping she'll prove herself smart in the long run.
At this point, contact with Syaoran seems so impossibly lost. But I'm sure you have something up your sleeve besides a sexual fetish.

In conclusion, thank you for no Yaoi. *stands alone, kinda like the cheese in that song*
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From ANON - ayachan on February 14, 2005
OMG!!!!! XD YOU UPDATED!!!!!2 CHAPTERS!!!! i'm sooo excited
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From ANON - Kimberly on February 13, 2005
This chapter is really great...I can't wait until you write the rest. But what I do find confusing is the scenes where Li is in...is he going to be more involved later on? Is something gonna happen between him a Sakura? Will Yukito have a part??? But besides that your story is rather interesting and lemony! Which is cool...besides I like it...it's simple but complicated..that doesn't make sense. But I hope that you continue to write PLZ...I don't know how long I can wait for the nest phase of the story! :)
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From ANON - Scorpinac on February 10, 2005
So, having a bit of a breather before giving us chappie 15, are you? Pleas don't tell me you got writer's block right when it was about to get to the good parts! Hope to see an update, and Ralen's demise, soon! Ja'ne!
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From ANON - raver on February 07, 2005
as your 100th reviewer, I must implore you to comtinue your story...it's just getting to the juicy bits (not that it hasn't been there before)
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From on February 06, 2005
I hope that you update really really soon. I have read this story before, and now that i finally have an account on here, I wanted to review. I love the interactions between Touya and Yue. It's really awesome. Very well done. It's quite beautiful the way you have potrayed them. I wonder if you will include Yukito in your great fic? If not that is perfectly fine too, it's perfect just the way it is now. I thank you a million times for making this fic and hope that you update incredably soon.
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From ANON - Azure Snowflakes on January 29, 2005
I like, so love this story. Really, I do. But I do have a question that I must ask. Is it going to be Syaoran and Sakura? At first, when I started reading the story, I thought that YUe would end up giving Sakura to Syaoran for his own use since he brought Sakura to Yue in the first place. But that doesn't seem like it will happen. I can't wait to see what will really happen.
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From ANON - ayachan on January 28, 2005
yeah, but the tomoyo x sakura aspect isn't that bad right? ... since they are second cousins and all... i mean, hasn't it being proven that it's not too bad to marry your second cousin? well, it doesn't matter anyway, since tomoyo and sakura together can't produce children... but... not the point XD
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From ANON - Right then on January 28, 2005
There's a lot of implied incest in CCS, actually. Sonomi loved Nadeshiko, don't forget, and they were cousins. This rendered Tomoyo and Sakura second cousins, and Tomoyo was in love with Sakura.
Then we have Syaoran, who is a descendant of Clow Reed. And Sakura, whose father is a reincarnation of Clow Reed. It's all in the family with CLAMP. There's more, but you can figure that out on your own.
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From ANON - Scorpinac on January 28, 2005
Actually, the only other possible incest coupling that comes readily to mind regarding CCS, at least the normal series, is the Meilin-Syaoran relationship, in that Meilin wants to be Syaoran's wife, despite the fact that they are cousins. And by all accounts, first cousins at that. Fortunately, it was always an unrequited love(Syaoran was clearly uninterested in the idea, but didn't have the heart, or possibly the guts, to tell her.). Ce La Vie.
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From ANON - Scorpinac on January 26, 2005
As far as possible incest goes, Ralen merely commented to Touya at one point that it seemed to his eyes that Touya had more affection for Sakura than a simple brother-sister relationship would normaly entail. This is actually right on line with the original series/universe, in which, on more than one occasion, Yukito would tease Touya by suggesting he had a "sister complex", for which Touya would traditionally threaten Yukito continued health. The most accurate, at least to me, reality of their relationship, though, would probably be that Touya is just a little overprotective due to the loss of their mother(and their father as well, at least in this fic). And in this fic, I think we can honestly say it's probably done more harm than good, considering Sakura's lack of knowledge in the, shall we say, most basic of basic Biology 101?
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From ANON - ayachan on January 25, 2005
incest factor? eww... like as in Touya X Sakura? o_O? lol, well, then again, not really into hentai... but at this moment in time, yeah, i could see Yue forcing Touya to do something like that.... i'm still in shock over the last chapter... and i don't think the story dragged... to me, it was the best part ^_^ lol, but then again, it's the whole guy/girl into yuri/yaoi (respectively) thing, as i have said before
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