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Reviews for Pleasure Slave

By : Capitalist
  • From ANON - Anon-chan on October 22, 2004
    :D But I'm GLAD it's not just a one-shot. You wouldn't believe how often I checked to see when this was updated. You have SUSPENSE, woman. No changey your style now. I won't let you!
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  • From ANON - Rosiesan on October 19, 2004
    GAH!!! No!!! You have to continue!!! You have to! I've been waiting ages for this chapter and noa I don't know if I'll be able to manage waiting for the next one! I'll probably go mad before it comes out...

    Seriously, amazing story. I've been following it for a while and I love the originality of the idea and just basically Yue/Touya always gets me drooling.

    ::DROOL::

    See?

    ~Rosie
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  • From Toraphim on October 19, 2004
    8 chapters well worth their weight. *_* Tiny part of me hopedethiething would come of Yue presenting himself to Touya, but the realistic part was saying, 'nah, don't get your hopes up'.

    ...I like it when that part get's a triumphant finger to the fac_^ *_^ *waves a flag* Here's to more cheering your ficcu on.
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  • From ANON - Scorpinac on October 19, 2004
    No, good muse! Very, very good muse! Is *very*, very good and interesting story! Though, as previously stated, I could do without the Yaoi bits, but at least it hasn't gotten terribly explicit yet. Now, ho Sak Sakura gonna loose her innocence anyway, hmm? I have a couple of thoughts on what could be coming, but I'll wait patiently for the ninth chapter(it can't be *that* far away). I also eagerly await the entry of Meilin, who you did promise was going to eventually turn up. Ja'ne!
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  • From ANON - lili on October 18, 2004
    *grins like a maniac*

    I checked everyday for the update to this story; I thought at one point that since the cover site was down, some people had thought that the main site was down too. I almost gave up. I came up here at the bottom of the 12th inning of the playoffs tonight and immediately converted from baseball fan to giddy fangirl.

    Anyway... UPDATE SOON!

    -lili

    By the way, is this archived anywhere else? ^_^
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  • From ANON - allovernow on October 11, 2004
    Just wanted to tell you how much I enjoy the story. You're doing a great job of conveying emotion: Touya's frustration and loss and Sakura's fear and innocence in a natural way. I think your descriptions are great, and I am anxiously awaiting the first viewing of Lord Yue. Mmm. Yue. Also, do you have anymore fiction, or a personal site?

    Thanks for sharing!
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  • From ANON - Scorpinac on September 28, 2004
    "Nothing can stop us nowe!" They always say that before it all goes to hell... After all, we haven't had any M/F sex yet, or Yaoi(there have been previous comments, including your own, to that effet, though I hope the Yaoi is kept down to a "dull roar", if you know what I mean[if it doesn't have a hot babe involved, anime or otherwise, I'm not interested.]), and, most important of all, we haven't met Meilin yet! And you did say she was going to pop up. Well, eagerly awaiting the eighth chap.! See ya!
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  • From ANON - Shantelle on September 24, 2004
    That was another superb chapter, this story is just so amazing. Please keep up the good work! look foward to your other chapters! Bye! =^.^=
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  • From ANON - lili on September 24, 2004
    *giddiness*

    That was a long chapter. Adored it.

    I checked every day for updates. One week = torture.
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 24, 2004
    Your fic is really good and i'm enjoying reading it. i like the story line it's going along and can't wait for more.
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  • From ANON - somnam on September 23, 2004
    Best line of the chapter:

    "That his own sister was trapped in one was nothing short of bizarre, and briefly he wondered about the tastes of this Yue."

    You have such a way with sardonic comedic relief, I tell you. Anyway, I was hoping or guessing from the title that this would be where Touya finally found her. So yay; I'm happy. Now all that's left is for Yue to snatch him away in yaoi splashes, bwahahaha.

    By the way, this whole story reminds me of that oneshot you did for.. the shrine, was it? Ack, I can't remember the title. It did take place in a small villiage though. The last line was "I'll take them both."

    To reiterate: yay! an update.
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  • From ANON - phay on September 23, 2004
    love it!
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  • From ANON - azn_kitties on September 20, 2004
    Aawwww!! Can u please update soon?? I'd really like to read the rest of 'Pleasure Slave'!! It sounds very interesting but I'm quite sad that Li isn't Sakura's owner! All well I'll just let you write the story. Good story except kind of weird for the Tomoyo and Sakura *ahem* parts.
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  • From ANON - anonymous on September 19, 2004
    Can't wait to read more!!
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  • From ANON - heyy13 on September 19, 2004
    Here are some inspiring words i found under top top ten (10) most motivating things to say to a writer. ^.^

    Write write write write write write write write write write write write write write write write write write write write write write write write write write write write write write write write write write write write write write write write write write write write write write write write write write write write write write write write write write write write write write write write write write write write write write write write write write write write write write write write write write write write write write write write write write write write write write write write write write write write write write write write write write write write write write write write write write write write write write write write write write write write write write write write write write write write write write write write write write write write write write write write write write write write ...

    i think thats enought. ^.^ i hope your motivated. lol. The story is realy good and has a amazing amount of plot for thirt ort of thing. So id realy enjoy it if you did as it says above, and write.

    P.S. Oooooo.... Yaoi is good. ^.^ So i yuri tho. But i dont mind. I want to see the pairings. *pouts* Hope this review was helpfull, and hope you coninue the story. Me.
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