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Reviews for The Black Hawke--NEW FEB 1

By : Lin
  • From ANON - Blonde B-Ball Star on February 17, 2005
    OMG I give up with media miner... this was SOO much easier for me 2 read... and I'm not sure if anyone else has noticed this but every time u click to a link it only shows that you updated till 9 and it bugs the crap outa me... But yes just wanted to say I am making a conscience effort to read and review your story.. its just so good... and I LOVE the new chapter before when I read it I just skimmed the part with Misao but now I actually read, and I have to say their interaction is just so cute.. oh yes and u don't have to add me on a update notifer It's fine.. I find that I check frequently enough for that to be not neccessay. Well thank you for your wonderful story!!!

    Peace...
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  • From ANON - The Last Samurai on February 15, 2005
    Like Sephiress I just hope the people in the A/M group (we're in the same one) don't find out and butcher me...one person is already screaming bloody murder for me reading this....doesn't matter to me... this is a damn good ficcie...Alts pairings aside...
    Keep up the wonderful work!

    bless



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  • From on February 13, 2005
    Gosh! I must say that this has been one hell of a good story! You put everything in its right place, and though some people might say how there's too much hardcore sex even though you posted this at adultfanfiction.net, I don't think there really is too much...you seem to give us a lemon at the right time. Keep up the writing, and if you can, add another chapter soon! I LOVED it!

    -Lizzie-
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  • From ANON - CybrEmly01 on February 11, 2005
    I have been terribly neglectful of late and I'm sorry for it, and
    the reasons behind it.

    I'm in cuddle mode now, that last chapter was so sweet. I'm
    snuggling with a teddy bear. Why? Because I don't have any
    plushies. I'm deprived. Aoshi was so sweet, forgetting about
    dinner and the reservations 'cause Kaoru was smokin'.

    Ignore me, I'm just going to remember that and turn into a pile
    of WAFF-induced mushiness.

    CybrEm
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  • From ANON - Amber on February 10, 2005
    i really love you story i check to see if you wrote anything new every week.
    aoshi and kaoru are a good couple for a storie but a lot of people don't write about them and i've probably read almost all of them.
    this story is so well written that i read it over again just because it's my favorite.
    so thanks for writing this story.
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  • From ANON - AlexaNight on February 10, 2005
    Oh, too fun. Aoshi is just so devilish. And yes he is OOC, but not outrageously so.. There is still something undoubtably him.

    And well...I think you need to get Misao a man. You're just torturing that poor girl! *laughs*

    Alexa
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  • From ANON - MEGASUPER on February 10, 2005
    HALLOO!IM SOOOOOOOOOO HAPPY THAT THE NEXT CHAPTER IS READY!I LOVE IT SO VERY MUCH!ITS FUNNY, ITS INTERESTING AND MANY MANY OTHER THINGS!YOU ARE GREAT!IS AOSHI GOING TO TELL HER THAT HE LOVES HER TOO?IS HE IS HE?????????????CANT WAIT TO FIND OUT!LOVE IS SUCH A NICE FEELING!THATS ONE OF THE REASONS I LOVE YOUR STORY!I KINDA MAKES ME BELIAVE THAT THIS FEELING DOES REALLY EXIST!PLEASE UPDATE THE STORY SOON!GOOD LUCK!
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  • From ANON - Marlingrl on February 10, 2005
    You were thinking about stopping this story? Now that would've been bad. I had no idea. I'm glad Dark Lady Nia reviewed and I feel bad that I haven't reviewed this story sooner. I've been following it, but I've been remiss in not leaving a review. I'm not normally a fan of AU's, but I like the characterizations you've done. They really are superb. I'm curious about the overall plot. I can't see where you're going with it, but that's half the fun, right? Don't lose heart and whatever you do, don't stop the story!!! I'll look forward to the next update. :)
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  • From ANON - mz.amber eyes on February 10, 2005
    awwww... so cute and sweet!!

    but alas, a sense of forboding washes over me, i can't but fear the premonition of a [GASP] kenshin/misao chapter. all the signs are pointing toward it and yes tsuki-san, i and afraid.

    my english class is doing shakespeare these days, can ya tell?

    lol, update soon!!


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  • From ANON - lere on February 09, 2005
    I'm glad you liked the story, sensei. And I'm glad for this chapter too. Think it's because Aoshi is Oc. You know, the original make an odd couple with Misao, with the original Kaoru is more unthinkable, hehe. But your couple is very plausible. Some times I see him like Battousai, and that is what make me believe in the couple.
    The original Aoshi is similar to battousai too, but Kenshin never killled for power, fame or revenge (Like Aoshi in the anime & manga), but he believed in his cause: protect people. And this fact is what I love about your Kenshin in the other story ( Do you want...). He is like the original. I don't like when people create some crazy man who drinks blood for the pleasure and name him Battousai. It's stupid.

    Big hugs my dear friend!

    Lere
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  • From ANON - catti-dono on February 09, 2005
    Laughs....hmmm....added a couple of new characters did we?....wonder who Misao is going to end up now?...did someone cave in to her reviewers?...laughs....wonder who is going to get his pocket picked? New twists, new turns, the fun never ends for our poor RK characters.....catti-dono (I know, I know dialogue, dialogue, dialogue)
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  • From ANON - Nival Rose on February 09, 2005
    Hey! Wonderful job, as always! I check everyday to see this story updated, so reading a new chapter made my week! I can't wait to see what happens next. I love the interaction between Kay and Aoshi...and I am interested to see what happens between Misao and Kenshin. Keep up the great work!
    Until next time!
    Nival Rose
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  • From ANON - Dark Lady Nia on January 23, 2005
    I love this story, and this chapter was funny! Great job and I hope you update soon.
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  • From ANON - Kioki on January 22, 2005
    I need more!!!! Please write more chapters Tsuki-san! I love this story so much. And even Kenshin and Misao fit right into it in the most perfect way!! Way to go with this fic!
    Much love and admiration,
    ~~Kioki :)
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  • From ANON - Kioki on January 22, 2005
    I was about to cry.... Aww... he killed his own father... But it isn't really his fault you know... Poor baby, good thing he has Kaoru. You know, I have never read and Aoshi/ Kaoru fic before. I like them together...
    Keep up the good work, Tsuki-san!
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