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From ANON - Kara on January 14, 2005
x3 omg. your story is sexy.
Post more often.
o-o I command theee. x3
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From ANON - DivinePunishment on January 10, 2005
I don't have much time to say a bunch a stuff (since I'm supposed to be doing research for a report), but I just wanted to leave a review to urge you on.

Hehe, those little arguments between Hiro and Shuichi are so cute to me for some reason...
Believe me, I will keep reading, even if I have to take some time off of what's important. "All work and no play makes jack a dull boy."

I am waiting for Mikka to get her skanky ass on out of the picture...LOL...anyways, nice update.
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From ANON - clarichan on January 10, 2005
lol...i was kind of hoping that tohma kissed hiro but that would be too fast right....i wonder whats going to happen with mika once tohma and hiro get together...i mean thats IF they do u know...and i want yuki and shuichi to meet again already! i want a very juicy chapter with just them too....please...i will be waiting for the next chapter! :D
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From ANON - Haruna on January 10, 2005
THERE'S GONNA B RYU-CHAN APPEARING IN DA NEXT CHAPTER?? HONTO? HONTO HONTO HONTO NI?? YEAH! ALMOST ALL DA CAST R APPEARING SOON NE? NE?

(about Mikka)
for some reason i feel bad for Mikka but then again... at least she get to be fuck by Eiri right? right? all the women Eiri had a relationship with said Eiri is da "sex-god". if not, a certain pink hair brat won't moan and cried dat loud in da re-mix ne? ne? but rilli, i wish next sunday--- or rather monday (in my country's time) come sooooonneererr! i wana know why Eiri still stuck with his "fiance`". is it like Ayaka? an agreement between parents? or becoz of something else?

(about Tatsuha)
OooooooooooooOOOOOoooooooooOoooooooohhhhh~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ since da legendary singer is about to make an appearance next chapter.... WILL U PAIR HIM WITH TAT-CHAN?? WILL U? WILL U? or u wana make a twist turning out to be TohmaXRyu and Hiro and Tat nya ha! ha! ha! ha! i hope Mikka treats tat-chan well... i dunno why i'm saying these but i just hope u wrote Mikka treats Tat-chan well.

(about Hiro and Tohma alone in da room)
�I have to play to release my anger, otherwise I might say something I will regret.� Tohma�s expression was once again his serene fa�ade

woah ~ ~ Tohma is rilli OOC when he's angry. i never expect him to slam his palm on the piano after he raise his voice. i wish i cud see dat since he's potrayed as always smiling and i think his smiles is enough to make that person know what Tohma thinks. If Tohma smile a mocking smile, he's mocking dat person. if Tohma smile a cold smile, that person might felt he won't get away if da president won't let him go. etc.

ooOOOoooooOOOoohhh~ ~ ~ i was hoping da president made a move towards Bad Luck's hottest guitarist but nooooo he just touch his face and walk away... if not Tohma, at least Hiro made the move?

oooohh yeah, its un-Tohma-ish when he yell and cry the abused pillow. if i imagine da real Tohma, he might just calmly walk into his office, lock da door, open his secret cabinet which reveals a half thorn picture of Shuichi on a dartboard full of holes from practices late nights and continue his session expertly as he let loose his frustration to Eiri-san on his mobile ! oh ho ho ho~ ok, i was just kidding.

i mean da real Tohma would maybe went to his office, sit at his comfy chair, swirl around and look outside to the scenery of bz Tokyo. breaking numerous things he could grab on the table.

(Hiro on Maiko)
since Hiro feels 'sour' around Maiko, does dis mean Tohma have a chance? but Hiro said he's not gay... why not just pair da guitarist with da trigger happy manager rite now? but then again i wana read ur version of HiroXTohma fic too...

(about Hiro and Shu and Eiri)
"Love does not discriminate; the heart doesn�t care whether they�re a man or a woman.�

i like what Shuichi said, though it did sound kinda familiar like i have heard dat somewhere... is Shuichi going to be da only uke in ur fic or either Hiro or Tohma will join him in the list. u still haven't answered my previous question, whose gonna be seme and uke in TohmaXHiro? what's da progress between Eiri and his current fascination over a young male singer? does he still listen to the songs and sketches Shuichi's face? i want lemon between Eiri and Shu! i want lemon! i want lemon! hot sweaty arousing mind-fucking passionate bed scene or couch scene between the mangaka and singer!!

oh monday! i just wish today is da day b4 next monday!! sometimes i wana fly to ur place, kidnap all Gravi, espcially Eiri and Hiro plushies u got and strangle u to tell me what's da rest of da story of ur future chapters!!

sorrie if my review dis time is not as long as u wanted but dats all i cud write to review. gomen nasai...

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From ANON - Dana on January 09, 2005
Tohma's losing it... i kind of like that!!
OH i don't like it when Hiro and Shuichi fight...
I hope that soon there'll be a big moving make up scene (pretty please...)
Yay!! Ryuichi's coming!! i hope to see alot of Shu/Ryu friendship it's so sweet!!
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From ANON - TricksterGoddess on January 09, 2005
When are you going to have Tohma and Hiro "DO" somthing together... it's making me impatient, along with Shuichi and Yuki meeting..again. And then I hope that Mikka will catch Shuichi and Yuki together and Mika catch Tohma and Hiro together because that would be really funny to see their reactions and to also get them out of the picture...maybe. Well I'm very anxious about the next chapter coming out, keep up the good work ^__^
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From ANON - Hitomi on January 09, 2005
(Ch. 9)
Ryu's next? Ryuchi's next!! I can guess that he'll help Shu find a more centered, and less self-indulgent, way.
Or maybe Kumaguou will, ne?^^

Excellent chapter! Hurra!
No wonder Shu and Hiro realized what's going on! The way Thoma acted. Damn that bastard for being a meanie! And in the anime, he really did look like he was enjoying throwing Suguru at the BL boys. Really.

I loved what ya did with Shuichi's reveresed Hiro comment to Hiro himself. Brilliant.^^

The scene when Eiri opens the door in beginning... *mouth over-flows with drool*
He was soooo sexy!! I could just totaly imagin it!!!!
Please, give us some hott steamy YukiXShu action!!! :P
Soon!!^^

Wonderful, creative, mind-numbing chapter!!!
Love ya to death,
Until next sunday,
Ja ne~
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From ANON - Haruna on January 04, 2005
"a disgrace"? is that what mama and papa Uesugi really tot of Eiri? honestly... i actually "cried" in my heart when i read that. so i was wrong all these time... i tot mama Uesugi have blonde hair and so Eiri inherited her beauty...

mama Uesugi is still alive? i've never seen da series and only read scanlated Gravi manga up to vol. 6 and i never saw how mama Uesugi look like. all i know dat Eiri had a rough time when he was a kid, all the oba-sans' gossip and wonder whether lil' Eiri-chan is a `half`.... yes... i never tot of what happen between Eiri and his parents before... i only tot Eiri didn't rilli mind them after what happen in NY...

all these tym i tot after da incidence in NY, Eiri moved back to Japan, move out of the temple, live in Tokyo, fuck lots of woman and met Shuichi.

i don't know what to say... it's more than awful if our own parents tot of us as a disgrace... Eiri rilli had a rough time... but the blonde hair and eyes didn't just came in da Uesugi genes just like that! it must have came either by papa or mama Uesugi. i always tot Eiri is more close to mama Uesugi than papa Uesugi but when Tat-chan is born, mama Uesugi died.

Tatsuha must have been pressured. he didn't just need to go to skool be he also have to inherited the family shrine as the head. since Mika already married to Tohma, Eiri in his own world in Tokyo, all papa Uesugi could count for only left Tatsuha.

Thank you for telling me another fact about Yuki Eiri that only God knows when i'll discover it on my own. Murakami-sensei is a yaoi prefessional mangaka, i simply love her work! It really surprise me and the more i wanted to go to Eiri and comfort him.

so! back to ur fic. is Ryu-chan gonna make an appearance?? will you couple him with Tatsuha-kun?? i'm so excited! i wish sunday will come soooner!!
poor Tatsuha, i myself will feel a lot more horrible if my mother yell at me to go away. but i tot papa Uesugi already knew about Tatsuha's "bi", i guess he didn't. it really flow in the family that da memebers have musician partners. Mika with Tohma, Tatsuha with Ryu, Eiri with Shu1. i just can't wait for a hot lemon between da mangaka and singer of bad luck.

i dun think i'll like Mikka Costa. whenever i came across her name, it strangely reminds me of Double Deckers. strange aren't i? i wish she won't touch Eiri any more in ur future chapter, pair her with someone else please... Eiri is only reserve for Shuichi and that's final! oh ho ho ho...

Tohma really didn't like Maiko ne? why did you write her like she did it just to annoy her brother and friend. i fopund dat Shuichi's and Hiro's childhood skool past is cute! it suits them and yup, Shuichi is so typical to do that. i wonder if Tatsuha did da same, he does worship his Sakuma-san right?

will other characters show up soon? like K or Fujisaki, Tohma did mention about a drummer for the band right? no? maybe i got the wrong person.

here's the deal, i can't review as much as i reviewed your last chapter coz u didn't input must 'things' in dis chapter. in ur last chapter i review every moments of it but dis chapter only have about 2 or 3 moments = Tohma with Shuichi and the others & how situation looks like in te temple & Eiri taking Tatsuha with him.

i'm not saying i dun like dis chapter, it's great! but it's not enuf. i want more flashbacks and more detalied things happens. wish u write more in the next instalment. i'm sorry if u dun like dis review but i was trying to be honest. sorry if i offended you.

i understand that lots of authors likes to read good review more than just 4 or 5 lines. they got more encourage and love to write more in their story.

Haruna.

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From ANON - ladygizarme on January 04, 2005
coolzies! i'm so glad you update on such a regular basis... i'd like to but it doesn't seem to work out that way for me... anyway, my fic is IY/YYH-Unexpected Ally- and it's only on fanfiction.net and mediaminer.org... cuz it's prob not gonna get too steamy... eventually i'll prob do Grav, but want to focus on one thing right now so i don't slack off on it... anyway... on to the review! ohhh maiko! way to be the annoying/clueless younger sis... and her proclamations of she and hiro's "relationship/future marriage"... yikes, is that gonna add further drama? and the guys don't know, huh, since she was speaking in english? shu seems to be catching on a bit to the spark between hiro/tohma.... aaah! when will they realize together?? lol about yuki's "confession" nice so now tatsuha's in the picture and soon ryuichi..... is suguru coming in at all?? okay... i think that's all the questions... lol... so, yeah, great chap and see ya at the next one! ^_____^
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From ANON - Dana on January 03, 2005
Wow so I guess we'll be seeing Ryuichi soon I love him!!
I'm a little impatient about Y/S but that's my problem.
By the way I've never really Beta-ed before but i could try if it's fixing spelling mistakes and stuff like that then sure!
I'll send you and e-mail too.
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From ANON - clarichan on January 02, 2005
*kneels down* ONEGAI SHIMASU SENSEI!!!!

there....u promised so u better not! lol...kidding if u must go ahead...*giggle* Yuki is sooo evil. man i really can't wait till he meets shuichi...i hope they meet soon....even if there is no action...:D
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From ANON - TricksterGoddess on January 02, 2005
Thanks for adding me to your emailing list ^__^ I found this chapter to be very funny with Yuki's dad dying because his son that he depended on turned out to be gay, which of course is great! Then Yuki saying that he had sex with guys as well, the finale should have been Tohma confessing, but in front of his wife and her mother might not have been smart if he had done that. Anyways, I am hoping that next Sunday will come fast so that I can read the next chapter to this wonderful story^__^ Keep up the good work!
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From ANON - Deformography on January 02, 2005
Great chapter, really. I was really enjoying myself when Maiko was embaressing Shuichi and Hiroshi infront of Tohma. It all seemed very in character. Also, if you're looking for a beta reader, I'm interested in the offer.
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From ANON - Hitomi on January 02, 2005
(Ch. 8)
Wonderful chapter!
I noticed, when at the shrine, when Eiri started acting really cold, Thoma thought of 'Eiri' as 'Yuki' - something I thought was very profound and in-place. It's very nice to see a writer concise to detail, both knowingly and not.

I hope to see how you'll get to both Yuki/Shu and Thoma/Hiro [a pairing I have yet to see, honestly.]

Maiko.. Gah! What a nag! But I liked her Hiro-comment!=^.^=

And I was wondering how [and if] you'll bring Suguru into the Bad Luck picture.

Anyways! Wonderful chapter!
Can't wait for next sunday!^^

Ja ne~
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From ANON - Hecate18 on January 01, 2005
I finally got the chance to read this1 ^_^
You made me feel a little sorry for Yuki there in the beginning... poor guys really deep in i now! But then he became the asshole again - his father dies and he's suddenly in the 'mood' *laughs* You can't help but luv him though! ^^

Bad Luck are really on the rise, I don't blame Hiro for being suspicious, but I guess from Shuichi's point of view they really should sit back and enjoy the ride. ^_~
The next chap sounds cool! Looking forward!!!

HAPPY NEW YEAR!!!!!
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