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By : Tairyn
  • From ANON - Dana. on December 19, 2004
    This chapter was perfect!!
    I have to say i feel a little bad about Hiro and Shuichi I don't want them to fight *sniff*
    I loved the scenes with Yuki becoming obssesive!!! but why doen't he just ask Tohma to see Shuichi?
    I hope he does next chapter .


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  • From ANON - Hitomi on December 18, 2004
    (Ch. 6)

    Oi! What a wonderful chapter!
    Eiri's reaction to seeing Shu was perfect!^^
    I just wonder.. I do agree with Mika; why would Eiri stay with someone he doesn't love, or even care for? Its not his style, no matter for how long he knew the girl before.

    Also... I'm sorry, but Shu was out of character, back after watching their video with Hiro. I just can't see Shu calling Hiro a "motherfucker". With or without beening pushed to a corner. [Forgetting the fact that he wasn't in the first place.]
    Shu would have most likely comed about it shyly, and poke and Hiro tentivy. He's very strighat forward, yet so deliecate.
    Hiro is his best friend, and most loved person; let us not forget that, ne?

    But this chapter so kicked ass!!^^ I LOVED it!


    Ummm.. I would prefer Sunday mornings for the one fact that its a more grounded time, besides having some random day in the week. ^^


    Hope you get to updating soon, though! No matter what day!^^
    I'm hooked! ^_^U


    Excellent chapter,
    Ja ne~
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  • From ANON - Hitomi on December 13, 2004
    (Ch. 5)

    First time I've read a YukiXTohma lemon and enjoyed it.
    And that, darling, says a lot. [*cough*compliment*cough*]

    I hope you update soon,
    This story really has potential.


    Ja ne~
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  • From ANON - ladygizarme on December 13, 2004
    Yet another awesome chapter! Love the cute little interaction between Hiro and Tohma with Hiro blushing!! ^___^ And the Yuki/Tohma action with Tohma saying Hiro's name.... niiiiiice!!!!! Fics like yours prove you can have an "adult" fic with all the sex we crave and still have a plot in there driving the story.
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  • From ANON - Hecate18 on December 12, 2004
    *Blushes*
    That was hot!!! ^_~
    I'm adoring your character's, they've still got the same personalities but in ways they are completely different people then from the manga's. Tohma/Eiri is a 'very' interesting pairing but I'll definately like to see how Tohma/Hiro develops. ^-^
    I'm looking forward to reading about Yuki in the next chap!!! ^_^
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  • From Haruna on December 12, 2004
    WAAA~~~ I DUN LIKE TOHMAxEIRI!! well, my fic does start with a little of TohmaXEiri BUT THAT'S NOT MY POINT! I HOPE DIS IS DA LAST LEMON BETWEEN EIRI AND TOHMA! EIRI IS SHU1'S PROPERTY AND SHU1 IS EIRI'S PROPERTY! MUAH AH AH AH LONG LIVE EIRIxSHUICHI!! LONG LIVE EIRIxSHUICHI!! man... ever since i read your fic even i got attracted to Hiro. (hides Hiro pics under the bed)
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  • From ANON - dntfckwifme on December 12, 2004
    -squeak- Yuki and Tohma? I think m'gunna throw up. O.o Gimme Yuki/Shuichi!! -throws a teddy at- and the next chapter is all bout Yuki, huh? -can't wait- ^^;; loving this. Awesome writer needs to update an soon!
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  • From ANON - Dana on December 12, 2004
    That was a really hot scene between Eiri and Tohma and i usually avoid this pairing.
    surprisingly,it was very easy to picture Tohma wearing a Metallica shirt and ripped jeans.
    I can't wait until next chapter!!!
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  • From ANON - clarichan on December 11, 2004
    O.O i can tell u now that i'm interested. Very interested. I hope that u update soon. I am really enjoying this. :D
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  • From ANON - Hecate18 on December 08, 2004
    Hi! It's been a while hasn't it? I've recently become obsessed with Gravitation and I stumbled upon this fic, so this is the first official Grav-fanfic I've read. ^_^
    It's different, but in a good way, each chap left me wanting to read more, I like the way you've developed the plot, as well as the character's without making them OOC. I am looking forward to the next chap! ^^

    ~Hecate18~
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  • From ANON - ladygizarme on December 08, 2004
    hey, just wanted to say i love this story! you write very well and your story seems very well thought out, which is very much appreciated. can't wait for more!
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  • From ANON - Dana on December 07, 2004
    Great chapter! I liked that bit about Tatshua and that cute "lovers quarrel" between Hiro and Shuichi.
    By the way i think it will be good if you include ASK in your fic,at least for a bit, don't dismiss them so quickly, because even though they're bastards and, like many others, i don't like them, the rivalry between the bands is a big part of the whole story not to mention the rising of Bad Luck.
    please update soon i can't wait for next chapter
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  • From ANON - dntfckwifme on December 07, 2004
    -points- Hitomi! Small world! o.o But yush! Ya fic. -noddles- 'tis awesome, well enjoying it. ~adored~ this chapter, was yums. Can't wait to see what happens at deh club! -grins- update soon! I await it!
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  • From ANON - Lillian on December 02, 2004
    really cool story! i can't wait for the future chapters! =P Please keep updating till the end. ^_^
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  • From ANON - Hitomi on December 02, 2004
    O.O
    I'm stunned.

    I HAVE TO read more.

    Please update soon!



    Ja ne~
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