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Reviews for Break Through

By : Tairyn
  • From ANON - TricksterGoddess on April 27, 2005
    FINALLY, took you long enough to update^__~ wonderful enticing chapter! How much longer is it going to take for Yuki and Shuichi to get back together again for another schweet lemon scene? Well, a lime would be nice as well^^ Please update SOON. Keep up the good work^__^!!!
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  • From ANON - Serenity Celebithil Hikari Cosmos on April 27, 2005
    I absolutely love your story! THE DRAMA! IT'S AMAZING! Please update as soon as you can or I will hunt you down and kick your ass!
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  • From ANON - Hitomi on April 27, 2005
    (Ch. 14)
    Took you WAY too long to update! Please, quicker updates!^^

    A few grammar mistakes. I'm serious, you need a good beta! You can turn to aff.net's Yahoo Beta Group! They will gladly lend you a hand or two over there.^_^

    Besides the few mistakes here and there, an excellent angst-ridden chapter!! The flashback was oh-so-dramatic! I'm happy.^_^
    More jealous Yuki, please! XDD


    Until the next,
    Which will come quicker than the last time, right?!
    Ja ne~
    ^_^

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  • From ANON - Kate-chan on March 03, 2005
    OMIGOD!!!! LOL, ok, I have read all 13 chapters and I CANT WAIT till you update more!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Lulu on February 26, 2005
    I have read Triangle and Break Through.
    As you know anime is very popular and there are alot of bad fanfiction writers out there,
    so I'm glad that I found your stories.
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  • From ANON - Hitomi on February 23, 2005
    (Ch. 13)
    It felt a little rushed; the scenes mashed together in a not-so-lovely way. Take you scenes a little slower, and remember to stick to a certain POV at a time.

    "Tohma’s wavy hair" Tohma has wavy hair? Well, my manga and anime say otherwise. Please, gather your facts beforehand.

    For an un-beta-ed chapter you did very well!^^
    Excellent storyline! I can't wait for Shu and Yuki's confritation!!!

    Until teh next,
    Ja ne~
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  • From ANON - Dana on February 22, 2005
    Poor Suguru... I hope Tatsuha'll notice him.
    Tatsuha's such an idiot! I can't wait for the fight between him and yuki.
    I have to say I really liked Mikka's flashbacks. It made me feel so bad for her.
    I'm assuming Yuki's significant other was Tohma.
    By the way,my offer to beta for you still stands.

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  • From ANON - clarichan on February 21, 2005
    gah!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    *clears throat* oh boy...i can see where this is going to go? can't wait for the next chappy...please continue soon :D
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  • From ANON - TricksterGoddess on February 21, 2005
    Oh dear god, can you say cat fight in the near future? Sheesh you ARE evil, but of course in a good way ^^ I wonder what Eiri's real reaction was deep down; Shock? Betrayal? Jealousy? Disappointment? Complete and utter anger, not only towards his brother but towards himself? This should be fun, as always can't wait until the next chapter comes out and keep up the good work^__^!!!
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  • From ANON - DivinePunishment on February 17, 2005
    I'm going to keep this concise. Wow, assy Eiri has reared his "ugly" head. :( Poor Shuichi.
    Tatsuha mischief you say? Oh la la, I will surely be there to read it.
    Of course, I'll leave you with a compliment regarding your ability to keep me interested for 11 chapters.
    ^ Hope that compensates for that compliment.
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  • From ANON - Christy on February 16, 2005
    EEEEEEE! Comes my loud fangirl squeal. I love the fic. Please continue and update it soon :)
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  • From ANON - Lillian on February 16, 2005
    I'm wuvin' every minute of this story! please continue writing it. there's nothing worse than a good story hangin' with no banana-end ..*sniff-sniff* but i can understand how life can get in the way, *boo-hoo*. i also like how you stick to your guns with the pacing of this story. k-san would be so proud, he-he-he
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  • From ANON - clowangel on February 15, 2005
    Absolutely beautiful. Write more soon. ^^
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  • From ANON - ran on February 15, 2005
    I liked it. But i'd also like to kick Yuki's ass for being so freaking mean to poor shu-chan. Sad very sad neh! Please keep writing can't wait to read the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - TricksterGoddess on February 15, 2005
    Oh that was wonderful, it was worth the wait^^ I kind of figured that Yuki would put on the cold shoulder act but oh well. Can't wait till next chapter.. Keep up the good work^__^!!!
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