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By : Tairyn
  • From ANON - Dana on January 23, 2005
    OMG *fans herself* so HOT both lemons rocked!!
    *pouts* i like Fruits Basket...
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  • From ANON - New dude on January 23, 2005
    Hey!!I've been reading your story for a couple days and i have to say that this story is awesome!I love the fluff and the male relationships!!OMG you have to update!!!!your the greatest!!!pls update soon!!!
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  • From ANON - TricksterGoddess on January 23, 2005
    OMG, that was wonderful!!! I am so happy that they finally did it and am happy that Shuichi's and Yuki's night is not over just yet, and I can't wait for that chapter to come out. How long will a couple of weeks be? Every Sunday is the highlight of my week since I began reading your story, please don't take too long, but I guess it's ok cause the semester for me is finally over tomorrow and I can breath again with less stress if you know what I mean. Once again this chapter was awesome and I had to shove my fist in my mouth to stop myself from making too much noise during my hyperventilation of Shuichi hugging Yuki, and it takes a lot to get me to get that excited, so congrats, and keep up the good work for I'm am anticipating the next chapter as always^__^
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  • From ANON - Hitomi on January 23, 2005
    (Ch. 11)
    I'm a little... dissapointed for two reasons; one, you could see it was rushed, both in the writing and in the beta-ing. A lot of mis-spells and many repeats of expressions and wordings, that if avoided, could have enhanced the chapter. The second reason is the lack of answer to my review, but hopefully that will be dealt with in the next Mikka-oriented chapter.

    All in all it was a great chapter, and I hope that when you'll have the time, you'll go over it with your beta and fix the errors I mentioned.

    Hope to see more from you soon,
    Ja ne~
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  • From ANON - clarichan on January 23, 2005
    OMG! OH MY FREAKING GOD!!! This chapter was exactly what i wanted! I love Shu and Eiri pairings!! Well at least i know we have something in common. I love angsty fics, Yuki/ Shu pairings the most, Highschool fics....there are so much more but i guess those three are enough :D
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  • From ANON - DivinePunishment on January 23, 2005
    :) :D Wowee! That was the best chapter yet (not just because of the sex). Well, what can I say? It was extraordinary. I am so excited about the impending drama!
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 21, 2005
    all that tension i can't wait until the lemons!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - ladygizarme on January 20, 2005
    awww yeah! another great 2 chaps (i can't believe it's been 2 weeks since i checked up on gravfics!! shame on me!) everything's coming together nicely and i'm happy you have su-kun in there now... and that line about shuichi having his period was classic!! ^____^ aaaaah! and ryuichi!! whooooohoooo!! *does happy dance* and yuki finally came out w/his crush to someone.. and of course that someone was tohma(who else would it be,ne?) ah, i can't wait for the next one!!!
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  • From ANON - DivinePunishment on January 17, 2005
    I like Tohma's little game. I think the one being the brat is the Bad Luck gang. They have to be ready for some rivalry.
    Anyway, oooh, Eiri and Shuichi meet? Finally? You mean it? You had better not be pulling my leg, or I will, uh...rip your arms off and beat you with them? :o (kidding, kidding).
    Hah, I hope they don't get it on when they first meet. That would be a little wacky (not saying I'd mind too much ;)
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  • From ANON - clarichan on January 17, 2005
    sugoi! I know that finally after this chapter some action between Shuichi and Yuki right am i right....*giggle* Please continue soon! I'm loving it! :D
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  • From ANON - Haruna on January 17, 2005
    ugh, i feel like i wana tore something when i read the part Tohma stradle Eiri-sama, i was like DA AUTHOR PORMISE THERE'S NO MORE LEMON BETWEEN EIRI AND TOHMA!!! but i'm glad u didn't. RYU WAS SO KAWAI-YEEE~ ~ ~ ~ when is he gonna meet wish Tats? PLEEEZZZ PLEEZZ PLEEEEZZ no TatXMikka pleeezz~~ it feels... i dunno, out of topic for a Gravi fic. So! I WISH EIRI FUCK SHU NEXT CHAPTER!!! or atleast molest da bubbleguim headed teen. ooh ooh, finally Hiro and Shu became more closer after their fist fight huh? u should make them fight more often but pleez dun go to far or else Tohma-san will do something more than playing the keyboard to loose his temper. we dun wan Hiro's silky long hair and creamy skin to be damage right? right~

    Ryu has brown eyes?? i tot he has blue... i think. becoz i've never seen the series so i only saw the screen caps. God_side Ryu1 is goddamn gorgeous.... no wonder Tats always worship him as much as we woship Hiro-sama... WHEN WILL TOHMA MAKE A MOVE OVER HIRO??? we want lemon! we want lemon! but first give us hot steamy passionate wild sex/fuck between a certain mangaka and Bad Luck's frontman first >0
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  • From ANON - Dana on January 17, 2005
    Ryuichi is so cute!!!! OMG i can't wait ti'll next chapter!!!
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  • From ANON - TricksterGoddess on January 16, 2005
    OMG your KILLING me, I need to know what happens, Yuki and Shuichi better get somewhere next chapter or I'm going to rip out my hair in frustration... other than that twas a very good chapter and keep up the good work and TORTURING ME TO THE POINT OF INSANITY!!!^__^
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  • From ANON - Hitomi on January 16, 2005
    (Ch. 10)
    Awsome! Thoma's pricking the boy's nervs just to get into Hiro's vein. And pants. XD
    Shu met Ryu, and I loved how you dulled it a little by Shu's diversion to Eiri, so that Shu wouldn't be too overwhelemed by his singing idol.

    Poor Mikka, she's the only one not gonna get a stinch of attention, 'cause she's a BYATCH! XP
    Though you still haven't explained WHY Mikka and Eiri were together in the first place? Arranged marriage only Mikka wanted? And if so, why didn't you use an already existing character? (I.E Ayaka)

    I hope in the next chapter Shu and Eiri will not fuck, but that there will be soooooooooo much pent up sexual frustration on both sides that Eiri will try to. I love it when he just tries to land in Shu's pants. ^.~


    This chapter was totaly awsome! I love evil Thoma! He desireves a nice long hard fuck with Hiro-chan. ^.~


    Until the next kick-ass chapter,
    [I LOVE YOU!!!!!!!!!]
    Ja ne~
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  • From ANON - OrangeJuice on January 16, 2005
    I really enjoyed this Chapter 10. You really are getting good at writing the characters' emotions in a way that isn't distracting; When Shuichi wanted to cry, I wanted to cry too. I loved that part. Keep up the good work; I can't wait until next chapter!
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