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Reviews for Battle Lines Crossed

By : Zerianyu
  • From ANON - Valkyrie on December 19, 2005
    VERY good! I love it!!! Eeee! Damn, those men make me mad! It's a good thing she can kick their asses now. Except when they all gang up on her. T_T Poor, sweet Misao! She's my favorite! And the flashback made me want to cry. Her mother's bracelet was an excellent touch. And the way she tackled Aoshi was priceless. You truely capture her spirit. I hope Aoshi learned something from that training session. It was hillarious! No touchie the Misao! (Yet! *snicker!*) Well, I hope so, at least. I also hope she gets revenge on those bastards that treated her so badly and realizes that the people she is with now will care about her and become like the loving family she never had. But how about the safety of her little sister. My intuition tells me our Misao's going to have quite a dillema on her hands! So keep writing! This story is excellent! I can't wait for the next chapter!
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  • From ANON - yue on November 08, 2005
    ohhh. this is interesting. misao is pretty serious in this fic but its expected with her history. ihope to read mroe soon.
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  • From ANON - Ren on November 07, 2005
    I just wanted to firstly thank you SOOO much for giving me something to read, especially my favorite PAIRING!! ^_^ Well...great story, tee hee, keep it up!! ^_^
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  • From ANON - Excellent on February 04, 2005
    Excellent potential to be a great fic! Do carry on!
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  • From ANON - jAX on January 09, 2005
    Lol. I am reading it. and i do like it so keep right on at it!
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  • From ANON - anubis on January 09, 2005
    Interesting fic, lots of potential, like the idea... just careful with the spelling and grammar mistakes there arn't too many it's just distracting. Keep up with the good work, Anubis
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  • From ANON - sonia on January 09, 2005
    hi, i liked it but dont like the fact that misao will try to kill Aoshi. ok whatever, im waiting for them to be together. update soon.
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  • From ANON - jAX on January 08, 2005
    This could be a great fic if you continue it. good job
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