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Reviews for Grand Theft Auto: Nerima

By : Kyva
  • From ANON - Scorpinac on October 11, 2005
    Actually, I thought your grammar was pretty good, really. Just a few minor errors here and there. I'm American, born and bred, and have written some fics myself, two are at FF.net now under the screenname above if you want to look, and I wouldn't mind Betaing for you(and getting a sneak peak at the remaining chaps.!).
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  • From ANON - Scorpinac on October 11, 2005
    Ooh, well done, sir! Very well played! I wonder what Mr. 982 has to say? COuld it be Jasper's already back? Or maybe he knows the name of the man who killed Mousse's and Shampoo's child? Ooh, the suspense! Don't dawdle now, we want the answer ASAP! Laters!
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  • From Kyva on October 06, 2005
    Yo! I'm thanking everyone for all the kick ass reviews, and thanking you all for kicking my ass to get chapters up. However it's time for business. My grammer sucks and I need a beta tester/reader what ever the hell you call those people that read your chapter and after finding all your mistakes, smack you with a rolled up newspaper and say "Bad!" Any takers? I'll only accept people who party hard and have a reasonable grasp of the english language.
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  • From ANON - Beccapatty on October 06, 2005
    once again another amazing chappy! i can't wait to see what ya got up yer sleave next! :) keep up the super work! i've been checking for ur updates daily! :)
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  • From ANON - Scorpinac on October 05, 2005
    Nice to see Ukyo up an about, and no, I don't think it's wrong that she still loves him. After all, she was unconscious when Ryoga did what he did, so she still has to absorb it all. As for Ryoga himself, if he is currently at the Jade Garden, I almost pity him. Laters!
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  • From ANON - Scorpinac on September 30, 2005
    To paraphrase Fairly Oddparents, "Welcome to the corner of Pay and Back, @$$#o!#$!!! Let the vengeance begin! And somehow, I doubt Akane didn't keep her gun down or the safety on in this little melee, she's as pissed as anyone else, after all! Laters!
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  • From ANON - beccapatty on September 28, 2005
    lol just thought id add another review..for that one reviewer---> trust me if i had the talent that this author did id be writing billions of stories! hehe and im not saying nuttin bad about the story anyways i was jus expressing my opinion about my favorite Ranma pairing.. i'll be happy and love this story no matter what happens.. Im jus glad theres still some ppl out there who like ranma and are writing fanfics.. its harder to find fanfics, or chatrooms, or jus anythin ranma now adays sinces its been completed for awhileee and its older.. which really sux cuz i jus found out about Ranma last christmas.. my aunt got me the wrong anime (i had been a big INuyasha fan she got me ranma 1/2 episodes 1-14 on vhs) at first i was upset but after i watched those 14 episodes i was addicted hehe :) and i bought all the episodes on Dvd and the Ovas on Dvd and the movies lol.. and ive watched em all sooooooo good! :) hehe Rumiko Takahashi is such a good anime person lol.. anyways as for this fanfic.. its the best One ive ever read and im really glad u continue to update! :)
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  • From ANON - beccapatty on September 28, 2005
    AWESOME AWESOME AWESOME! I cant wait till yer next chappy.. I hope u put Akane and Ranma together in the end.. it'd be really nice.. since he loved her for so long but never admitted it to her and shes always loved him.. ahhh and now Shampoo and Mousse are together so ya don't have to worry bout her.. this is like the ultimate Climax chapter! lol ;) very nicely written I love it! :) plzzz keep up the excellent work and update soon!
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  • From ANON - MrMagee on September 28, 2005
    Another terrific, beautifully thought up chapter! Another uplifting addition that shows the bad guys losing power, and the good guys finding their strength again. Again, the music proved to improve the setting of the story. Keep up the good work! And as far as your last reviewer, don't worry about it, just do things your way, it's worked so far! If you want something to happen so much, go write a story about it! :-)
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  • From ANON - beccapatty on September 20, 2005
    awessommmmeee!! but seriously u gotta make it so Akane and Ranma end up together in the end.. like since Ranma's really loved her all alongg and of course Akane has loved him always.. like she could be the one who would never turn him in and like maybe she jumps in front of a bullet for ranma! that'd be awesome as long as they both live! id be really upset if she or he died lol plzz keep em alive! anyways keep up the excellent work and plzzz update soon! :)
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  • From ANON - Mr. Magee on September 20, 2005
    Wow, very good chapter! This story continues to impress me with each addition.

    Ranma has to remember though, it's not his fault that the city is like this, he just sped up the process.
    It is good to see a little of the old Ranma back though. And I like the cameo of Tommy Verceti, he's the man ;-)
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  • From ANON - Scorpinac on September 19, 2005
    Alright, she's okay! Now, we just need to save Ukyo, kill Japser aand all of his men, and get Nerima back from the darkness! Okay, okay, tall order, I know. And I'm guessing next time we get to find out more of what's happened to everyone since he left originally, and then what happened while he was mostly dead? Well, when you're ready sir! Laters!
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  • From ANON - Scorpinac on September 13, 2005
    Let this be a lesson, children - don't do drugs!!! Hmm, Happosai, wasn't expecting him to still be anywhere near Nerima after Ranma's initial departure, and definitely not after his "death". Next chunk should be interesting. Laters!
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  • From ANON - Mr. Magee on September 02, 2005
    I'm thoroughly impressed with your skills as a writer, and personally could not stop reading this story; in fact, I'm now pained by having to wait for more chapters. You blended a Ranma and Grand Theft Auto theme together nicely, not using *too* much from GTA, and it's a completely different Ranma as well. Keep up the good work!
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  • From RMW on August 31, 2005
    Bloody amazing new chappy. Krauser, you are one fucking talented writer. That Jasper bastard! Beating up pregnant Shampoo then taking her baby and killing it...!!!
    Glad Ranma is gonna pop his ass. As for Sheela...pobrecita! I didn't like her for Ranma, but still, she didn't deserve to die.
    I admire and envy (in a good way) your writing skills. I don't agree with your...negative...view of life. But eh, you're still a great person.


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