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Reviews for Fallen Neko

By : stormyluck
  • From ANON - Talia on July 06, 2005
    Your 7th chapter is the same as your 6th. I can't wait to see what happens and I can't wait for the realI 7th chapter.

    Talia
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  • From ANON - Megami_Layla on June 24, 2005
    Oh gosh. I swear I feel like my heart has shattered reading just those first five parts of the story. I hope that Kyou wakes up, even if he is different. Update soon.
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  • From USuki on June 22, 2005
    Hmm, sounds like something I wrote once (but never finished!!!) Except it was Yuki who fell and Tohru who felt guilty. Anyway, I likey, save for a few spelling and grammer errors (and some making up of words) but that's OK, we all do that. (I say that right after I make up the word 'likey') Oh right, and one other criticism... the whole "5%" thing. You don't have to repeat things like that for every character, you can elude as to what was said and it will likely be more effective. (please don't take offense, I always try to write some constructive criticism, I like it when people criticize me) Otherwise, I'm really enjoying (is that the right word?) this fic. The first chapter was particularly amazing. I also liked your description of Kyo's fall. Very insightful. Poor Haru! I hope to see updates soon!
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  • From ANON - ky0kichi on June 20, 2005
    Ghhhhh! x____x -CRIES- oh the angst...bUT..i LOVE THE ANGST...yET...RAH what's gona happen! If Kyo gets stuck the way he is then he'd just want to kill himself again! >___
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  • From ANON - xangelofdeath on June 19, 2005
    noooo kyo omg this was soo sad i almost started to cry! is kyo going to die?


    loving ur story keep up the good work!!!
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  • From ANON - lady_kail on June 19, 2005
    Wahhhhhh! I got through half a pack of tissues reading that latest chapter!
    I really like the story, but PLEASE make us smile! Onegaishimasu!
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  • From ANON - kyoslover on June 18, 2005
    oh my gosh! that was such a heart wrenching chapter! You are a very good author i sure as hell could never write anything like that. I like how Haru explained to Shigure that Kyo actually liked him. i just liked that entire part. and how you show how everyone realizes how much they took Kyo forgranted and how they never took the time to get to know him. very good chapter! please update asap!
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  • From ANON - ky0kichi on June 18, 2005
    Blah!!!!! -whimper- that sucks! I dont know what I want to happen! I can't bare it if Kyo dies..But also it sucks if he's not himself too :(((((( WAHHH

    Great fic though..It has me on the edge of my seat >___
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  • From ANON - crystal on June 17, 2005
    Awwww this is written really well~! Absolutely love it so far, poor kyou.. i hope he'll be better than that. I hope to see some kyouke in the future maybe? @__@ [kyou as uke??] Will be waiting for more, keep writing!
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  • From ANON - kiersten on June 16, 2005
    Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh! you must let Kyo live!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! love it update asap
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  • From ANON - BakaDen on June 16, 2005
    urk. '_' ... That's so unbelievably sad. 5%? ... 5?! *hugs Kyo plush* Oh why Kyo! Oh why oh why indeed! Anyway, that's very interesting. I had no idea Haru had already confessed some amount of feelings towards Kyo, unless it was hinted at somewhere and it completely flew over my head. But if I remember right Kyo said there was no reason to go on living... does that mean he didn't believe in what Haru had to say? waah! This is so sad! I love this fic, please update soon. I hope he makes it through the night... and I hope Haru stops kill himself over it so much. A dead neko AND ushi wouldn't be so good for my poor heart.^_^

    -BDen
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  • From ANON - kyou on June 15, 2005
    wow update soon
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  • From on June 14, 2005
    I love your story sorry about the last reveiw I was just overly excited. Is that a word well never mind. Your story rox. Really I love it please update soon. *Sits and stares at the computer until then*
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  • From ANON - BakaDen on June 12, 2005

    Aw, poor Kyo, poor Haru...

    Well, I haven't much to say besides that except lovely chapter and please update soon.^^ Oh, and I pray they encounter no women doctors or nurses, however improbable that may seem. At any rate, it is a wish.^_^ They already have enough problems... Anyhow, nice job, I can't wait for your next chapter!

    -BDen
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  • From ANON - lady_kail on June 11, 2005
    Phewwww! I knew he couldn't die, but that was close.
    I await eagerly for the next chapter!
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