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Reviews for one night in da toilet

By : Haruna
  • From Ayeshagirl on August 15, 2005
    it made me laugh
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  • From ANON - elf on June 13, 2005
    Look, this was funny and all but way over done... please, next time, think of something more original.

    Also, and I don't like flamers and I'm not just randomly attacking you like your first two reviews on this, but your vocabulary and grammer make the story very difficult to read. They make the story less enjoyable to read... so please work on it, because I would love to read more.
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  • From FuKouHei on June 13, 2005
    To no name and pathetic:

    Screw you.

    To Haruna Hakkai: One of my fave Gravi-authors

    Awesome! LOL! I loved it! Poor Eiri his hair got stuck in the zipper. I did notice errors, but that's okay. I understand English isn't your first language and I think you do really good with it. If you want, I'd be glad to be your beta, but I'll undersatnd if you want to earn the respect of your readers without one.

    Keep on writing! Don't let those stupid flamers discourage you! Listen to Ren! ^^
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  • From ANON - pathetic on June 11, 2005
    I don't read stories where the summary has so many misspelled words and a severe lack of punctuation, grammar and capitalization.
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  • From ANON - no name on June 11, 2005
    It is crap. Why did you waste your time?. Don't give up uur day job ,or, by the sounds of it...elementary school
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