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Reviews for Keitaro\'s revenge

By : megler
  • From Killerman83ca on November 02, 2007
    I have read your story and I would like to know what happens next so can you please update soon.
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  • From Killerman83ca on October 26, 2007
    Please update soon. I would like to know what will happen next.
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  • From ANON - Pain on August 18, 2006
    Great story... waiting for chp 2.....

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  • From ANON - dancingflames on July 13, 2006
    LOL This is funny I love fics where Keitaro gets revenge on the girls. I mean come on they fucking kick the shit out of him without even getting all the facts. They are constantly using and abusing him. Please please continue.
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  • From ANON - imak on December 13, 2005
    Write another chapter damn it!
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  • From ANON - armydude on September 16, 2005
    You really should check into the chareters a little better as it is Motoko that is the Kendoist and Mitsuni that is well endowed. Also what with the situation that you are placing the girls in you might want to have a better reason then he got them out of trouble. Maybe rescuing them from harm while getting hurt in the process. Possibly a stay in the hospital for the immortal Keitaro seeing as how, what with the abuse he normally undergoes would kill lesser mortals. Something like really getting hurt could cause them to realize just how much they need him and NOT the other way around. Other then that keep it coming!
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  • From ANON - Kinnara on August 03, 2005
    ...*speechless, cuz I enjoyed the story*
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  • From ANON - Guy on July 30, 2005
    You got the names all screwed up Mitsune (Nicknamed Kitsune) is the alchoholic writer with the good body. Motoko is the swordswoman who wears a kendo garb.
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  • From Mic123 on June 29, 2005
    LOL Very good so far, keep it up, too good to let it stay as is, want another chapter up soon
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  • From ANON - Shard on June 28, 2005
    I like what you've done here and I hope to see more of your writing.
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  • From ANON - Duran on June 28, 2005
    Well nice... but Mitsune (aka Kitsune) isn't so bad tempered... and her breasts are among the largest of the LH cast.
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  • From ANON - Shadowknight on June 27, 2005
    Nice start to what looks like one of the better Love Hina fics.
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  • From ANON - naruto-fanfic on June 26, 2005
    whell this is interesting cant wait to read the next chapter
    wasent kitsune the one who tried to suduce keiterou in the first chapter. leting him cop a feel and all


    email me when you update k
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