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Reviews for A Mangled Affair

By : loche606
  • From ladygizarme on October 18, 2005
    yay, i loved this chapter toooooo, especially the ryu/shuu fluff (of course :p) and ryuichi's telling shuu i love you in all those languages *so sweet* and esp the vulcan lol!! but the random suguru scene was shibby too lol, i can just *see* him gettin a chill over touma scheming heheh and of course you know i *love* his cocky eyebrow! and then to have it all come back to touma even planning THIS part of it nyahaa!! it's perfect! and it's sweet that you added the lil bit of touma wondering bitterly when the last time he and mika'd slept together was.. lil bit to remind us that somewhere within that tasty scheming body there actually IS a heart :p i can't wait for you to write the next one ren!! *glomps and begs with pooly eyes*

    love ya, praise ryoma (and, yes, tezzie of course... and fuji ^_~)
    mada mada dane,
    crys

    oh yeah, we up'd both our gravifics the same day lol, how's that for awesome
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  • From Houseki on October 18, 2005
    Doooood!!! Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww I love mah Shuuuuu!!!!!!!!!! woooot hehe I so love Ryu and Shu's interaction, tis too kawaii man. I can't believe Touma sucked Yuki off!! Ahhh! lol Crazyness! Story is getting very very interesting ^___~ Get that next chap out girl! Can't wait to read it! Love ya!

    Nic
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  • From Ashcat on October 16, 2005
    chpt 2: Woah.. interesting to say the least! So now Yuki loves him.. but he had to abuse and rape him? Sigh.. him and Shu both fucked up! Maybe they can work it out... without Ryu and tohma's "help"... Can't wait for the next chapter - please update soon!
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  • From ANON - Anon on October 15, 2005
    can u explain what really happened? did i miss it?
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  • From ANON - ladygizarme on October 15, 2005
    lol dude, i take full credit for the inclusion of ryu/shuu fluff!! wooot, it was so sweet *poolyhearteyes* and of course you know i loved the squirrel attack part heheheh (you better know, you HEARD me laugh :p) and damn dude, hotness and you knew i wanted yuki/touma too, but you didn't give touma ANY lol, yuki got off though heehee, evil fic-ka you >:) that was great!! gahhhhhh i can't wait for the next one.. i really wonder what you're gonna do cuz damn ryu's just so loving to shuu!! but yuki all realized he really does love him, despite it all, and that's sweet to... so damn i'm all torn on what i want to happen lol, so you need to WRITE it so i don't hafta worrrrrry anymore haha *glomps you*
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  • From ANON - Diety on October 11, 2005
    Wow, that was amazing. I can't wait to read more and see what happens.
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  • From ANON - Nakazaki on October 10, 2005
    Awsome fic~! please update soon, dying to find out what Yuki will do
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  • From ANON - Houseki on October 10, 2005
    *glomps mah ren* ooooh!! Dood that was an excellent chapter! So glad you are continuing this, and I wonder what you've got up ur sleeve next! Mean ol' Yuki! Gah, hate mahself haha But I hope you make me a nicer person lata, ne? Ne?! I liked when Yuki told Shuu that he would get to see what it was like to be powerless....but if you think about their relationship, Shuu is always powerless *sigh* poor Shuu!! lol ok I'm just rambling :p Time to put up chap three chica! ^___~ Taz, Ryo, and Fuji forever! Mada mada dane!

    Love,
    Nic
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  • From ANON - kagomegirl on October 10, 2005
    wow heavy stuff update soon.
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  • From ANON - Dawn on October 09, 2005
    I Luv you.......thank you so much for continuing this story......please update quickly.
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  • From ANON - Pandorazellas on October 09, 2005
    Yay! Ryu-chan to the rescue! Can't wait to see what Yuki's reaction is going to be ^_^ Keep up the good work
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  • From ANON - eve shindou on October 09, 2005
    Man I can't wait for the next chapter to see what Eiri is going to do. Will he go after Shuichi or let Ryuichi have him and what about Touma will Eiri have him kill Ryu or something I just can't wait so please update soon.
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  • From ANON - ladygizarme on October 09, 2005
    daaaaamn dude, hotness(i'm so bad :p) but poor shuu, i'm so glad ryu came to rescue him!! i was like "yay, shuu's knight in pika pika armor" heheh, and the note was perfect ^__~ can't wait for the next installment *ahem* love ya, praise tezzie, mada mada dane! *glomps*
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