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Reviews for A Mangled Affair

By : loche606

From ANON - Jemma:) on March 01, 2009
I LOVE IT! This is brilliant... i love the whole Ryuichi&Shuichi affair! And surprisingly i'm realy liking the Suguru&Hiroshi one too! I LOOVE THE SMUT IN THIS FAN FIC! it's genius, and i congratulate the author with all my heart :D. But, please make the next chapter!! i'm DYING to know how this fic turns out!!!

Jem x x x x
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From ANON - Jeanette on June 26, 2007
Ive read this a couple of times & I STILL love it!!! Please update soon!!!
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From ANON - Jeanette on June 12, 2007
THIS. IS. AWSUM!!!!!! (& Tohma's a f%#*ing bitch) PLEASE update soon!!! Id really appreciate it if you emailed me when you update (bbopinuyasha@hotmail.com)

Thanx, & keep up the good work!!
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From ANON - Fangirl on January 06, 2007
like it.. now shoo.. go update xD
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From ANON - ladygizarme on December 19, 2006
ooooooh renren, you have me so on edge about what the ending is gonna be!! who's he gonna choooooose?? does he *hafta* choose? ahh ryuichi's wise words, about the mangled affair.. he makes me cry, acting so wise and selfless for shuu-chan *huggles him to death.. huggles them both* but ahh i was feelin for yuki in here too.. i wonder what evil plan touma has hatched now.. hmmmm.. well write it, woman, write it!!
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From ANON - mystice on November 29, 2006
that's a great story you have in there, why did you leave it hanging??? I wish you'd update soon or something... I want Shu to stay with Ryu, Ryu such a sweet lover... Tohma's sooo EVIL in this fic, serves him right to be punched in the face by Suguru... pls pls update, ok???
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From ladygizarme on June 29, 2006
lmao dude.. why ARE all the hot ones gay.. they should at least be bi >.> :p but anyway, nyaaa!! yatta!! new chap out finally, i am sooo happy!!! and you really didn't kill anyone! woot!! lol you sooo had me goin for the longest time everytime we'd talk about it! i bet you got a kick outta me believin you too!! nyaa, you're so evil to your crys!! XP but now it is out, and it was so of the good, i loved it!! touma gettin dropped by suguru was the best nya XD i loved suguru's reasoning, too lol.. ahhh greatness *snuggles su-chan* i'm so glad it's not over yet, also, cuz you've still got some unanswered questions for us from those phone calls shuu and ryu got nyaa! i really want shuu to stay with ryu nya (as you know of course) but ohhhh if yuki's gonna get shuu back i want ryu to be with them toooo *purrrrs with pooly puppy eyes and THE LIP* anyway, hopefully writer's block/distraction won't hinder the next chapter (as much?)

love ya!
*watches the hot mansmex of all ren's eyecandy slaves* *droooollll*

~ Crys
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From ANON - mystic on June 23, 2006
omgsh! I love this story! Pleasee PLEASE get the next chapter out soon! thanks so much! I hope that no one dies..please don't let shuichi or Yuki or anyone else die!
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From ANON - cocoke5 on June 10, 2006
wow very good story and i love it and you keep me in the story right to that last chapter now i need to know what is go to happen to all of them i hope that yuki and shuici get back togoter and toham is a bad boy keep it up and good luck on it your are a ver y good writer and i hope to read more story from you.
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From ANON - Maise on June 08, 2006
I really like your story. I hope Tohma gets killed and Shu and Yuki get back together...well that's what I'd like to happen, but I will read your next chapter no matter what happens, hope it's soon.
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From ANON - sansty on December 29, 2005
heh. love the endless smut but does this mean there won't be any ys???
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From ANON - Ashcat on December 28, 2005
Chpt 7: Hey Mindless smut is always a good thing.. it was nice to see an update on this story :) Dominate Shu is always AWESOME! Thanks for posting!
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From ANON - ladygizarme on December 27, 2005
fina-fuckin-ly!! omtezzie dude, i'm so glad you finally were able to post it!! when nic told me she read it already i was SO FUCKING JEALOUS, OMFTRF!! yeah, i know not much plotness this time, but hey, a chapter full of smut is gooood tooooooooooo ^__^ especially when it involves ryu and shuu and role playing and shuu saying he's staying!! (lol i'm a poet, worship me :p) aaaanyway, omt, yuki uke!!! and lol, suguru likes peach ponta!! and the scene with ryu and shuu explaining the new arrangement to kuma and kiku was too kawaii, which of course you know :p aaahh write the next one soooon!!! *begs*

*one vote each for akutsu and kirihara* *nominates atobe for treasurer* *suggests kabaji can be his lackey and bully dues from people*

*glomps and huggles ren*

~ crys
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From ANON - Kathy on November 26, 2005
Please update.......I want to know what happens......please don't quit in the middle. I want Ryu to keep Shu. Yuki's ...oh well!
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From ANON - Houseki on November 25, 2005
AAAAAAAAAAaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Sweet Yuki!!! *glomps the shit out of Ren!!* YAY!! doood sooo naughty of Yuki..playin that trick on Touma *smirks evily* but dood major awwwwwwwwwness if Shuu leaves Ryu *cries* even though i'm rootin for Yuki/Shuu it's still sad for Ryuichi *pouts* they all just need to end up together hehe..of course Touma will be left with no one..fuckin bastard :| hehe

gah dood i know it's gonna be awhile until you up'd but omgoddess you need to sooooooooooooon!! i wanna know what happens *cries* not like i couldn't like...poke it out of ya...since you're like...sittin next to me and all *laughs madly* hehe anywho...after POT you're workin on this babe! that's an order!! muwahaha!! *cough*

anywho...work work work...*snaps whip* Hoowa! *laughs like a dork* .... OTAKU!

ok i better stop before you try to like smack me for laughin while you're workin on pot *smiles like a taco*

huggles and love!

Nic
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