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Reviews for Riki's Submission

By : DrkDreamer
  • From ANON - ayachan on January 13, 2006
    ohhh... *dun dun dun!* this is so interesting! keep up the good work!
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 13, 2006
    Fascinating chapter. (7) Raoul isn't as bad as I was thinking. And Daryl likes Riki! Cool.

    Glad Iason is having some problems, too - adjusting to his own attraction to Riki.

    Can't wait to see where you take this.
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  • From ANON - ayachan on January 12, 2006
    ohhhh.. this is great! daryl and riki's relationship is.. interesting, lol, but i do hope that they end up liking one another... er.. as friends :P... ohhh, erasing riki's memories? ebil iason *glare* be nice to riki! lol, can't wait for the next chapter!
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  • From ANON - AnonnaDonna on January 11, 2006
    As usual, my dear, your work is FAR above the norm. I'm really LOVING the complex personal interactions and reactions between the different characters. For example, the way Daryl alternates between feeling sorry for Riki and being really frustrated with him is very "true to life."

    Major big-time smoochies and kudos!
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  • From ANON - Xue-Li on January 11, 2006
    Wow, I really like this fic. Riki and Iason are nicely done. I can't wait for the next chapter!
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  • From ANON - MultifacetedTune on January 10, 2006
    Absolutely facinating story, even if I've never heard of that anime before. Quite well done, as is to be expected based upon the quality of your other work, and very intriguing... I look forward to seeing where you take this. Keep up the good work!
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  • From ANON - Nautica on January 10, 2006
    A plot twist! Hmmm...I wonder how Riki would react if he ever found out that Iason played with his memories.

    I'm highly anticipating the next chapters!
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  • From Himenokori on January 09, 2006
    HI, I have read very few Ai No Kusabi fics that I actually liked, this is one of the best. In searching for good work I wrote my own. I would love some constructive feedback if you have time, would you check out LemonJuice, the story is called "that night" I look forward to more chapters to this story.
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  • From ANON - lusiki on January 09, 2006
    more please!!!! its agreat story!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Mary on January 08, 2006
    I'm LOVING this work! You took great care to keep personalities accurate adn it's not an easy thing teaching Riki how to be a good pet. LOL. But I am definitely enjoying watching the process. i hope you continue with this story!
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  • From ANON - IgnobleBard on January 08, 2006
    I've been following this story from the beginning but haven't had time to respond until now. This is some excellent character writing and an intriguing story. I have to admit to being one of those who knew nothing about Ai no Kusabi until reading your fic, but you really bring the characters to life. I look forward to seeing how this tug-of-war between Iason and Riki plays out.
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  • From ANON - Nautica on January 05, 2006
    Another great chapter. I think one of the most appealing things about AnK is Riki's refusal to submit. This is really different from your other works because unlike Skaia and Tayla, Riki is spirited and rebellious.

    Okay, I know I'm going to sound horrible for saying this, but I love the torture! So cruel, so delicious...hahaha

    Can't wait for the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - AnonnaDonna on January 04, 2006
    '''“You split me open, you freak. I’m not made of rubber and you have a cock the size of a horse.”''''

    ***giggle*** I know that it shouldn't be funny, but it IS. I'm glad you are updating this story so quickly 'cause I'm really enjoying it so far. I can tell already that you're going to get me hooked on AnK, the same way you got me hooked on TPB.

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  • From ANON - Nautica on January 04, 2006
    I like your portrayal of Riki and Iason. I've mostly been reading Kira's fanfictions so it's nice to see a different interpretation. I especially like the mental domination that Iason tried to inflict by isolating Riki.

    Don't be discouraged if you don't get as many reviews for this story. I think that because its fanfiction, readers have to be acquainted with the world of AnK for it to appeal. Nonetheless, I enjoy this story (and your writing) very much!
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  • From ANON - Nautica on January 03, 2006
    I just read the first chapter. Ai No Kusabi is one of my favorite anime so I was excited to find that you had written fanfiction.
    I love the first chapter so far! (I just wanted to reassure you that I'm reading. I fell behind in everything during Christmas, so that's why there's a delay in reviews). Now I will proceed to read the second chapter!
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