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Reviews for Riki's Submission

By : DrkDreamer
  • From ANON - Nautica on February 02, 2006
    This is by far my favorite chapter! I think you've truly captured Riki's dilemma in his thoughts. On the one hand, he feels the need to rebel, but on the other, he cannot deny his attraction to Iason.
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  • From ANON - tokageMusume on February 02, 2006
    Uh oh! Iason is screwing around with the way his entire economy works! Ms PacMan is not gonna be happy! I think my favourite part of this is Riki's unwillingness to admit the power Iason's sexual attraction has on him. Fighting every step of the way down!
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  • From ANON - Mary on February 02, 2006
    Hello. I just wanted to say that I have been enjoying this story very much. Unfortunately, I always read it in the morning when I come home from spending all night at work and I'm usually too tired to review, but 14 chapters is too long to go without telling you I appreciate the passions and conflicts of your story to send me off into happy little Angsty/Yaoi dreams when I am finished. Please keep up the good work. :D
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  • From ANON - tokageMusume on February 01, 2006
    Chapter 8 - "They’re not my brand,” made me laugh! That boy gives no quarter! I like your Riki! And Iason is getting very adept at more subtle torture... Enjoying this very much!
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  • From ANON - tokageMusume on February 01, 2006
    Chapter 7 -- Very interesting the way Iason is beginning to see his pets! He's in danger of "promoting" his possessions to persons. This is avery sexy, very hot but now, it's also becoming a really intriguing character study. Even better!
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  • From ANON - tokageMusume on February 01, 2006
    Chapter 6 -- Gets more interesting with each chapter. The exchanges between Daryl and Riki are very well done... I imagine that true friendship when you're a slave is a difficult thing to find.
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  • From ANON - Rawben on February 01, 2006
    oh yey for happy endings!!!! :D
    and great chapter!! iason's such a softy ;)
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  • From ANON - Nautica on January 31, 2006
    I don't think there's anything I can say about your writing that I haven't said before, so I'm just going to write something completely off topic.

    I just watched Alexander tonight, and I realized that I've been pronouncing all the names wrong! That's what I get for reading your fanfictions before watching the movies.

    Okay, I must finish with great job, as always!
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  • From tokageMusume on January 31, 2006
    Chapter 5 -- I'm getting a slightly better sense of Daryl now and I'm glad Riki is too... very old dodge for coercing people; threaten them through other people.
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  • From tokageMusume on January 31, 2006
    Geez... hard to say at ths point which of these guys is the more sadly damaged, mentally, anyway. Of course, I feel sorry for Riki here but Iason is also so abused in his own right... *sigh*
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  • From tokageMusume on January 31, 2006
    Awww... has to have hot water to drown himself! That's just ... awwwww. But, looks like Iason knows what he's about... people can take being kicked easier than being isolated, that's for sure.
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  • From tokageMusume on January 31, 2006
    I don't think this aff application lets you know what chapter the review is being filed under -- this is for Chapter one. Well, I was supposed to be somewhere else right now and instead, I'm here writing you a note! *smile* Your story sort of reached out and hooked me. I love 'power differential' stories and this one looks very very promising! Thanks so much for publishing it and I'll leave you more notes as I work my way through ... -- tM
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  • From ANON - AnonnaDonna on January 30, 2006
    Uh oh! It looks like Riki's in for it now!

    Looking forward to MORE, as usual.

    D.
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  • From ANON - lucifel on January 30, 2006
    nono~! ur totally wrong abt no1 reads AnK~, i 4 example, am a great fan~! n i love your story, hell i love all ur writings they are amazing! plz keep up the great work~! :)
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  • From ANON - chicken ice cream on January 29, 2006
    Woo! 'Migosh, you update fast! In most stories i read it's like twice a month AT BEST! Again, very well written, very in-depth characters, loving the plot. Can't wait until you put up another chapter.
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