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Reviews for Death Juice: It'll Be The End Of You

By : griDkitty
  • From ANON - Alojla on February 13, 2006
    I really laughed my ass off when I read this fic!!! Inui´s mental notes are just PERFECT!
    And in the second chapter you wrote some super hot GP, and Fuji is great!
    I really enjoy this story! You mix humor and sexiness so it never gets dull.
    I´m so looking forward to Atobes party!!!! YAY!
    Keep it up!
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  • From ANON - Digi on February 13, 2006
    Ahah! This is awesome! So many times in this story I have found myself almost dieing trying to control my laughter. I really love Inui's notes on everything that happens. Brilliant.

    Continue~! Update~! I can't wait~! ::Flail::
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  • From ladygizarme on February 11, 2006
    yatta! chapter 2!! ROFL, it's just getting better! heehee this is so great... of course all of Inui's italic "notes" were the highlight, adding even more humor to the funny/suggestive/sexy situations... ESPECIALLY all the comments on fuji.. nyahaa i love that sadistic boy..

    A few of my favorite lines concerning Fuji:

    Fuji’s penis is at the very least, 1.5 times larger than any other Regular’s. Mental note: must find out whether or not the strange food Fuji eats promotes hormonal growth...

    Everyone at Seigaku knew Fuji had it bad for Tezuka Correction: Everyone EVERYWHERE knows Fuji wants Tezuka. It has now been so firmly entrenched in their minds that I have found that even Wikipedia classes Tezuka Kunimitsu as the ’property’ of Fuji Syuusuke. Conclusion: Fuji is scary.     (haha Wikipedia..)

    Probability that Fuji will try and remove my head from my body if he finds out: 87.4% The other 12.6% is the probability of Fuji trying to remove my entire soul from my body and devour it so he can keep smiling all the time without his face hurting.

    he was glad that Inui hadn’t made a move on Tezuka or vice versa. There would have been hell to pay Like locusts, fireballs and a 45% chance of it raining the blood of the innocent... if that had happened. But, since all was well, he decided to move on and get to the fun part – dress ups!

    Mental note: Get Kikumaru to stop hanging around Fuji. Their contact should be limited as over exposure to Fuji may cause adverse reactions in the team – not to mention the universal equilibrium.

    Oh, and of course these:

    Oishi’s blush count increases by over 73% around Kikumaru. Sexual tension between doubles partners is unacceptable. Must add a new item to Oishi’s training menu: masturbation.

    Tezuka’s frustration level increases almost ten fold thanks to Fuji prodding him in all the wrong places. Mental note: Ask Fuji to prod Tezuka in the right places for the benefit of the team. Sexually frustrated Tezuka equates to more laps than is physically possible. If Fuji refuses to prod Tezuka, add masturbation to his training menu also. Must investigate if lack of self service only runs in captains and vice captains.

    seriously, like i said, just gets better and better.. and wow! oishi was awfully BOLD on that bus *giggles* and then he got caught!! lmao can't wait to see what happens next..

    (btw, ryoma gettin hot and bothered over fuji is too great, only made greater by the sadist's nonchalant taunting muwahahaha)

    can't wait for the next one.. hopefully it'll be ready by the time aff re-enables the edit options..

    ~ LG
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  • From ANON - adri on February 10, 2006
    wow lol. that was soo yummy!!!!
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  • From ANON - susaku on February 06, 2006
    **lol this fis is awsm!!! i cant wait to read the next chappie!
    btw, is it fuji/tezuka or tez/fuji??? oo well, anywhoo update as soon as u can ;)
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  • From ANON - Kat on February 04, 2006
    ~dies laughing~ Oh god, so good. Fuji's such a *tease*. I'd have pinned him to the wall dammit. And the sex with GP was *HOT*!
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  • From ANON - Nanaka on February 04, 2006
    I totally LOVE this story, i won't say update soon since alot of people don't like hearing that, personally i don't care when you update, as long as you update i'm happy
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  • From ANON - gods aneurysm on February 04, 2006
    I like how you write Inui ^_^ and Fuji is very scary.. Write more!
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  • From ANON - fei-chan on February 04, 2006
    OMG!!!!!!!! LMAO, i'm sitting here trying my best to supress my laughter enought to not wake up my room mate. I can't wait till you write more, this is the best crack fic ever!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Houseki on February 01, 2006
    *cough* ....... *silence* ....... *cough* ....... *hysterical laughing thus follows*

    HOOOOOOOOLLLLLLLLLYYYYYYYYY FUUUUUUUUUCKING SHIt dood ROFLMMFAO!!! yeah..so, that was a pretty fucking CRAXKalicious fic right there if i do say so myself ^__^ i said "HOLY SHIT DOOD!" a good 3-4x throughout it lol

    Inui grinned at the thought of how much money the genius would give him for an instant captain in heat formula. ( yeah...i'd pay money for that too ^__^ )

    the fashion sense of a mentally ill pigmi from Hawaii who is colourblind and on steriods...” (dead on right lmao...green sweats and white loose shirt...not a hot look let me tell ya! poor inui and his incapability of dressing himself in the light *smirks*)

    yeah so that was fucking great dood...the chibi bits had me rolling too....i can't wait to see what happens at the party...pure random and crackaliciousness i'm sure ^__^

    great job! loved it! Motto motto onegai!!!

    `General O'Chibi Nicaru Houseki
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  • From ladygizarme on January 31, 2006
    ROFLMFAO!!!!! OMTezuka that was fucking great!! *wipes tears* damn, crack! is goooooooooooooood :p

    so, other than the HYSTERICAL inui-juice-induced crack!craziness, and of course all of inui's collected data and percentages, my absolute favorite part in this: "Tezuka’s grumpiness monitor 0830 hours: aggitated, snippy. Gave twice the amount of normal laps. Peak in grumpiness has occured at the same time every month for three concurrent months. Must investigate further to see if Tezuka gets a period. PMS seems to be the only viable explanation." nyahahahahaa too great..

    so i hope you have more soon!! the prospect of Seigaku, Hyoutei and Rikkaidai altogether with crack!antics and who knows what kinda orgies is enough to have me jumping impatiently :p

    ~ lg
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  • From ANON - Nanaka on January 28, 2006
    That was great.... I can't wait to see what happens next
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  • From ANON - Gods aneurysm on January 27, 2006
    Tis very cute, i cant wait to see what you do next!
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