Reviews for Working out the ParadoxBy : chayron |
Chapter 21
Wonderful reunion. Everyone's reactions was so real. Yuuri's slip-up will sure rankle someones nerves.
This conclusion really drives home the closeness that the two main characters have developed. The bathroom scene was really funny.
Great Job! I look forward to the sequel!
Chapter 20
That was exciting! I wonder what will happen next. I'm glad Kyota and Wolfram were able to settle some things; the same for Yuuri and Murata. I look forward to the next chapter.
Hopefully Murata's 'wand of intelligence' will last until the next update. :-p
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