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Reviews for Working out the Paradox

By : chayron
  • From ANON - Anon on January 29, 2007
    This is an excellent piece of work. I read this first many months ago and I keep coming back for more. I like the slow, detailed character development. Specifically how Yuuri had a change of perspective that led him to accept Wolfgram's love. Great plot. I can't wait to read more about how they develop their love from here. Great job!
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  • From KaraQ on January 29, 2007
    Hi! I will write you a review in an email once again, ok?! ^^
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  • From ANON - Siany on January 29, 2007
    This has become my fave KKM fanfic. I should really stop reading unfinished fanfiction though. I just want to keep reading but I can't because there isn't any more to read yet, I'll be unbelievably sad if you don't finish this. Occationally you have them speaking a bit too formally for the situation, or something doesn't make sense (maybe getting yourself a beta isn't such a bad idea, just to refine whats already so good) but that doesn't take away from anything more then me having to sort out what you mean in my head. Few more seconds doesn't hurt anyone.
    Pitty you don't like Greta but then again we're all here for the Yuuram. *drools over last chapter next to Gunter and tisues* careful or you'll actually give my virgin self a nosebleed.

    btw, I looked at what else you had up and it made me chuckle to see that they were all DBZ. Someone likes their dragon ball, then again I can remember when I was like that with Naruto.
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  • From cocoke5 on January 29, 2007
    wow yuur and wolfman way to go. can not wait for the next chapter of the storyand see if they go all the way. and get back home and get have a good life.
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  • From Enzeru on January 28, 2007
    HELL YEAH!! OMG i love it! that's sooo good! I think you successfully captured the essence of naivete and patrial reluctance on Yuuri's part. I'm glad you aren't one of those fics writers who just makes Yuuri automatically really confident and sexually aware. And making Wolfram learned but not all too confident either was really good too. Kudos! and I can't wait til the next chapter, i seriously check this site everyday for an update lol
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  • From ANON - Chrono_ofDarkness on January 28, 2007
    OMG! Yay! That's about all I can say to this chapter. lol. I'm glad you didn't just jump right into full blown sex. You made the whole moment endearing and special(in a masculine way. lol.)
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  • From ANON - Webtester01 on January 28, 2007

    Chapter 18


    Well done! The setting and the series of evens really pushed things forward. :) Also Wolfram learning Yuuri's native language would be great.


    I wait with anticipation of what will happen in the next chapter!


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  • From SorceressFujin on January 28, 2007
    Delicious chapter!! That was indeed my favorite so far. :P Very, very anxiously awaiting the next chapter!
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  • From ANON - blumar on January 27, 2007
    Wow, they finally made up! Take that Kouta! And a baseball game coming up, ooh I wonder how Wolfram will react and if they will get closer. This story has been so good, I've been loving every chapter of it and I can't wait for the next!
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  • From ANON - blumar on January 27, 2007
    Poor Yuuri! Poor Wolfram! This chapter was good, I had my eyes glued to the screen and couldn't stop reading until it finished! But how is Yuuri going to convince Wolfram that he didn't purposly leave him there as a punishment. It seems to only get worse and worse for Yuuri, that means it can only get better, right....right? I can't wait for the next chapter!
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  • From ANON - blumar on January 27, 2007
    Shopping time! I can't wait to see what happens there! But I feel sorry for Yuuri, he was only trying to help. Damn that Kouta! Wolfrem, hurry up and get over him I say! I can't wait for the next chapter!
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  • From ANON - Yaoism on January 27, 2007
    You´re great. What else can I say? I wouldn´t add or take out a comma. It´s wonderful
    And i´m actually believing that, the way you put it, a straight guy can actually become gay. I give you the pulitzer for fanfictions ^^
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  • From ANON - naviarex on January 20, 2007
    hmmmmmmm
    I just really like this story.
    I think you portray the characters very differently than most other fics I've read but they are really believable and the angst is just right. The only slight criticism I might have is that in the last chapter Wolfram accepted Yuri a bit too easily. Especially the line where he said it would be tricky to explain to Kyota. It sounded to me as if he was talking about a pebble in his shoe. And Wolfram ought to be a bit more understanding since he kinda was in Kyota's shoes only a little while ago. But really I enjoy your story the most and I've gotten so cought up in it.
    I was the one that made the about "Yuuri courting Wolfram properly" and I have to say I have been blisfully appeased. I like how you portray Yuuri in that situation. In most fics he's clueless and blushes etc.. but I really like how you work frustration in his character without making him childish.
    Needless to say I can't wait for more and two weeks of not updating has me nail-biting.
    Thanks for your wonderful fic.
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  • From ANON - TK on January 14, 2007
    WEll I would like to say first off that I have just recently started watching the series and after reading through your fiction I have to say that you have done a job well done. It is hard to right any kind of fiction and this is a great one . I think that you have captured the personal mind set of both Yuir and Wolfram. Any ways cant wait to read the next chapter and the ending should be a blast. A side note if you need anything at all the help complete your vision just ask im alwasy looking to lend a helping hand,.
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  • From ANON - Ongaku on January 08, 2007
    Wahhh, I ran out of chapters. xD

    I'm really enjoying your story. I love the way you made Yuuri fall in love with Wolfram or you know, realize that he did.

    I was up until 2:00am reading this and ended up getting maybe 4 hours of sleep and even though I'm tired as hell I had to finish what you had out. hehe

    Anyway, can't wait until I see a new chapter from you. Keep up the great work!
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