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Reviews for The Good, The Bad and the Eva Pilot

By : Lunchbox
  • From ANON - Anon on November 12, 2007
    i noted that flaw as well but i understand why you did this for one you said you havent written something in a long time you need time to stretch and organize yourself first i have the same problem challenge fics are particularly hard to write because you dont have absolute control over the story and need to check in to see if the person who requested is okay with it

    this first chapter was a good start there isnt any time limit so take your time with the next chapter the last thing we want is for you to rush through this without gving it your best which would be a shame you obviously have great potential
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  • From 1upmushroom on November 12, 2007
    This is all great, wonderful stuff. The only part I have to say I could do without, was Misato's inner 'talking to myself'. That was, in a word, cheap. You can do better than that. You can do better than taking the shortcut by having Misato talking to herself as if she were someone else, to convince herself of her feelings. Thats all Im going to say.
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