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By : chiatralfaz
  • From Animelover186 on February 09, 2008
    1st off your question- yes funeral for Greta but not big one.
    2nd-i hope that i did not offend you but if i did then i am sorry
    3rd-my tow ideas that i would like to see if you want to put in the story-Wolfram and Yurri have a mind link through the power yuri f
    ed him, Yuri convinces Wolfram to wake up if you are not there yet, if you are then maybe convince him to do something to take their minds of their grief, somethng romantic, but not monkey sex which i prefer calling smex but everyone has different ways of refering to the lemons.
    4th-updating more than one time a week,- all i ask is that you try lkie you said.
    5th-this chapie was good but why did it hurt wolfram instead of heal
    6th-How about yuri taking a ride by himeself near water
    7th-last-Would you consider Yuri having a contract with all four elelments-earth, air, fire,and water, i remember reading a fic that had that but now i cant find it. I dont know how you will react to that so i am putting it last, but it would be great please let me know if you think it bad idea
    great story so far.
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  • From LunaTheLunatic on February 09, 2008
    *dances around in triangles around the room* YA my name was droped again , tee hee la lala! i don;t know how to put up the heart icons....

    *Stops in mid step* NNNNNNNNNNNOOOOOOOO! BAD YURI! GOD! Its getting worse and worse! AUGG!! poor Yuri!! ahhh! next the zombies will come and eat everyone! *twichs* .... ZOMBIES!!!!!!!!!!!!! NOOOOOO!

    *dose the twich dance just for you*

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  • From alicem on February 08, 2008
    Ch 17

    I think that there shoudl be some of the funeral for continuity of the story. Will Wolfram be well enough to attend if you have the funeral. IF it's left out I would miss both Yuuri's and Wolfram's way to say goodbye to her.

    Will Yuuri's family be going as well?

    Wanyways happy to see the next chapter, out earlier this week.
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  • From Wendera on February 07, 2008
    YAY!! ANGST!! ..... Sorry ^.^ You update really fast o.o That's a good thing, though. Even more amazing is that you're churning out some good stuff!! ::patiently waits for the awesome angst that is coming in the next chapter::

    On an observational note, this is the first fic I've read that has killed off Greta. Lots of other fic writers like to pretend she doesn't exist or just blatantly don't include her at all, but you're the first writer I've come across that has actually off'd her. Just a little fun fact ^.^


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  • From monrque on February 04, 2008
    you really like to push my buttons.
    (Smiles and Laughs Evilly) I'm coming for you
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  • From Animelover186 on February 04, 2008
    I have to admit i dont like the fact that greta is dead. THough i have to wonder if Wolfram can get pregant in this fic i hope so. It is getting better though i wish you could update at least every other day instead of everyday. One more thing why do you call it monkey sex? Though i will admit to being partial to it in a story like this. I love lemons, freaky cant believe i wrote that. btw thanks for answering my questions and i look foward to the next chapters. you will eloberate on why they had to stay on earth and what loose ends yuri had to tie up wont you ?
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  • From LunaTheLunatic on February 03, 2008
    *sits and ponders the meaning of " *wink*wink*nudge*nudge*" *..........*twichs when it dawns on her*............ OMG ZOMBIES!ZOMBIES ZOMBIES ZOMBIES!ZOMBIESZOMBIESzombiesZOmBIES! Flesh eating undead!

    wow you updated fast. aw sadness ...madness? but yeah update fast man! hurry hurry hurry! and... CPR!! Hurry! no EMO Yuri...

    tee hee i feel special! tee hee i was mention hee hee ZOMBIES! *twich*
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  • From lovelessjayson on February 03, 2008
    ebil...ebil ...ebil leaving us with a cliff hanger. ~waits~ ok hurry and up date please. I want to read more....~demands~ being I have been lost in the Inuyasha, Naruto and Bleach stories it is good to come back and find you updated this one thanks. Your doing a great job.
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  • From alicem on February 03, 2008
    Ch 16

    The more I think of this the more I'm concerned and fear for Yuuri's sanity if Wolfram also dies.

    My only consilation is that the info on the story states that it will be a Yuram story eventually. Hope that you can get out the next chapter quickly!!!!!!!!!!!!


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  • From alicem on February 03, 2008
    YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!

    No Greta can't be dead. And now Wolfram is dying? Now the Yuuri is awake I think he will go Maou and save Wolfram, since if he looses his other loved one I don't think he will make it. I hope that Murata can bring over Yuuri's parents to help him deal with the lose of Greta, God knows it won't work if he also looses Wolfram. THen I would fear for his sanity.

    Anyways woke up early and checked the site, glad of it sinceI was able to read the next chapter.


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  • From LunaTheLunatic on February 02, 2008
    i just read this for the hell of it...........and even tho it was slow in the 1st few chapters i still wanted to read more...OMG YOU KILLED GRETA! ... crap! next chapter! i want to see if she stays dead...you can never trust someone to stay dead you know..........greta zombie..... *shakes head*
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  • From Animelover186 on January 28, 2008
    This is a great story i just started reading it but i am a little confuesed as to why greta dies or will she live. I have so many questions like
    Will yuuri and Wolfram find love during the crisis
    Will Greta Live?
    Will Yuuri remember what he did to the bad guys
    who exactly are the bad guys
    And the flashes into the criminals mind when yuuri found out what they were planning
    so many questions please dont keep us in suspense


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  • From liloca on January 28, 2008
    I love your story. I think your characters are very belivable and 3 dimensional. I can´t wait for the update.
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  • From Wendera on January 28, 2008
    Wow, Yuuri insta-killed everyone involved. Bet they didn't see THAT one coming!!!! ..... was that too mean?? XD

    Anyway, sounds like Yuuri's going to have one hell of a political mess to deal with since the other people involved probably got their targets. And on top of all that, his fiancee's messed up and his daughter's dead ;-;

    ..... I hereby dub you the Queen of Angst (in a good way ^.^ )
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  • From Gabby18 on January 27, 2008
    I don't know if I reviewed before, but I can't wait for your next chapter. I am really enjoying this fic. gabby
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