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By : chiatralfaz
  • From alicem on January 27, 2008
    I guess there is a positive to getting up a 5AM on Sunday, cause I get to read the ch 15 so early.

    God, Yuuri killed all thost plotting against them at one time, scary power. I bet that action will make everyone think twice about trying to attack him again. With the attack he didn't even get to great Wolfram before all hell broke loose.

    IS Greta alive and will Wolfram live??

    Please update soon cause the suspense is killing me.
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  • From Wendera on January 22, 2008
    NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!! I need the next chapter!!!! XD This is an awesome story so far!!! Keep it up~~
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  • From monrque on January 21, 2008
    why did you have to do it. i just knew this was going to
    be an angst riddle story. will they ever get a break.
    my heart cried for wolf. i just want my cute blond to be
    happy. I enjoy this story very much.

    (You do know that towns people will hunt you down for that ending)
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  • From KuroiShinigami on January 21, 2008
    You are evil; I want the next chapter now!!! *throws a tempter tantrum* Oh well, I guess I have to wait. Update soon and there better be some smut later on to make up for the cliffhanger. Actually, you don't need a reason to include the smut.
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  • From alicem on January 21, 2008
    What is happening now? Who is injured and what is going on??????? I'm so glad that Yuuri is back and Wolfram and Greta were there at the time of his arrival. Now is the time for the groveling


    Please update Soon!

    Happy Martin Luther King Day mina.


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  • From alicem on January 19, 2008
    God the Great Demon Bordello! That's hysterical. Now that Yuuri has finially acknowledged some of he feelings can he find a way back home and ask those who love him most to forgive him his stupidity. That will take a long and hard time Ithink.

    Great update
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 16, 2008
    Great story so far. what is going on with Yuuri dreaming about Wolfram and what the the cry of his fiance's name wake him so suddenly. Please ocnintue!!
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  • From KuroiShinigami on January 10, 2008
    Poor, clueless Yuri; he didn't realize his kingdom was left without a ruler. Sometimes, he's too slow for his own good (even if it adds to his cuteness ^-^). Also, I love how you added the secret plan to the story; it keeps things interesting and it guarantees more chapters. Yay.

    Anyway, I enjoyed this chapter and I hope you update soon; I need something to read while I'm procrastinating and not doing my homework.
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  • From alicem on January 10, 2008
    Great chapter. I wonder when Yuuri will figure out how to get back to Shim MAkoka and ho whe will begin to make up his stupid actions with all of his family and friends there. Ithink it will take alot to get back into the good graces of Wolfram and h ewillfind that Greta is not as innocent, clueless, and little as he believes.

    Stupid Yuuri.
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  • From alicem on December 29, 2007
    Hello,

    I hope that everyone has a Happy New Year.

    Great update. I loved it when Yuuri was so pissed that he hit Murata, he should have decked him sooner, in mu opinion. Now that Yuuri thinks he can go back how long will it take for him to leave and what will the situation be in Shin Makoto when he arrives.

    He should immediately take off to find Wolfram, and damm the rest of the world till he finds him and Greta. You have to priortize your family first.

    alice

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  • From alicem on December 25, 2007
    MERRY CHRISTMAS!

    Thanks for the update. Ihope that Yuuri finds a way back soon, but know he will have to go to Wolfram and Greta since they have left Convanent Castle. Maybe that won't be such a horrible thing since his going to them would signify his change immediatley to them?

    Can't wait for the next update, since I am home all week on vacation.
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  • From priestessmykala on December 16, 2007
    i like the story and where you are taking seems interesting
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  • From alicem on December 14, 2007
    God no ones happy neither Yuuri or Wolfram. Somehow they have to get back together.

    Gret update
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  • From keiko259 on December 12, 2007
    hi... great writing here. how you established greta's and wolfram's relationship is good, as well as in describing everybody's reaction to yuuri's leaving Shin Makoku. Likewise, you tied the political implications of Yuuri's absence in the country pretty well... Some of the writers somehow fail to describe those things in their fics. But I'm really not quite sure where the story will go... haven't seen the major plot twist yet and i think that after having written so many chapter already, it would be better for the readers to have a glimpse of it. I guess that's why it also took me this long to review this fic. Hope for an update soon!
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  • From alicem on December 01, 2007
    I was happy when I saw the update this AM. Hope to read more about Yuuir the idiot. It would be nice if he showed up at the Peace Conference and apoligized to everyone and privately with Wolfram and Greta, but it's going to take alot of groveling now to get back in their good graces.

    Have you heard that there will be a 3rd season of KKM starting in 4/08. Can't wait to see if they have Yuuri be less of an idiot in his relationship with Wolfram.
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