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Reviews for Dawn

By : chiatralfaz
  • From ANON - Alicia Spinet on February 21, 2015
    I was wondering... why did you stop whit the fic? Why didn't you continued whit it? I would have love to know what would happen now that Wolfie awoken! Please, can you tell me. Do you even want to continue????????
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  • From eleniofme on April 10, 2009
    wow great but terribly depressing song at the same time. r u gonna ifinish it any time soon?
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  • From alicem on August 10, 2008
    I hope that you can get another chapter. I can't wait till the next one comes out.

    Alice
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  • From Wendera on May 08, 2008
    Smut chapter FTW! XD

    Truthfully, as much of a rabid, yaoi fangirl as I am, something about Yozak/Conrad weirds me out a bit. I'm not quite sure what it is about the two of them, but I usually avoid this pairing like the plague XD I had actually skipped over the whole scene until I saw your author's note at the end and was like, "Hmmm, better read it then!". And, I think it was rather well done~ You avoided all the major pitfalls like using 'colorful' names for anatomy and you made the scene nicely detailed without droning on. I give it two thumbs up ^.^ I'm still squicky about the pairing though ^.^;;;;; This pairing and Gwendal/Gunter.... But at least I have a reason why I don't like Gwendal/Gunter which is basically my brain rejecting the thought of Gunter being in any kind of serious relationship at all XDDD

    Anyway, great job!! Waiting for more~~~~~~

    ...... Crying Conrad FTW!!!!
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  • From alicem on May 07, 2008

    Ch 20

    This Cahpter was great at showing how much Conrad really loves his brother even more thatn his feelings for Yuuri. The interaction with him and Yozak was precious.

    I can't wait to see what Wolfram says now that he has woken up after Yuuri collapsed at Greta's funeral. At least Wolfram was able to say goodbye in his dreams. Maby that will help Yuuri also deal with their loss.

    Can't wait for the next update.

    alice
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  • From LunaTheLunatic on May 04, 2008
    Your alive!!!!!!! and updated...and...not eaten by zombies!!! Yess! one less infected to deal with!

    *shakes the ever liveing crud out of you* Never...EVER...wish for zombies! Greta's out there!! shes leading a horrid zombie ban! we are all doooomed!! no one can excape her cutesy undead-ness! and your wishing for it! SHAME!

    and now Yuri is bleeding! now we are going to have Vampires! great just great!
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  • From Wendera on May 01, 2008
    Yay! An update!! A short and VERY SAD update, but YAY! It was like some cosmic intervention or something... I hadn't been on the site in a few weeks and all of a sudden I had the urge to browse today XD

    That description about his fingernails cracking made me cringe x.x** Eeeeee! I guess it didn't help that I had accidentally shoved a staple up my fingernail earlier today so I had a recent pain to link to the mental image XDDD Anyway, waiting faithfully for the next Chappy!!

    ~had to redo this review because I put in a symbol that deleted half the review ^.^;;;;
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  • From Chocho on March 30, 2008
    Holy shit. I have never been so depressed and on the verge of tears in my entire life while reading. Talk about angst. I hope you have plans of continuing. I'll just have to make sure to have my box of kleenex nearby.
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  • From LunaTheLunatic on March 29, 2008
    *pokes you hard* Duuuude...been ...waiting...and....waiting...... zombie got you hold up somewhere huh? reamber! use soap to ward them off! ...oh wait... thats for hippies.... crap mixed them up again....
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  • From alicem on March 09, 2008
    Ch 18

    I hope that everything is fine with you. I have been waiting patiently for the next chapter for almost 2 wks.

    Is Wolfram going to wake up soon and find Yuuri withhim. I hope so and with their combined love it should help them both with their grief over the loss of Greta.

    Update soon, onegai!
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  • From fireflyfantasy on February 28, 2008
    I love your story. I just read it all at once. I cried, poor Greta and wolfram. Please update.
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  • From Wendera on February 14, 2008
    I just reread my review and I'd like to say that when I said "Not too good with the sad thing" I meant I wasn't good with dealing with it. You wrote it very well ^.^ Just clearing confusion!

    (I would also like to say that Luna's review before mine is the greatest review ever XD)
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  • From Wendera on February 14, 2008
    Holy heck! You updated twice!? ^_____^ that makes me happy!! The newest chapter was more sad than angsty though. Not too good with the sad thing, lol. As soon as I saw Greta's name I went "Uhoh". Some of the things she said were a little hard to imagine coming from her mouth, but then again, you're writing a side of her that they didn't show in the anime so I'll attribute it to that.

    Anyway, I'll be waiting for the next chapter ^.^

    P.S. I loved your description of Wolfram's field. I lost myself in my imagination while I was reading it like I was laying down in the field myself~
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  • From LunaTheLunatic on February 14, 2008
    YAY! update!! Loves and dead puppys for everyone!Poor Yuri.... *smacks* STOP TRYING TO KILL WOLF YOU CRAZY MAN BOY! eveything went to hell in a hand basket ... witch btw is the best way to give out hell you know... well maybe you can malprg someone and get a new kid XD .... hey you! update faster man.... talk of Ghostys and war is all lovely and all but i want to see Yuri the barbarian or the impaler... or somthing... WAR! and ....

    ...*pokes greta ghosty* Joo.... joo no zombie.... *poke poke* why joo no zombie!?

    *greta turns into zombie* RAWR! *give out the most pussy puss puss scream the world has ever known*
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  • From alicem on February 12, 2008
    Yea! Update. Update!

    Now that Wolfram was able to see Greta and say goodbye maby he will wake up in the next chapter and talk with Yuuri.

    If all the other countries can see that Yuuri's daughter was killed and Wolfram almost died maby it would calm them down. Everyone can understand that grieving parents are capable of doing excessive actions to protect family and Yuuri's behavior was not excessive, and it took care of the plot against all of them wihtout endangering those not involved.

    At least I hope so!

    Can't wait for the next update.
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