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Reviews for Shades of Mystification

By : Hellagoddess
  • From meEksiNs on April 28, 2008
    it is lovely~ thank you very much for sharing ^-^
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  • From ANON - oztan on April 27, 2008
    Oh this chapter was so bloody good.
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  • From ANON - yuneek on April 26, 2008
    wow... like, serious wow. My mine is still blown so I'll have to write this review without it. I usually don't review stories (I know, I'm lazy, sorry) but after a chapter like that! I just absolutely loved how you made Raito nervous about losing his manliness and totally ignorant on man-love XD I'm glad to hear that there'll be lots more and I'm quite positive I'll stick around for it :) Thanks for the update
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  • From RivenLiether on April 26, 2008
    Hot and accurate. lol. My only suggestion is that you maybe have some mutual masturbation first the next time Raito gets too nervous, since there really should have been some of that in this chapter.
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  • From 70SolLaen on April 25, 2008
    Well all the trouble you went through writing this chapter payed off, even if you still don't like it. It was very good. Keep up the good work, can't wait for the next chapter.
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  • From PlantangelJchan on April 23, 2008
    Oh I've been following and chasing but I only now got the opportunity to reveiw this story and yes ironically it happened on the chapter where they finally got together. But that's ok any reveiw is a step forward and never backwards right? Well unless it's a flame but I promise I will nevr do that. This story is too perfect to ever deem any flaming and I am quite enjoying it. I'm glad that you are keeping it going for a good while. Thank you for writing this wonderful story and keep up the good work.

    -L
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  • From ANON - Hime on April 22, 2008
    Sorry, but this is the first time I'm reviewing your story but I had too since you gave us such a great chapter and asked so nicely. I personally liked this, especially Light's mental musing about how what he's doing equals to him being a man or not. Very much IC in my opinion. I also thought that the lemon was done nicely, I know I couldn't write man pr0n like this for sure. Can't wait for your next update.

    Thanks!
    Hime
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  • From shidoburrito on April 22, 2008
    Iyaaa! You have built up to chapter 14 so wonderfully! I've been reading this since chapter one and I feel its time to give you the praise you deserve. I love this story! Especially L as an artist, I could totally see that happening, oddly enough. But that last chapter; Light makes such a cute virgin XD and I love stories with L on top! This is coming along great! Can't wait to read more!
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  • From ANON - Lila on April 22, 2008
    Alright good ummmm...Hot uhh....Smexy...yeah smexy not much plot here but i enjoyed it very much very sweet and realistic situation in this story i see L and Raito being very uhhh controlled at first soooo Yay....this should suffice for the extended udate period love this story can't wait to see where it's going next :)
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  • From ANON - Minako on April 21, 2008
    kay I was one, who never review but I love this story with all my heart, sorry, you can blame my lazyness.
    I really liked the chapter, I though L will be a little more dominant, but I liked how it went, I like ryuu teasing raito, is always so much fun.

    you know I never like the things I do, ever, so I understand that of rwading over and over and never be okay with it, but for other people is always great what you do.

    So, the story is very, wait moreeee than veryyy okay, hope you update soon ^^ I really want to get to the plot, cause I was thinkin all the time, is a nice love story, well things between L and raito are not much fluff, so it'll be great when more action comes.

    I really hope the story turn out to be veryyy long, I love long stories, I swear i never stop reading.

    So take care, and keep going, with another loong chapter XD bye!
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  • From Kuragari75 on April 21, 2008
    I like how you had Raito reacting. matched his personality very well. I'm loving this story so far. ^^
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  • From ANON - shishio_Not_Logged_in on April 21, 2008
    -Cheers- Finally! Light and L are together~ Have I mentioned just how much I love your story? Please don't drop it, ever.

    The fourteenth chapter was just fine, so don't worry about it. ^^ I swear it is, because you kept the characters in character so well. I was really surprised when I saw that you hadn't created another Death Note fanfic prior to this, at least not on this site. I like your writting style and how you incorperated Ryuk and Rem into this as well, that was genius. ^^ -Please don't kill L. T^T He's too adorable to die, especially after having seen Episode 25.....-
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  • From ANON - Kitsuna on April 21, 2008
    .........0_0....... oh.... wow.... that was hot.... very... *is rolling around in yaoi bliss*
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  • From ANON - Mewmew2 on April 21, 2008
    Excellent job. Thank you so much for posting the eagerly anticipated lemon. You did an outstanding job and thus deserve to be praised for it. Please update again when possible.
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  • From IntHellsing on April 21, 2008
    Hmm. It was written well... but it feels like... you maybe weren't 100% satisfied with certain parts of it while you were writing it? if that makes sense?
    Like... there's a occasionally this hesitation where things seem to slow down or speed up where they shouldn't... :/

    I mean... it's not bad... it's just... not the best thing you've written.
    [::ducks.:: I feel bad saying that... since I normally LOVE everything you write.]
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