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Reviews for Shades of Mystification

By : Hellagoddess
  • From ANON - Lila on May 19, 2008
    MMMMmmmhhhh....Me thinks Mikami Teeru is the Other bidder who fought so ferousciously for the nude painting of Raito-kun earlier and has now taken on the stalker persona that suits him so very well..Heeheee things just got more interesting...And L being Jealous is absolutely adorable...The little eccentric doesn't know he's jalous and doesn't know how obvious it was when he became that way...Which is what makes it so cute...So good builder and connector leading into a good arch or plot line...I just hope since niether of them are detectives in this one but still retain there god like intelligence they should be able to survive this episode hopefully 'cause Stalkers get violent very quickly when they image of the person they stalk is tarnished in anyway....So yeah like the way the stories going ^_^
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  • From PlantangelJchan on May 19, 2008
    Hheheh good one. L jealous is just too cute especially if you place him in chibi mode. Hmm I may just draw that for you. Anyway keep it up it's going great!See you next chapter.

    -L
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  • From Duomi on May 19, 2008
    I forgot to reply! Read this a few hours ago, but my head is not clear or coherent right now, I've been sick all day... but this makes me feel slightly better! I want to read the deleted/moved scene though...! Jealous!L is just about the cutest idea ever, and I loved how happy Raito was about the flowers. (I'm assuming they're from Mikami, because if it was Near or something-- that's a strange idea. I'm not sure he has enough emotions to send someone flowers! Mikami is certainly crazy enough though.) L's childishness at the end was also very adorable.
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  • From ANON - MewMew2 on May 19, 2008
    That was just too cut (this last chapter about the flowers.) Also is there really a book titled The Language of Flowers? I feel that I've heard that said somewhere before. Thank for updating once more, please do so so again at your convenience.
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  • From SailorAurora on May 19, 2008
    Heheh, the current chapter so far was pure gold.

    I was surprised to read how crude Near could be... it actually seemed like something that Mello himself would do more than Near. Hmm....

    and the roses... gee, I wonder who those could be from? ;) (so obvious, but I still liked that part anyway. That dude doesn't just get enough attention in fandom).

    Jealous L was so adorable to see too. =)
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  • From ANON - moosemix on May 19, 2008
    I am not too big of a fan of jealous!L but you made it work & I loved it.
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  • From RiamtheWanderer on May 19, 2008
    Aw, this one was short. I am interested in the flowers you are planning something here. Glad to see more, but hopefully longer chapters are to come.

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  • From ANON - Hikari Manganji on May 19, 2008
    OMG! I've been reading this fic since it first started but I wasn't able to review coz I'm a bit shy when it comes to reading fics in AFF and I'd like to stay anonymous as possible.. but this chapter made me want to say something about its awesomeness and cuteness that I had been compelled to review! I truly liked the subtle gestures and the not so direct way you made L jealous.. you depicted him wonderfully. I also liked the other chapters and Raito's nude pics... I hope that you would elaborate on some of L's fantasy paintings of nude Raito and positions.. you describe them so wonderfully that I can easily picture it on my mind.. Keep it up! XD I love it!
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  • From Kaiyuke on May 19, 2008
    Rawr. Stalker!Mikami, here we go.
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  • From Dotowe on May 16, 2008
    This chapter was so incredibly sweet! It put me in a great mood and made me giggle like nuts. Especially loved the part where L was so lost on how to put on a suit. Made me itch for a sketch pad because I had such a clear picture of that scene in my head.

    Looking forward to the next installment!

    Joie,
    Gloria
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  • From ANON - Negai on May 16, 2008
    I love the story! Raito and L are so cute it's awesome. Sometimes it's nice to just have WAFF stories rather than a lot of drama or angst. Can't wait for the next chapter!
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  • From Tulip32 on May 14, 2008
    SUCH a wonderful chapter. I am a sucker for sappiness and romance and fell in love with this chapter. You are such an amazing author. ^_^. I really liked how L knew everything to begin with but never let on that he knew about their anniversary. XD. The ring was an adorable idea and really makes me want to just go out and buy one now. ^_^ I can't wait to see what you have in store for the next chapter. Simply wonderful job so far.
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  • From ninetailedfoxx852 on May 13, 2008
    aww i absolutely loved thos chapter!! i totally want one of those rings now! thats serioulsy like the cutest idea ever! XD please update soon! this is definately my favprite story and i cant wait to see what happens next!!! X3
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  • From Duomi on May 13, 2008
    Damn, going to work means I need to read this in two parts! I found it when I only had ten minutes left, so I opened a notepad file for a comment. *grins* You updated again!!! Yaaay!!

    I love L having to think about if putting the cake down is worth it. XD; "To do so meant to put down the cake and Raito could see the moment that he humored his lover and took the bag, placing the cake on a table nearby, in case of dire emergency." That line was full of win.

    "Raito cleared his throat quietly at the sight of all that glorious pale skin and quickly turned towards the doorway."

    Raito to himself: "Hoo, okay. Stay on track, Raito! We have a mission. No getting side-tracked. Need to stay strong. Is the mission worth it? No-- no, I can't harbor doubts! Let's just leave the area and clean something." He's so fun!

    Omg, cummerbund as corset?! Poor L. I can picture that scene! *goes to work, comes back*

    *giggling* L tried to eat Raito-- literally-- the last time he ran out of sweets?! I can actually picture that. Raito shouting and hitting at L to get him to stop biting and L pouting.

    *wanders online to look up honmei-chocolate* Omg, that really would be a perfect gift from Raito to L. Cute!

    I'm curious where the plot is going! And how the puzzle rings will work in. And if it might somehow involve Near. (Can you imagine how obnoxious he'd be if he ever got a puzzle ring of his own? He'd never put the damn thing down.) I enjoyed this chapter much! Things feel like they're building again, and the Taiko performance was a fun touch.
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  • From RiamtheWanderer on May 12, 2008
    Ooh, can't wait to see where you take the gifts. I don't think this is moving slowly at all, keep up with the pace. I hope you never stop writing this. *Brava*
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