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From amandatrue on July 14, 2009
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ginton
03/27/08 - 06:37AM 16: Ch. 16 The Darkness of Rhea Signed
waaaaahh....you really got me stuck to your story. Such detailed mind blowing sexual scenes, historical, adventure, friends, colleagues and foes!! Really amazes me. So these bastards from Rhea are the culprits behind Iason's Agatha poisoning. Riki has really made a huge difference in character wise. From a naughty pet, always got something to complain with his foul mouth, changed into a wise man *nods*, no a Warrior with intellect!! Sounds sexy though hihih. His Temper i don't think that will ever get better . Before he would make such a scene to get everyones attention, now just one thought, he can kill some one just like that !!! Super cool. Sexual scenes was hilarious hehe, it was pretty funny to see cool Lord Mink to suddenly feel embarrassed and shy when being teased by Riki. And the scene where all the Elder clan watched their steamy sex was .....*drool*..... pooor Aristia Elders, but serves Rhea Elders right !! Still want to have Riki and Iason in their presence. They never learn....tsk tsk!! Got a question, i think you mentioned somewhere that the Firm and Elder clan are of pure blood. I am curious how do they breed. Did they undergo similar processes like Jupiter did ,cultivating cell tissues in tubes?? Cant wait to read the ultimate war chapter......imagining Iason and Riki unleash their power!!!
Author's Response: Wow...thanx for the review Ginton. Riki and Iason have come a long way in their search for each other. Now that they have been awakened to their lineage, their present "relationship dynamic" has forever, been changed. The Elders of Rhea kept breeding strictly among their own Clan, not mixing with the population, and keeping their inner powers hidden, compared to the Elder Class of Aristia who did, thus watering down their inner powers. The Firm's descendants from the Warrior Clans, like the Elders of Aristia, mixed their race with people of other cultures with all the travel they did among the stars, as they searched for the remains of the Intellects. Their inner powers were thus watered down. But once born into the Firm, you never left, because of their role as Jupiter's personal "maintenance men" and caretakers of the Intellects (Blondies). As for the cultivating of cell tissue...now that will be revealed in Ch.17. I appreciate the fact, you've followed so closely...I hope you enjoy the climax (no pun intended *smiles*
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From amandatrue on July 14, 2009
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Dark Angel
03/19/08 - 01:52AM 16: Ch. 16 The Darkness of Rhea Signed
OK read and loved this chapter. AS ALWAYS*smiles* I would so love to see Iason getting a spanking from Riki, reading them switch is always a turn on.*blushes* Oh, and what I wouldn't give to have seen Iason blush, it would most likely make him even more SEXY if that is possible. The fact that the Elders that took Iason think that he can be used to their advantage, that maybe they can both be used really have no idea what they are in for*smiles devilishly* AND, I AM SO FUCK'N HAPPY THAT LORD SABER IS DEAD HE GOT WHAT WAS COMING TO HIM!!!!!!!!!!!! Can't wait for chap. 17 till then, BYE LOVE*smiles*
Author's Response: Thanx for the kind review DA...I am happy to get to this point...and I'm looking forward to the upcoming battle. Can you imagine standing in the hot springs, as 200 old farts looked on?...It was fun. See ya in CH.17
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From amandatrue on July 14, 2009
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Dark Angel
03/17/08 - 02:28PM 16: Ch. 16 The Darkness of Rhea Signed
OK I DON"T GET IT, THIS SITE IS CLOSING???? AND, YOU MIGHT NOT BE ABLE TO FINISH THIS STORY????
Author's Response: no, but Kira is not going to host the site I think, so I'll have to see where it goes, but I do want to finish the story here...keep looking here ok?
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From amandatrue on July 14, 2009
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Dark Angel
03/09/08 - 12:51AM 15: Chapter 15 Jupiter's Secret Signed
*CHU**CHU*CHU*kisses you all over for updating so fast!! And, no need to be sorry for the typo' just get better that is all that matters. BUT...IF YOU WANT I COULD GIVE YOU A SPANKING*devilish grin*FOR THE TYPO'S!?!?!? On to the review once again the story just get's better and better everytime...cold or no cold your writing is ingenious. You give great plot and depth to each chapter that keeps me wanting more. And, I have to tell you that I HATE to read so to make ME OF ALL PEOPLE wanting to read more it should tell you how great this story is. AND LET US NOT FORGET THE SEX!!!!! oh no,no,no that is ALWAYS a plus to a chapter, more so when you have four couples getting it on*blushes* OH, and Raoul to see him in his element kick'n ass with a whip as only he could*whistles*what a sight. He got what was coming to him I say. Now we just need to interrogate the other one. And, damn it ta hell....you have a way to make me cry which is also rare for me to do. Having Iason and Riki see what happened to their home and families, man that was hard, but at least they now know and it gave them even more motivation. CAN'T WAIT FOR CHAP.16 TILL THEN TAKE CARE OF YOURSELF AND BYE LOVE!!!!
Author's Response: Thanks for the great review DA, I did manage to correct most of the typos, and I hope to get over this blasted illness! Maybe a good spanking might get my immune system going no? Anyways, yes, I loved Raul in his element, he needed to get off on someone...Yes, Iason and Riki had to see it, to put their mind in focus. Thanx for the review!
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From amandatrue on July 14, 2009
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Dark Angel
02/28/08 - 07:09AM 14: Chapter 14 The Elders Signed
I really...REALLY want to kiss you right now so here goes*chu* Updating so fast and keeping the story interesting is what keeps all of us reading. So here is my review which will be SHORT this time because my brain just BLEW over the sensory overload.*smiles* GOD YOU SO KNOW HOW TO MAKE A GIRL WET!!!!!!!!!!!!*smiles while blushing* Daryl, Katze and Iason and Riki' sex WOW. Man I wished I could of heard Iason and Riki serenading each other. I could just picture how their voice' sound. *like horny angel' singing from the heavens**smiles* Poor Raoul having to see it but the point had to be made. It is also comforting to know that Luis can be trusted. But, I to am feeling a little uneasy when it comes to Iasons safety now. What will the Elders do when they realize that they don't just have the Head of the Syndicate to manipulate Jupiter with but in fact, an Ancient and not just any Ancient but an Intellect their sworn enemy. PLEASE KEEP UPDATING AS FAST AS YOU HAVE BEEN NEED TO READ CHAPTER 15 LIKE YESTERDAY*smiles* till then BYE LOVE.
Author's Response: What the Elders want and what they get are two very different things...thanx for the reveiw! See ya in Ch.15

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From amandatrue on July 14, 2009
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ginton
02/18/08 - 10:38AM 13: Chapter 13 Reflections of the Heart Signed
....speechless.....Holy crap....Lady i have no idea where you got this idea , but mann this is the best story, a continuation of Riki and Iason...i have to say ...Bravo *clap clap*!! So much history Iason and Riki had together, and the sudden change of Riki being the wild untamed pet was definitely a big change to see him all Mr Noble!!! For a moment i thought Raul was going to make a scene, you know his typical way of denying everything and wont except what is going on with Riki. and the last part what Raul mentioned, those who have Iason would be in biggie trouble...cant wait to see what would happen. But then again i do pity the capturers Victor and Commander Darius, they were only doing their job and now they have to pay back big time. Have no idea what Iason has cooked up for them. Say , are you going to mention why Commander Darius was removed from the Firm? Gyaaaa cant wait for the battle to begin muahahaha......
Author's Response: Yes...there is definitely a story to be told about young Darius and his father Luis. Raul may find it hard to deal with all the changes, but finding out Victor is involved will set him off. Thanks for the kind review...
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From amandatrue on July 14, 2009
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Dark Angel
02/17/08 - 08:30AM 13: Chapter 13 Reflections of the Heart Signed
OH I AM JUMPING FOR JOY THAT THIS WAS UPDATED!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!*BIG smile* Ok this is going to be really short 'cuz I just have one thing to say I LOVED....LOVED....LOVED THIS CHAPTER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I mean- to open it with the reunion of Iason and Riki(The Flame and the Tempest) To have Riki saying sorry for leaving him and doubting his love and his loyalty on that one fateful night of his so called BETRAYAL. To making love to each other; first Iason to Riki and then Riki to him* once again what imagery I got* *DROOLS* To Iason- remembering his parents; that he did indeed have a mother and a father and not just Jupiter. To having him wake up to have Ayuda there and by his side. Having them talk about their fathers was cool. And, one must say that Ayuda is very good at deduction. That he figured out everything says a lot. Nice to see Martin is still on his game at helping Iason using the note to tell him about his food and drink being enriched with strong healing herbs and spices so to heal his wounds faster. Commander Darius- Knew he had to be the son. Also what will he do to get the answers he searches for???? Victor- GODS CAN HE BE ANYMORE OF A PERVERT*look whose talking; sheepish grin* Riki waking to relive what they shared- To have Iason reveal the memory of that night through his own mind; allowing Riki to see what had occurred. To see that Iason saw him not Eric when they were in bed together. And; what it did to him when Riki did not trust in him to listen to what he had to say. To Raoul, Heiku and Raymone- boy did they get a SHOCK when they learned about and saw Riki. To The Mink ESTATE- once again the shock to everyone at his sudden change. To Katze- really glad that he is now with everyone and is healed from head to toe; of scares and injuries old and new. Daryl and Toma likewise. That Toma saw Auyda and Iason was a nice bonus. Back to Raoul- " Iason he theorized, would be a formidable force to be reckoned with and felt those who had him in their custody would be smart to release him, if they only knew what they held in their hands" he has no idea how true that statement is!!!! OK I SAID IT WAS TO BE SHORT BUT I GUESS I SEEM TO NOT BE ABLE TO DO THAT!!!!!!*smiles* It's all because I love this story to much. Well till chapter 14 BYE LOVE!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: Thanks DA! I've been sooooo sick with this damn flu that's kicking everyone's ass- but it has given me lots of down time to think...I hope to get the story out the way I pictured it in my head...lots of post it notes *sigh* but thanks for the kind words..stay tuned the Elders have no idea what coming....
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From amandatrue on July 14, 2009
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Dark Angel
02/07/08 - 04:00AM 12: Chapter 12 The Fourth Clan Signed
OH I AM BEYOND HAPPY THAT THIS WAS UPDATED!!!!!!!!!!!!!! BUT NOW ALL I CAN DO IS CRY*sobs* *really REALLY needs a hug* In the beginning of this I was rolling with laughter because Raimen and Kai were hilarious and very VERY much SMEXY together. You have such a way with your words when you write the sex that it's like I am right there with them every time and can see it all in my mind*you feed my pervertedness really well* But don't get me wrong its everything you write NOT just the sex that comes ALIVE when I read it.*bows to your writing skills* NOW THAT THE ASS KISSING IS DONE BACK TO THE REVIEW *smiles* They (meaning Raimen and Kai) make for a really great couple; glad that the wives approve of them!!! It kind of shows that Iason and Riki were meant for each other if their parents could hold such a tight bond. - Now Iason' and Riki' first time...what can one say that can truly justify what they shared...it is truly beyond words just like their love. It was not meant to be summed up that way *at least in my eyes* - Eric.... has one thing to says THAT SON-OF-A-BITCH that says it all...I think???? - "Iasons betrayal" note the quotation marks because that was all BULLSHIT and if Riki would have just listened to Iason he to would have seen it just as that!!!!! Riki leaving Iason that is what started my tears. - Eric's plan comes into motion....That right there putting the Elders against the Warrior' and the Intellect' that was the thing that had me PULLING my hair out!!!!! It made me so FUCKING MAD you have know idea!!!!!! But when he realized his stupidity it was to LATE. - Raimen' and Kai' Death GOD that made me cry even more the fact that Kai killed Raimen with his own hand and the fact because of that act it took him out of that trance, to see what he had done to his own lover...I can't even try to imagine nor would I want to, that kind of hurt its just to much. And then to have him assassinated man can you break my heart anymore *smiles weakly* - Present Day....They better not put Iason back under, they have no right!!! But at least Auyda is with him now. OK I have a question???? WHO IS MARCUS????? DO YOU REALLY MEAN MARTIN???? *scratches head in confusion* Loved the chapter even though it had me in tears in the end....but I still love you. CAN'T WAIT FOR CHAP.13 TILL THEN BYE LOVE!!!!!!
Author's Response: Thank you DA, yes some type-o's there, I was just as worked up as you, It was really hard to write this update for obvious reasons...but it is always dark before the light, so don't fret too much. I had to get past this part and it took a lot out of me, especially Kai and Raimen's death. Cheer up good things are about to happen!
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From amandatrue on July 14, 2009
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ginton
01/29/08 - 01:08PM 11: Chapter 11 Prophesy Signed
holy crapp ( eyes wide open)!!! that was the most entertaining story i have ever read! So historical and full of mystery, the flame and the tempest.....man, i have always thought Jupiter to be ruthless and evil. Now i know ,all she meant was to restore Amoi back to its glorious day where Iason and Riki were lovers. Kyaaa....jumping up and down.. damm those Elders, what do they want from Iason. Now its too late since both have been awakened. I dont think the Elders can do much now ,since Iason seems to have gained lots of power! Hihihih cant wait for more..... i agree with Dark angel ...veryy bad cliff hanger....decide to stop the story at ze most critical moment, arrrgghhh!!! Daijobu i shall wait patiently for the next chap....*smiless*...
Author's Response: Thank you most kindly- Sorry for the cliff-hanger!!! Let's go back 10,000 years...stay tuned! I promise you won't suffer too much *smiles* Thanx for the review :)
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From amandatrue on July 14, 2009
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Dark Angel
01/26/08 - 12:51PM 11: Chapter 11 Prophesy Signed
was that review to long*sheepish grin*
Author's Response: Naw that's ok, it was a rather long update, but there was just so much that needs to be said; like Jupiter's briefing of Raul, he is now an important player in this as he see's Iason as the Intellect and Riki as the Tempest. Their awakening was 10,000 years in the making and Jupiter has labored for so long to see it through. Yeah, I couldn't help but rescue Askel and Freyn, those two dummies have somehow come up with something big. The whole gang witnessing Riki's awakening will never see him or Iason the same way again. I'm feeling better so I hope to update soon. Thanx for the impressive review!!

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Dark Angel
01/18/08 - 12:48AM 10: Chapter 10 Guardians of the Flame Signed
You just made me very...VERY HAPPY!!!!!! I was going though withdrawl...I kept checking to see if it updated every day and cursed when it wasn't. OK once again this chap. was not nearly long enough. I could read this for hours and not care!!! Now I have to say that Raoul should have more of a say in what goes on in this mission. Hell I trust him more to find and protect Iason because of his close ties. The others just see this as another mission, like we get him...we get him...if we don't...we don't thats how I see their attitude. And I saw something interesting that Darius and Luis have the same last name 'Raymone' now it is just trying to put the relationship together??? Depending on the ages it could be father and son. If that is the case can Luis Raymone really be trusted??? Then you have Iason waking up REALLY PISSED and who can blame him 'cuz I sure as hell can't like I said in my last review that I hoped Iason would wake up and kick some much needed ASS...which he did not even really trying. Martin now I see him becoming of great use to Iason because like Iason said he is the only one that showed really caring when it came to take care of him that and because Iason took a liking to him cuz he reminds him of Riki with his dark hair and eyes. And, his sweetness. Can't wait for chap. 11 PLEASE DON'T TORTURE ME TOO LONG!!!!! *smiles*
Author's Response: I'm soooo sorry! I was terribly ill for about 4 days that I can't remember two of them!! But I was able to think on it all for just a bit....now you do deserve a sneak peak so Raul will have a say in all this, remember what he packed? Darius and Luis do have something in common and Iason- although out of danger, must still recover. He does have alot of time to think, just like I did for a couple of days- coff! coff! I'll try to get the next one out sooner!!! Thanks DA for the nice review.
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From amandatrue on July 14, 2009
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Dark Angel
01/05/08 - 10:35AM 9: Chapter 9 The Tempest Within Signed
YOU JUST MADE ME REALLY...REALLY...REALLY HAPPY!!!! PLUS THIS CHAPTER WAS NOT NEARLY LONG ENOUGH!!! BUT ON WITH THE REVIEW... o.k. I was so happy that Riki was able to get through to Iason.*big ass smile* And you were right I needed tissue was in tears during the whole reunion.*damn mind reader**smiles*Even though it took some time to convince Iason that Riki was indeed real and not another fabrication of his heart' wants. It broke my heart to see Iason in such emotional pain, having seen that Riki suffered for the injuries that he himself had. But Riki told him that thanks to the Hot Springs he is completely healed and that put Iasons mind at ease. And, they had MIND BLOWING SEX TWICE*squeals*to make up for lost time. needed tissue then to, just like you said. Now on to Petros and his memories of the first time he meet the than young Lord Mink. What did he mean when he told Iason that ' "The Flame will burn one's hands if held too tight...There is more to this proverb; however, we were unsure if you would be the one- considering your position on Amoi, and the fact that you are a Blondie" ' The one???The one for what??? *screams at top of lungs* what do they know??? And, then one of them said this ' "Armah leads all in the path one should walk, and he has seen fit to lead you to us; to this site for you to witness your future' " Future...are they talking OUT OF THEIR ASSES can't they be more clear!!! Did they expect Iason to just take their word on eveything they said. COME ON HE IS GOING TO QUESTION!!! *head hurts thinking too much* Back to present Darius and Victor...Victor has to be the most twisted,and perverted man alive. God he has to get his *ROCKS OFF* by watching his peers in the bath hall or in private quarters. Then he still has the nerve to look at Iason.*sees red* At least Darius put him in his place. Council of Elders...once again we are back to them. What could they possibly want with Iason that would warrent such extreme actions??? They better say that the world was coming to an end and, that Iason was the only one to save them. Cause this is just way to much!!! AS YOU CAN SEE YET THIS STORY HAS ME HOOKED, CAN'T WAIT OF CHAP.10... AND WHEN IT DOES COME UP I HOPE THAT IASON WAKES UP AND KICKS SOME MUCH NEEDED ASS!!!! neh.. till then bye love *smiles*
Author's Response: Wait- there's more...hmmm, Elders and Blondies and Pets oh my! Thanks for the review (grins)
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Dark Angel
12/30/07 - 01:39AM 8: Chapter 8 Waking Dream Signed
NOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! WHY....WHY DID IT HAVE TO END RIGHT THERE??? GIVE ME A BREAK YOUR KILLING ME*drops to floor dead* HOW COULD YOU BE SOOO MEAN*glares at you with daggers* YOU DO THIS ON PURPOSE TO TORTURE ME!!!!!*smiles* Riki he is right there talking to Iason trying to get Iason to come back out of his darkness. But, the real question is...is how hard is it going to be for Riki to accomplish this task??? Iason is in really...REALLY bad shape...much so that the people who has him had to put him in a coma just so he would stay alive. PLEASE...PLEASE...PLEASE put up the next chapter soon. LIKE TOMORROW WOULD BE REALLY NICE... NE???*gets on hands and knees* Till then BYE LOVE!!
Author's Response: Get your tissue ready... for more than just tears (smiles)
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Dark Angel
12/19/07 - 06:57AM 7: Chapter 7 A Distant Light Signed
OH I HATE YOU TOO...FIRST I CRY FROM ANOTHER STORY I READ BEFORE THIS ONE...AND NOW YOU KEPT ME CRYING THOUGH OUT THE WHOLE CHAPTER.*smiles sadly...needs hug* But at least we now know what that myth about the FLAME was...." 'Riki, this is an ancient saying found on many of the walls at excavation sites at Menus Quentu it reads "The Flame will burn one's hands if held too tight" It is an old prophesy dating back to the dawn of Amoian Civilization. It simply means that when one's free will is taken, the flame of freedom will burn in one's heart.' " SO THATS THE MEANING AND WITH IASON CAPTURED IT HOLDS TRUE. But, this is what made my heart SKIP-A-BEAT..." ' This reminds me of you Riki, and how you have become this flame in my heart. I am both enslaved by you and set free because of my love for you. I could only hope you feel as I do' ".That just made me cry even more*needs another hug**sniffs* OH!!! AND WHEN THEY HAD SEX AND REACHED COMPLETION THIS HAPPENED...'Then Riki saw a flash of light in his mind's eye and saw himself standing on the edge of a cliff reaching after Iason who had fallen over'...HE SAW IT...SAW THAT IASON WILL SOON BE INTROUBLE. IASON ALSO SAW INTO THE FUTURE BECAUSE HE SAID THIS...' " Riki- I don't' know what just happened, I saw the halo and then found myself floating in a sea of darkness, then I heard you call me and I woke up".SO WHY IN THE NAME OF JUPITER DID THEY NOT HEED THOSE WARNINGS!!!! THE HALO WAS TELLING THEM OF THE THINGS THAT WAS ABOUT TO HAPPEN...NOW IASON IS GONE AND HE IS HEADED OFF TO GOD NO' WHERE...WITH PEOPLE WHO WE DON'T EVEN KNOW MAY MEAN HIM HARM. PLUS, WE HAVE A VERY PERVERTED DOCTOR WATCHING OVER HIM.*damn it if he lays a hand on Iason when he is laying comatose I'LL KILL HIM* Even though I said I hate you I STILL LOVE YA' TOO...this story is REALLY...REALLY GREAT, and I can't wait for chapter 8...needs to know if Riki's plan to use the Hot Springs to link with Iason will work...GOD I HOPE SO!!!!!*sending positive thoughts to Riki*
Author's Response: Hmmm, very perceptive my young padaone pupil....positive thoughts are flowing to Riki...stay tuned (smiles)
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21/04/08 - 11:37 pm
On: Chapter 7
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From amandatrue on July 14, 2009
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tamingriki said:
Last chapter was GREAT! There wasn't a dry eye in the house..including mine. Love happy endings. There are so few nowadays.
May your Muse of creativity keep the juices flowing.
Ciao!
Author's Response: Thanx for the kind words, I really like happy endings too, or I'll lose sleep (wah!) later....
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20/04/08 - 02:31 am
On: Chapter 18 Still Waters
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