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From ANON - Gryffgruff on November 01, 2008
Another excellent chapter!

Poor Li. Having to get whipped all over again. I hope it doesn't break him or drive him insane.

And darn you Tomoyo! You should have stood up to Rai and byotch-slapped him. But then again, if she did that she'd be dead.
Poor Tomoyo. D;

Rai's a right bastard in this chapter. But I love it. xD

So is Sakura going to find Touya and Yue! If she does, will she be happy or will there be a confrontation?

And as a final note. YAY!!! Yue's back!!! :D
Have his babies now Touya. ;)

Keep up the excellent work! And I can't wait til next Friday!
Darn cliffhangers! xD
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From Scorpinac on November 01, 2008
Well, next week should please many ravenous fan girls. Poor Syaoran, ouch. Tomoyo, pick a freaking side! And Sakura, liked her escape from the trolls, good thing their stupid. Also liked the Helping Hands(almost thought they were gonna get a little too touchy feely, but sadly they apparently lack interest.). Well, hopefully Sakura will reach the wisdom soon, and, I'm guessing, her brother, and then she'll convince him to help her save Syaoran. That, or Yue's going to go "talk" to Rai[;)], hehhehheh... Well, until then. Laters.
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From ANON - Hinata's Twin on October 31, 2008
Well, you had me fooled. His heart, eh? And yes, if I knew where you lived I'd do all that and more. Poor Sakura, she has no ide what's happening to our....I mean her Syaoran while she finding her way to Wisdom(that sounded weird). Ooooo we get to help pik a title, my sugestion would be, Majestic Return, or something to that effect, but this is your story.
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From ANON - Ranna on October 31, 2008
Tomoyo is a smart girl. And Touya broke Yue's heart...I feel sorry for Yue. And hex you for leaving us hanging like this!
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From ANON - cherrixwolf on October 31, 2008
(...I'm not very fond of aff.net's reviewing system. This is the second time it deleted my review before I submitted :/)

So it was Yue's heart then ♥ That was certainly clever. I don't know why I didn't piece those two together... The interaction between Touya and Eriol was brilliantly done ♥ And this does mean that we get Yue next chapter!? Because if Yue is not in the next chapter... then Touya is secretly madly in love with Rai.

I loved how the Helping Hands rhymed ♥ It was really fun to read out loud haha Syaoran's probably not going to be too happy to find out that Sakura's no longer safe in the underground of the Labyrinth. Then again, Syaoran has a little more than that to worry about considering that whole... whipping thing. Poor Syaoran ♥ Unfortunately, I doubt the Yue vs Rai showdown will be next chapter because Yue will probably want "talk" with Touya 8D Better luck in two chapters Syaoran...

Looking forward to next week's update!!!! :D ♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥ It'll be a reward for getting through that organic chem exam this Sunday (ugh sundays. that has to be illegal somehow...)

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From vix111 on October 30, 2008
Goodness! It's been far too long since I reviewed, Capitalist-san. I am sorry for not stroking the ego, I mean, feeding the muse. But Clamp has me in such a quiet mood with all the things they are pulling in the multiverse that it has become dificult te leave something meaningfull as a review. Plus, every time I mean to review, something interferes and takes me away from the labyrinth XO

Ok, so many things have happened. For once, you are showing us both sides of the antagonist, which is very new (aside from Yue in PS). Makes me wonder just what kind of ending Rai will have. Love how you keep the "Everyone in Bi" theme from CCS down to a tee XD
Touya's travelling through the labyrinth has become the comic relief now, which I like a lot, but Kero has been missing from some chapters now! And even though I like my SxS, I hope we have more spotlight on the boys soon enough. The scene with the Ghost of Syaoran's mother was beautiful, but makes me dread the ending of the story already! It's too soon to end XO

On an interesting note, Peacock!Kaho has to be the most amusing thing I have ever read her do or be XDD
And Eriol was love, and everything about them, even in their creepiness was awesome. I'm going to be a little selfish here and ask for more Ruby time! and probably some kero/suppi too. I am not afraid of Yue turning het, though, since everyone is Bi, everyone is happy!! :P
Besides, I think I've said it before, but YuexRuby is one of my guilty pleasures (OT3 when Touya comes in!!)

-start sarcasm+irony-

Capitalist-san, have I told you to read Tsubasa and xxxholic before? I mean, they are not connected to CCS in any way, whatsoever. Seriously. Want to see new characters? check out tsubasa! Besides, who doesn't like to see Syoaran kicking things for 200 and more chapters?? And Clow? Clow has nothing to do at all with the story. He made pretty cards because he was bored, and certainly for no reason at all!
(you can find it at onemanga F.Y.I XP)

-end sarcasm+irony-

Maybe the above mentioned feeds the muse??? XDD
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From ANON - Absinthe on October 27, 2008
Bites nails (Both at the story and the threat at the end. Turn Yue het indeed, *snort*.

OHHH
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From ANON - Gryffgruff on October 25, 2008
I loved reading Touya's interaction with Li's mother.

The one chance that Li and Sakura have to be happy with each other and it's coldly ripped away by Rai. The jerk! xD
I'm wondering who Sakura will run into down there? Yue or Touya?

And don't you dare make Yue het!! It would kill poor Touya (and me). T_T

Can't wait till next Friday! Keep up the excellent work! :D
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From ANON - cherrixwolf on October 25, 2008
...who could Yue possibly even be het with?!?! *pictures Touya wearing his Cinderella outfit*

When things are too good to be true, they're too good to be true. No one has seen that more that poor Syaoran right now going from heaven to hell all one day (and one chapter). What will Rai make Syaoran do? Better yet, how will Rai make Syaoran comply?

Sakura explaining to Syaoran about Yue was really touching because it really displays that despite her naivety, she can still be mature. Can't wait to see what's in for her in the Underground. A reunion with Touya which ends in the biggest sibling fight ever known to anyone?

The one thing I adored above all else in this chapter had to be the conversation between Touya and Syaoran's mother. She seemed like this outsider that's watching all these things unfold, helpless to do anything about them. But, she did give Touya another shard which I'm almost positive will lead him to find Yue. Yes? :D?

Looking forward to the next update!!! ♥♥♥
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From ANON - Ranna on October 25, 2008
I think that if everyone managed to sit down and talk without getting hysterical, they could work this out. I know they won't, but still...I love this story, and I can't wait til next Friday.
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From Scorpinac on October 25, 2008
Ouch, poor Syaoran... And poor Sakura, all alone now! And damn you! You couldn't have Rai's arrival happen after the hot monkey sex?!?!?! Are you just determined to deny me, I mean, us, our Sakura/Syaoran smut?! Well, hopefully you'll make up for it later(at least, you'd better!). Oh, and nice inclusion of Yelan and Illusion, by the way. And were Sakura's wings a form of Fly by any chance, a'la the Sakura Card version? Well, until next week then. Laters!
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From ANON - Hinata's Twin on October 24, 2008
How dare you threaten us with a Het. Yue. Where is the bugger anyway? Poor Touya he's getter exasperated. And Syaoran, tricky little wanker. I love how Rai was completly confuzled about where Sakura went until it hit him it was a trap door. And those Minions of his should just kill themselves they're useless.
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From ANON - Gryffgruff on October 23, 2008
All I have to say is that this story just keeps getting better!!

Sorry that I've been gone for so long, but my computer decided to off itself. D: So, I'm going to leave a review for all of the chapters that I was not able to review while I was gone.

First of all, I love that you made Kaho into a peacock. I think it suits her personality. xD
And the interaction between Li, Sakura, and Eriol was amusing. :D

When I first read the interactions between the Storm King and Tomoyo I thought no way would this work, but then as I re-read the chapter it started to make sense. And I'm kinda liking it now. :D
However, I have a feeling that one of their heart's will be broken later in the story. D:

I will always love all of Touya's scenes! You portray his character so well!
I love him getting all jealous. It makes me wanna see Yue even more. xD

Also, I love how you have Sakura and Li's relationship progressing! I also love Kero! xD

Keep up the good work and I hope you get over your writer's block soon, because you're an awesome writer!! :D

As a side note, sorry about my raping of the emoticons. I just can't stop myself. xD
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From Scorpinac on October 18, 2008
Ooh, I sense an imminent explosion, Tomoyo you may want to duck! I'll be honest, I find it a little hard to believe she's falling the ass...man, but apparently she is. Oh, well. Nice way of working in Eriol and Kaho, by the way, works very nicely. It'll be interesting to see where it goes next. Until next week, then. Laters.
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From ANON - Hinata's Twin on October 18, 2008
Inhale. Exhale. Yue will be back. That's better. Poor Rai he was so happy he had a child. Now his son dispises him. I think he see Yue as afather figure and doesn't realize it.
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