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By : DeathNoteFangirl

From TsukinoMelissa on November 24, 2008
He had hated the fact that they kept sliding down so much, that he had bent the arms right down over his ears. The arch of the glasses cut into the bridge of his nose now.

WHY I DON'T WEAR MY GLASSES. That right there. They slip and piss me off, so I have them all tight, and the nose piece leaves such a dent in my nose. AUGH. I'd just rather be blind.

And as always, amazing chapter! x3 It was hopelessly sweet. And these two are so cute! XD I just love them.
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From beckychanmattkun on November 24, 2008
Once again, brilliant chapter.

I swear we're reading each others minds though. Haha.

Love it.
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From Ninelives on November 24, 2008
*sobs* It's both sweet and sad. Matt's so cute and Mello so sexy...
I love how 5 stitches are not as important as the goggles XD
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From DeathNoteFangirl on November 24, 2008
{{{{Awhaaaa}}}}}

The feeling is mutual, cariad. Have you found us on MangaBullet by the way? http://www.mangabullet.com/MRS-Jeevas/profile

Glad you're liking the story.

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From Awhaaaa on November 23, 2008
"There is nothing you can deal out, Keehl, that I can't take."

OhMattydon'tmakemecry! :S That line srsly srsly kiiiilled me... in a good but sad way.

So anywayz, I am so happy you're writing another story. I just decided to click over to your profile, and sure nuff, there was a new story already 16 chapters long. I absolutely adore this story, and you! ;D
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From DeathNoteFangirl on November 21, 2008
(777 views after 16 chapters... in no way humbled to the point of squirming... much...)

Mattkun:

Awww, poor Century. I hope that his body will be taken back to the Llyn Peninsula from where Wammy's House stole him. Mind you, given what he did in your RP, the local tip might be more appropriate. Then again, he's Welsh, so the corpse candles might give away his grave. Mmmm....

Love you too! Glad you're enjoying the story. Mello is... yes, he is. *nods*

Nine Lives:

Chapter 16 pretty much wrote itself. I'm not saying that I wasn't in control of my characters, but one of them had lost his temper and so I wasn't about to try and control him. I just kind of cowered in the shadows on the landing and hoped that Matt could sort it. Oh! And took notes, of course, as a good author should.

Glad you enjoyed it.
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From TsukinoMelissa on November 20, 2008
You just gave me an idea for an oekaki. xD

Anyways, on to the review!

He raced out of the room and into the study opposite. "Matt! I'm having a panic attack!"

"No, you're not."

Said it a thousand times but I LOVE MATT!!!! XD He's so... Matt. "No you're not. Oh wait. Nevermind." I like how no is his default.

"I've used you!"

"Yeah, but I get off on it, so that is especially good."

XDDDDD Again, these two are brilliant!

And I don't know why but the last part of this update just had me choked up! D: These poor babies.

Though I am kind of emo about the debatable Hal/Mello friendship. T_T But I think they'll work it out somehow. -crosses fingers-
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From Ninelives on November 20, 2008
You made me cry a few tears.
I love your Mello, he's simply perfect. Moody, scary and over-emotional, but not really bad at heart. He just can't help himself.
Good thing Matt...well, likes it ... But now he needs a new pair of goggles!

Awesome chap, hun!
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From beckychanmattkun on November 20, 2008
LMFAO!
Oh god. That made me laugh. I think we're killing him off. We don't need a use for him now. Last thing he's going to do is to kidnap Matt on the stag night and try to kill them both.

As for this lovely new chapter.
Amazing, yet again.
I like the fact that Mello can flip out to extremes, but with one word he's fine.
It's nice to see that he can be loving, with that sense of danger.

Fucking amazing.
I love you, seriously.
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From DeathNoteFangirl on November 20, 2008
(I'm in shock. 15 chapters in and there's already 703 hits... :o)

Melissa:

Yes, I can certainly relate to the video game thing. No-one ever interupts when you're at the beginning of something, just when you're in the climatic fight or doing something that can't be interupted. *sigh*

LOL I love how you persist in thinking that Mello isn't a coarse, rude young man. LOL

*roars with laughter* I'm just imagining you getting caught looking up Alligator nipple clamps for reference. Ermm... awww, I was reading literature and.... and... :D

MattKun:

I'm still really honoured that you and your girlfriend are RPing based on my stories. Century does sound like he's a Very Naughty Boy in your stories though. *grabs MattKun's Century and drags him out here* Rydychi silffo y Matt? Cachwr! *smacks him* *sends him back to play with MattKun and Mrs MattKun* The Welsh today, filthy minds. *shakes head sorrowfully*

Nine Lives:

LOL Now I have the image of Mello in a shop buying them too. *snort* I'd actually imagined him getting them off the internet, but I like your version better.

Fine, in relation to Mello's view on Hal's perception of him, is very relative.
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From Ninelives on November 19, 2008
Hahaha I'm with Matt. When is it that Mello has time to buy sex.toys? LOL Mello in a sex-shop buying weird anal devices....priceless.
And now we have a proof of what I said. Mello and Hal are not really friends. She doesn't even know him for real, and he kept silence, so I guess he's fine with that.
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From beckychanmattkun on November 19, 2008
Ah once again.
Pure brilliance.

You know what I told you on Mangabullet. ^^ Heh.
Currently....

And, this is amazing see cause I never prompted this.
She [my girlfriend] knows I get most of my ideas from your fic. So either she can read my mind or she's been secretly reading this as well. xD

Remember what I said about the kidnapping?
Well we had Century [yes people beware, Century ish a kidnapper. o.o Ooh. Cept, he was older. >.>] Anyyyway. We had Century call up Mello with a recording he'd edited. Sounding like Matt had enjoyed it.
Mello blew, Matt ended up in the infirmary at Watari's I'll show it to you sometime.

Now he's back home and Mello won't let him do anything until he's better. xD
She's so mean. anyway.

I LOVE YOU AND YOUR STORIES! Keep it up.
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From TsukinoMelissa on November 19, 2008
AWWWWWWWWWW!!!! HAL IS SO... AWWWWW! I LOVE HER! SO SO MUCH! I mean, I've always loved her, but now I just love her all the more! Wow! Now it's time to quote things! xD hehe I leave the longest stinking reviews but I can't help it!!

Matt stood up. He had been through about five minutes of backstory to reach this point and wasn't prepared to go through it again. "Mello, do and die."

I think anyone who's ever played a video game totally can relate to this quote here. xD

"I was thinking of putting a gag on you, so we don't wake her. But waking her might be just the thing to convince her once and for all that it's not domestic violence." Mello ran his hands down Matt's back. "I'm talking loud. Really loud. See if she comes running down to save you."

Mello is a kinky bastard. XD This whole idea just makes me laugh.

Matt chewed his lip. "Or a bit cruel, considering that she fancies you."

Awwwww. D:

"Ok, so she'll be up there listening and wanking, but it would..."

*takes back the aww* Damn it, Mello, you moment ruiner.

"If you are using toys to enhance your side of the battle, I'm using some to back up mine." He desposited the statue of Mother Mary on top of his own bedside cabinet and turned to her to face the bed. From his pockets came the smaller figurines of saints, which habitually encircled her at the Marian Shrine in Mello's study.

Mello sat up to see. "Mmmm." He smiled. "Kinky."

xDDDDDD -dies laughing- This whole argument is just so ridiculous. I love them! They're so silly and kinky. xD

"Finally!" Mello leaned on the bed and stared at him. "Now he wants the boundaries conversation. I've only been trying to have it for weeks and now, right on the verge of having sex, he wants the boundaries conversation. Was it the nipple clamps?"

I. Love. You. I'm sorry, that sentence just... imagining it coming from Mello's mouth... If I had even the slightest idea of what those toys looked like, I'd make it a comic. XDDDDDD

I don't know what I'm going to do without you and your beautiful updates this weekend. I think I'll go into withdraw or something. I can feel my eye twitching already!
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From DeathNoteFangirl on November 19, 2008
Melissa:

XD I was giggling so hard writing that Sibera/President of Pakistan bit. I'm glad that it was as amusing to everyone else as it was to me.

I love your reviews. You always make me to look and think, 'wow, I wrote that what she's quoting?' Nice one! Yes, you should go oekaki. You is pwnage, kay?

Nine Lives:

Yes, that includes Near. Can you imagine that conversation? Mello: 'Hiya Near. You know that I engineered things so that I stole MY friend away from YOUR team? Well, now I've upset her and it would all be better if you'd pause in solving all the world's ills to just come back and teach maths to a bunch of kids. Just one afternoon. What do you say, Nate? Buddy. Old friend.' -.- Then trying to talk SHY Deontic into it. Oh and then there would be, 'Ohai Century, yes, I know I'm asking you to come back to Wammy's without the whole gang of us there to stop her detaining you, but would you come and teach history to the kids please? What? Oh! Because me and Hal have had a falling out and it would make her like me again.' In fact, I was endlessly amused whilst cooking my tea imagining half of those conversations. Hal's pwned him.

Flavourite:

WOW! I don't know what to you. You've just made my eyes fill up and I'm blushing so hard. Thank you!

I'm reading through with such a smile on my face. You've made me really proud of myself, thank you. As for questions of reviews over comments, I think we're pretty much treating this one as comment territory now. Which means that AFF might smack us, but I don't know. The software comes with 'review' as standard and it's a git to mess with all the php code to turn it into 'comment', hence I think they left it like that. (It took me nearly an hour to change it elsewhere. -.-) Don't underestimate how smart you are. You sound pretty smart to me.

Research - I always squirm at this, because I don't think I do nearly as much research as people think I do. When I do, I end up fascinated by it, so it's not excruciating. Thank you for your kind words here though. I'm currently grinning so much that I'm in danger of my face falling off.

8D re Watari Pt 2. Did you read the resolution too? So far, I've found only one person who has; but I knew as I wrote it that no-one reads the small print. It did my head in to write that one, so I don't expect anyone to have read it. The rest though were fun. I could have written those meetings indefinitely, which really would have ended up boring to read. LOL Thank you for your words about them. *shivery grin*

'kay, I will. I have another chapter nearly completed, so it will turn up today. I'm away this weekend, so there will be no updates on Saturday or Sunday, possibly won't be one Friday either. But I'll be back on Monday.

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From Flavourite on November 18, 2008
(Finally made an account here for reviewing and stuff. My lurking days are over.)

So. Yes. I've been meaning to say something since "It Matters" (and I think I have, on one occasion on LJ) but I've never actually thought I'm smart enough to write a helpful review. I still don't think I'm smart enough for that, but I hope I can manage to write something close to coherent. Without bursting into random keysmashes of joy every few words like I really want to do.

But enough about that. I'm supposed to review, right? So here goes it.

It never ceases to amaze me how far you can take Mello and Matt's relationship (and how much you can -- pardon the expression -- screw with their heads and their pasts and everything) without it becoming repetitive. And how many stories has it been now? Seven? Eight? It's amazing, at any rate, and you're an amazing writer.

Another thing you should be praised for -- and I mean PRAISED for -- is your research work. That requires infinite amounts of patience and I'm always left gawking in awe whenever I find someone who has it in them to go through with it from start to finish. Research is all fun and games in theory, but it's kind of excruciating in practice.

Also, in regards to "Watari pt. 2" -- it has to be the very first fic that had a sort of court drama feel to it that didn't make me want to scream. Really. It's amazing. So amazing that I'm tempted to think you're somehow hypnotizing your readers or something, because there's no way I'd normally sit and read through an entire chapter of legal stuff and child's rights without feeling like I'm being punished for something. I not only liked those chapters -- I loved them. Devoured them. That was genius. Matt and Mello are geniuses and you have a very special talent of making them talk and act the part. I don't think I've seen anything like this, ever. Not in the Death Note fandom, at least.

I think I'm slowly but steadily going off-topic and I'm not caffeinated enough to steer my brain back on track, so I'll end it here before things get really out of hand. One more thing before I go-go: it's amazing how many wonderful pieces of fanfiction you can write in such a short time span. Also, if anything I said so far sounded even vaguely creepy, that was not my intention. Some things just tend to sound better in my head than they do on paper. Virtual paper.

--wait, that doesn't make sense. I think I'm going to collapse for a bit now. You... write at your leisure, but update soon, okay? We're a demanding public. (:
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