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Reviews for Restart

By : Akureitsumetai
  • From Mic123 on October 17, 2010
    I love it so far, keep it up
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  • From ANON - D4rK on July 22, 2009
    Cool so far with fast updates, I like the way you are doing things but Im also confused about the last angel, if that his real identity, to be a uhh...vampire? Or some sort of thing like that. You last chapter got too many flash bags and strange plot confusion. Still it is nice that you at least update.

    This is not a flame but a slight advise, although you included a small dialogue of Rei's masturbation, to please more people you can describe these scenes properly like 'her hand caressed her sensitive spots' and mumbo jumbo. Keep the population happy you see?

    Anyway, hope you update soon.

    From Venezuela
    D4rK
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  • From ANON - klv__klv on July 16, 2009
    Heh, so rather than stupid flames, you would prefer intelligent flames? I personally see no reason to flame you at all. Bookmarkness! I look forward to your next update.
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  • From Church on June 02, 2009
    AHHHHH yes joyful tears have been brought to my eyes with this awesome update! Yet again I am really impressed on how the story is developing. Honestly I wonder if that creature thing is and whats its name since I would treat it as a x-factor or something. The timel ine got fucked i say!
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  • From Yamizenchou on May 27, 2009
    Funny, I saw a Crusnik when Shinji changed. His skin black with blue markings, his eyes white, four wings sprouting from his back. Curious. So what are the evil beings (Adam and Lillith most likely)? What is Shinji? And what is the cat doing to my neck?
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  • From ANON - 94saturn on April 24, 2009
    Great chapter I really enjoyed it and I hope there’s at least one lemon down the road.

    Again you need to break up the paragraphs so that only one character is speaking but that just takes practice. Otherwise you’re kicking ass here. If you would like my help you need only to ask.

    I have a favor to ask, please shoot me an email when you upload the next chapter. I don’t get to AFF very often because of the lack of stories that interest me and they don’t have an alert system for favorite stories.

    I hope to see the next chapter soon.

    Lord Saturn

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  • From ANON - 94saturn on April 24, 2009
    Chapter 1

    Well this is a good start Shinji has the chance for a ‘do over’ and Rei seems to be warming up to him. I’m not big on rehashes of the series but I see that it was necessary to set the stage.

    One thing that I need to mention is that you’re mixing more than one person’s dialogue in the same paragraph. That makes it confusing to read. What was beaten into my head with a blunt instrument was, ‘a new line every time a different character opens their mouth.’

    I’m looking forward to more of this story.

    Lord Saturn

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  • From Yustax on April 02, 2009
    You surprised me with this chapter. Being more elaborate since you already got the idea of what you're going to do. Well I think that the concept very well with Shinji remembering his past life to get to help Rei and to stop 3rd impact from happening. I think someone will know that Shinji knows everything. I take for granted that Gendo will be the first one right? It will be okay if you dont include sex in this one; I know its a free for all on this website. But some fics are very nice with or without sex as long as its not sex centered. So congrats in being pro story-then sex later guy. Well I'll talk to ye in the next chapter then...take care, hope you update soon!

    From Venezuela
    D4rK
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  • From Platinumsabr on March 11, 2009
    I can't tell you how impressed I am at your story so far. Truthfully, I loved the concept of Evangelion and the characters, but the whole way it was done didn't do it for me. I love this take so far and I'm eagerly hoping you continue!

    Not a hit against your beta or anything, but I can't help but point out one thing. In a story, novel, etc., when a new character speaks it's proper grammar to have it in a new paragraph, not one ongoing one as you have been doing so far. It also makes it easier to read, but that's probably why its a grammar rule, LOL. However, when the next words spoken are also said by the same character that spoke last, it's okay to keep it in the same paragraph. Just trying to help you out. Other than that easily rectifiable thing I can't applaud you enough, so please keep up the good work!
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  • From Chaoticorum on March 09, 2009
    I certainly hope rei will be alright, if the preview is any indication things are going to be exciting. With everything rei had gone through before the restart she deserves some happiness. I'm certainly looking forward to the next chapter.
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  • From Church on March 02, 2009
    FUCKING UPDATE WOOT!!! youve made shinji very slick and no longer is he well, that timid weak little dude. I like how the cat and mouse game is going between shinji and Rei its kinda heart warming and cute and he has a great edge into getting her since he does know abotu her the most but shes still in a way difficult to approach and well to make her be "open" to a point where she would be passionate and understanding of her feelings and shinji's. Cant wait for the third chapter. Good job dude.
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  • From ANON - Somebody on February 26, 2009
    Well, this is a really well written fanfiction. I look forward to future chapters.
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  • From ANON - starburst98 on February 13, 2009
    hmmmm......
    i am going to assume that they have sex in a later chapter since it was put on this site instead of the regular one. not that i mind, just pointing it out. i hope this gets to the end, seen too many fics die just as they were getting good and this is good right off the bat.
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  • From Raelax12222 on February 06, 2009
    First chapter and already it feels like a legacy is started this could be a very interesting take on the evangelion world im excited for more chapters and to see just how youre going to write this piece.
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  • From Chaoticorum on February 05, 2009
    Very nice,I like how descriptive it is. The backstory is really good too. I'll be keeping an eye out for new chapters.
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