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From KotoriSensei on December 06, 2009
Jajajajajaja, i love this chapter, everything of it even the blod and dead!!...because of course, was of : �Those Bastards warrant nothing less than to be called blooming idiots of a band of mindless %#@!*&!-in-bred miscreants who deserve nothing more than a long suffering death!�....XDDXDXDXDXDXDXDXDXDXDXDXDXDXDXDXDXDXDXDXDXDXDXDXDXDXDXDXDXDXDXDXDXDXDXD
Thanks for the new chapter and of course for the hole fic. To bad is endindg but of course, everything does, even the most fantastic fics as yours.
Suppouse the next chapter is a HUGE party with lots of lemon!!! Jijiji. At least for Iason and Riki and..mmm....Raoul and Yui (they deserve it)...and Argent and Omaki, Youshi and Heiku, Kai and Raimen, Darius and Victor and...do you get the idea? everyone!!! Jajajaja. Kidding. Is your last chapter and so far you haven't disapoint us, so lets see what you bring for us.
see ya!!!!
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From KatzeRaoul on November 22, 2009
Sorry, Sorry, Sorry for the late read and LATE review...work is all over the place due to the holiday season. But anywho....LOVED, LOVED, LOVED the chappie, very happy to FINALLY get to the fighting.*Now that's what I'm talkin 'bout* KICK ASS!!! Iason is out for BLOOD, and doesn't care who knows it!! Hell ALL the men are!*smirks* Can't wait to see what happens next!!*smiles*
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From Tlynn on November 18, 2009
Yayyyy! So happy- To tired to be more specific. Should have been asleep an hour ago *scowl* but happy.
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From KotoriSensei on November 17, 2009
Hi there!!! I love this chapter!!!! So much violence, but under the concept of justice and revenge and...i don't know but i loved to read of that ugly Elders fly and die by the hand of Yasuo's people. I found it...poetic...XDXDXDXD
As always a very long chapter, with a variety of scenes and feelings. The women fighting...OMG, that so smart. after all as Yuri said, there's nothing more important to us, that our children, and of course, there's nothing more dangerous that a mother!!! Elders better run!!! Jajajaja.
Hope to see you soon, with the continue of the battle, to see more Elders suffering as they deserve...(God, i'm so thirsty for blood!!! OoO'''')
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From ANON - barrie18 on November 17, 2009
Coffee and scones as usual My Lady, but I think you are about to be shocked at how short this actually is going to be :)

Everyone here is exactly where they are supposed to be and so true to form they are just about jumping from the page.

Even in battle, Raimen and Kai's humor comes to the forefront, just as Riki and Iason, once united in the minds eye still have that second to speak of love and assurance.

The Ladies are on the march and heaven help their husbands when the battle is over, especially Raimen, who never experienced the war hardened Queen, he left a widow.

There was a lovely sense of balance here, especially in the description of Raoul fighting along side Kai, it was new and old at the same time . .. a nice touch of the past catching up to the present and blending well with everything he had been feeling and experiencing before the battle.

Of course you then have the reunion of Omi and Yuri. . .whatever Omi is in the present or was in the past, he was a true 'friend', not just a trusted servant to his Queen, and they deserved that reunion, and hopefully a dance at the next Lords Dance...:)

And of course now that the past has caught up to the present, Omi, Argent and Yousi, had to have a very quick moment with Yui as well. So now the only thing left to happen is for the good Doctor to make it all complete.

Katze is ready to fight as only a mongrel can, and I hope we see more of him in the next chapter, and as to Yui. . .well he acted as expected, but I hope that this isn't his only moment as the battle continues.

So next chapter. . .do our heroes cross each other's path? Or as in Star Wars, do all fronts stay separate until all the evil Elders are taken down, and our heroes can happily fall into each others arms?

Hope you enjoyed the coffee and scones. . . and the next time we meet, hopefully it is to cheer at the evil Elders demise and Iason has taken down Lord Bastard :)
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From KotoriSensei on November 01, 2009
Hi!!! Another chapter, yes!!
This was a really good chapter! Not only Yuri's awakening by Yui and Katze's means (good for the empaths!) but also the very end with Riki's "awakening" too!!! That was just like a movie!!! jajajajajaja, i love it.
i can imagine what you eat or do to keep such an active an creative imagination, tell us your secrets, because not anybody could imaine such a complex but at the same time entertain and funny history. I really admire you, or most like your brain...can i marry him? XD
No kidding. Just please continue soon, because even as your fic has keep us all reading it until this point because it's very good, this final part is just amazing, and if i don't get to read the next chapter soon...i might die of a heart atack!!!
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From KatzeRaoul on November 01, 2009
Oh I hate you, I hate you, I hate you , I hate you....Everything was picking up and you stopped!!*whines* I DEMAND THAT YOU UPDATE RIGHT NOW YOUNG LADY!!*thrusts finger in face*
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From ANON - kallipso on October 21, 2009
Thank you for a wonderful story I can't wait to read more. I love the way that you have the characters interacting with one another and getting into trouble or being pulled into trouble all the time. I can't wait to see how flash fried the Elders get between the warriors, intellects, and queens after them it should be a good roast if there is anything left that is.
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From KatzeRaoul on October 18, 2009
Iason, Raimen are like caged lions waiting to be unleashed. God help those that stand in there path.
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From barrie18 on October 18, 2009
Well once again we meet up m'lady to chat about what our 'friends' are getting up to and what is possibly going on in their minds that hasn't come to the surface yet. So coffee and scones as per normal :)

Somehow, I've always thought of Yuri as a more gentle refined soul. .. .however that 'mutt' remark killed off that idea. I can see she too is going to be a handful in her own way.

Erin's one way dialogue with her was revealing as well as heartbreaking. I have been trying to get my mind around their little foursome and how the 'girls' fit in. Kai and Raimen do love each other, so it is more than physical (although from there antics half the time, you really have to dig deep to work that out :) ) but I begin to think the Queens are their balance and their very hearts. They are the ones who can ease the pain and confusion of those two horny toads, past and present. I don't hope to see the four of them 'gallivanting when we hit the happy ending, but I do hope there is a small private moment with each couple somewhere, as they find each other again.

As to Yuri's awakening. . .well she lived through a war, and since women are made of sterner stuff than men anyway, I truly believe that once she awakens, and hears she is needed, she will focus and get down to business quick smart.

Erin. . .you just have to love her, bossiness and all :)

As to Jupiter, Erin is good, but Jupiter is better. . . Erin talks about first going to Arista , but Jupiter basically gives her a cart blanche to go straight to Yasuo, where the 'empaths' are.

I believe Lady Erin will succeed in reaching her destination. Your job is to make sure she arrives there safely, and aid her on her trek to find the young Prince.� ROFL. .. yes. . . even Jupiter has to pull the wool over the 'mens' eyes to cut through the red tape. . . Tell them it's Arista, and then take then where they need to go. . . .brilliant move.

(passes the coffee and scones over)

Iason's household is really being turned upside down. Everyone except Daryl and Toma are along for the fight. So from a full house, only those two and a cat are left to worry. . .And it is a worry, because there will be a battle and in battle people die. . .and so far even though the Blondies and their forces have been lucky in the present with seemingly no casualities, can this luck hold out in the current battle?

So help is on the way, aboard the Lord's Shield. . .a very appropo name indeed.

Poor Riki, he is really playing a cat and mouse game here, shows just how much he has changed, as the past Riki would never have been able to not move for so long. . .still the slight 'twitch' shows that not everything is under control. And that Bastion and Simon aren't completely tricked by it all either. They know who they are dealing with.

As to what is taking place on the Chariot. . well it is just before the battle and each one is getting themselves ready in their own way. And although Kai and Iason are in turmoil over Riki, it is really Raimen, who has the most conflict, and can't understand the conflicted feelings within himself. I always thought that Kai would turn out to be the loose cannon, but he is a Warrior and knows battle, whereas Raimen, really never experienced any of it. I'm afraid that once the bloodlust takes over, Kai won't beable to do a thing, and only Yuri will get him back to himself.

Have to admit, the feeling behind Erin's waking dream was mystical, but I couldn't decipher its meaning. So why do I have the feeling that beside's Yousi's death, she is seeing something more and that Yuri is also in on the act. Although it is not an Intellect trait, would Yuri have a bit of the empath in her as well, and pick up on this is where Yousi died as she was close to him, Omi and Argent?

So as we finish our coffee and scones, I find myself waiting for the coming battle. This was really more an interlude with facts being learnt, emotions from all quarters coming across and forshadowing as we watch Yui's and Katze's powers grow. . .

As I said earlier, . .I don't want harm to come to our heroes but with what Yui can see and feel, might make him careless especially when it comes to Raoul, and Katze was never one to hold back at the best of times. . .

Ah well. . . .back to waiting patiently. . .again.
Cheers :)

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From KotoriSensei on October 18, 2009
Hi there! Just until this chapter i realized that you write: "Thanx for reading my little story!"...my little?!!! I has 3 very long parts!!! What is a long history for you? Anyway, i don't care...in fact if yoy decide to write a long one...i'll be happy to read it!!!
This chapter...i actually though Yuri will wake up...but she didn't...T-T In the next chapter maybe...?
On the other hand, it did happen a lot of thing including the travel...jajajaja. One point for Jupither leaving Erin with her mouth wide open...i must conffes you something..i don't really like her (Erin)...maybe because...i don't know...see her as a wall in Kai and Raimen's relationship? (Of course, they all accept each other, but it's not the same as there were just the two of them...i'm nuts...) Maybe because she is so..stubborn and double-faced? (She smile all swetty but goes giving order to everyone...) I know she is not like that!!! But that'a my perception an i...really don't like her..sorry...Or maybe i'm just proyecting my own defects on her...jajajaja, that's Freud speaking...
Too bad Daryl had to stay alone...but i guest he would't be of any help at all.
About Iason and Raimen anger...OMG! I want to see them kicking some asses!!! THAT will be really funny..or at least realising...
Well, i leave you. read you in your next chapter!!!
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From Tlynn on October 05, 2009
I am really enjoying your story and find myself speculating on how Lady Erin will react when she learns that "Dear Roul" nearly killed her son (if you are sticking with the Taming Ricky cannon). How will she or Kai react when they find out that thier son-in-law used to torture his "pet"?
Really a wonderful job and now I will have to sit here and wait for your next installment.
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From barrie18 on October 04, 2009
Coffee and scones as per normal m'lady. . .and I hope you have patience with me.. ..

(Sips the coffee) There is something wrong here m'lady, or something we are not yet aware of. My memory tells me Prince Riki ran from Amoi when he discovered Eric in Iason's bed. He was hurt, furious and as far as he was concerned never coming back because he had been betrayed. However upon arriving on Yasuo, it seems he has flown the coup because he did not like the explanation and fearing the possibility that Iason had been unfaithful.

Then again, later on when speaking to Viho, he talks of finding a way back to Iason one day.

This is more a hurt and upset than the fury and anguish that took place earlier. So did something else happen to cause him to not go back and ask questions and get to the truth?

Interestingly enough (passes scones over) this leads to something I took note of, but didn't really think about. All the others so far who have rebirthed and awakened (Raoul, Omi, Yui, etc) all seem to have the same or similar personalites that they had in the past life. The only two who have two very disparate ones are Riki and Iason.

The Ancient Iason was more fun loving and easy going. Ancient Riki, was more serious and less social than his modern day counterpart. Biggest difference. . . if current Riki had found Iason in bed with anyone. . .he wouldn't have run. . .Riki the Dark would have had a few body parts lying around his feet as he got his answers. . .Ancient Riki, was nice and loving, but was more insecure in his feelings towards Iason. So he ran away to lick his wounds, and then according to this latest revelation, wondered if Iason had been telling him the truth afterall.

(fills up the coffee cup)
Of course the fact that Riki is in collar andchains at the moment wouldn't go down well with him. Let alone the Prince side of his personality, Riki the Dark would be smoldering away waiting to make his move. Collar and chains. .. .indeed. :)

As to Yui, Erin and the Gang. . .

I had a feeling they would all meet up.. . but I do have to admit there were a few unexpected surprises in the meeting.

It was nice that Erin kept her promise and held Yui's hand throughout, aside from the temper, she truly has a gentle heart. . However, similar to Kai, she too wants to keep Yui in the dark about what happened after his death. Because if she had told him that yes Raoul had found him, then the next question would be. . .And then?. . . so perhaps she feels that this part of the story is best for Raoul to tell. because He and Yui really will need to sit down and talk about alot of this, for them to find balance in the present.

So Yuri might awaken similar to Erin, without the others there. . .knowing Raiman, who always it seems to me likes to avoid unpleasant things. . it would be easier if he returned to a Queen fully awakened rather than watching her sufferings during the War. He already saw her age and die. . . through Omi's eyes. It would probably kill him to see it through hers.

And Katze is an empath. . .rofl. . . Surprised and not surprised. Not a reborn Warrior but one made of new stuff, who can handle the hard facts of life and deal with things in a smart manner. Plus Yui too seems to have empathic qualities. I guess the coming battle will be one of Street Smarts and power. . .Because these former Attendants had to learn many strategies to keep peace and survive with their "Masters" And I imagine many of those skills will come in handy when dealing with Elders in Battle. It can't all be a shoot out, but a game of wits as well.

(another scone?)

Elder Theo is a marvel, and there is something definitely brewing between him and Raiman. . .but then again, when doesn't have Raiman have something brewing with someone. . . rofl

BTW, is there hope for Elder Simon? He seems to be questioning his beliefs? Why do I get the feeling he is about to become a key player when it comes to turning the tide of battle.

Once again I love the interplay that goes on here, and that we get to see so many sides to the story. Each one imparts its own importance and still supports the others.

Well coffee has ended again, and RL calls me. Shall try and wait patiently to see what happens next. :)

cheers.. . .

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From KotoriSensei on October 04, 2009
Hi there!!! What a long chapter!!! thanks!!!
I love Theo, he is a very funny old guy...even if Raimen calls him "boy" or something like it.
So now they count with the "surprise factor" which will help them to rescue Riki and the Yasuo people. Of course like always there might be a factor than complicated things at the end but...LOVE WILL PREVAIL!!!! Buajajajajajajajajajajaaajajaja!!! (evil laughy)
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From barrie18 on September 19, 2009
Coffee my Lady?

Action packed is putting it mildly, as so many things were going on at one time.

But poor Raoul & Yui, do you realize they are the only awakened couple that have not had a 'moment'. .. I know . . .I know. . .you can say Erin and Kai didn't have a moment either, but as you've said this is yaoi, so their moment would essentially have been that kiss in the mind's eye (very romantic mind you and much appreciated :) )

So I would anticipate a Very big moment when those two do get together in real life. . . one that is not only full of joyful smexing, but alot of verbiage to cover who they are, where they are in time, and what the future holds for them . . quite a tall order eh?

As to Yui's actually awakening, well it was more heartbreaking as he took on a man's job when still a child. The only confusion I have though is when he rescued the child Amanda, was he using a laser pistol or was that his inner power? Because when I first read it, I thought inner power and yet later on he is shooting laser pistols. Unless this was done as habit similar to Omi and gang to make sure Elders weren't able to hone in on their energies to find them.

Reason for that. . . there is a battle coming and children need to be protected. I can't see Erin not diving in even from a distance, and Yui would be close behind. Especially since he is under the misconception that he failed Raoul, by not protecting the children. He really was so young and it comes across in that scene. He was young, insecure and involved with a mature Elite, who must have seen like the sun and moon to him (and still does ::big grin:: ). He hadn't even become a 'lord', it is no wonder Raoul would have named him a Sentinel Elite in name only. It would have given Yui a sense of 'identity and maturity' for lack of better words. But came with the price that he felt he failed his lover by not being up to snuff. . .

Getting away from Yui. . (more coffee? scone?) I reckon there are 2 more awakenings that need to take place. Of course Lady Yuri's much anticipated one, but at the moment poor Heiku is really out of it. . . is the battle of Yasuo going to get his brain in gear?

Elder Theo is an amazing addition to the group, and really stood his ground saving Yui in the mind's eye while being beaten in real life. Although I can't see him leaving his planet to live on Amoi, I do hope he is not a casualty of war, as besides being a nice person, empaths are needed

Riki and Iason. . . curse those collars that stop their powers. . . unless Riki has enough sense to 'play dead'. . and that is why Iason couldn't pick up on him. Forgetting his Prince personality, he is still Riki the Dark and still has his street smarts. . . it would be nice to see them come into play in the coming battle. I would think all his skills past and present would be needed here.

So an end to another coffee session. . .and now a 2 week wait (damn) till the next update. Once again an amazing chapter, with plenty of emotion, action, and questions for this person to ponder till next time.

Have a good day. . . :)

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