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Reviews for King of MolMol

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  • From heavyarms3111 on April 09, 2010
    Great Story, can't wait to read more.
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  • From RAW19 on April 08, 2010
    One of the few stories i've seen with such a big focus on Su and her family. You've done a pretty good keeping things fresh and keeping them all in character. I'll be looking forward to more, so please keep up the good work.
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  • From Mangafreak on March 31, 2010
    ...........................damn. this chapter is HOT!!!!!!!!!!! Every sentence, every word...pure genius! i'd even go as far to say i was jealous of how well you're doing with this story. But i'd much rather praise you for it. so here it goes
    1) Brilliant idea having Asuna actually be related to Motoko and Tsuroko and bonus points for having Asuna call Tsuroko Tsu-chan. that's so cute.
    2) Yuna is a total babe. the description of her is great and i love how she's dominant over Kotomi.
    3) I loved the end parts showing each of the girl's in theri respective rooms. each one was enjoyable to read and was good for the plot as a whole in my opinion. i especially loved the interaction Su had with Shinobu. Shinobu is so cute i can barely stand it!

    As for other girls, i approve of the mothers, Mei, definately Nyamo and Sarah and i would like to see Motoko's groupies somehow get involved. that is if you feel like it, honestly i'd like it either way.

    This made my night and now i'm pumped and have to start writing in the little time i've got left before i need sleep. cannot wait to see the next chapter you write, but until it's done i shall wait patiently for it. It's totally worth waiting for.

    Descendant of the shadows
    -Twisteddarkness
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  • From JohnMadden on March 31, 2010
    This is one of the best lemons I've ever read
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  • From DarkMachine on March 31, 2010
    Well, I know what Kei feels like now...seriously I nearly died when I finally...yeah, it was THAT hot. Can't wait for Nyamo's appearence, loving the way you're making the Aoyama's love it up the arse, can't wait for the young tigress that is Motoko. The OC's are absolutely fantastic, your exposition of their stories is measured well, not revealing too much at the start or at once is something most writer's can resist, it's admirable that you're doing so well. Keep this up, Kitsune's scene promises to be great too, if you've ever read the story 'Weapon of Mass Destruction' on here you'll see why, she's a damn nymph, laid back, cool and slinking around like a lazy cat or fox, I can imagine her being very warm and snuggly seductive, if you know what I mean. Plus her tits are beautiful.

    Keep it up mate!
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  • From Killerman83ca on March 30, 2010
    That part about Naru and the aphrodisiac perfumes got me laughing my head off. I can't wait to see if you will bring Haruka there also for some Aunt and Nephew time. How about Haruka and Keitaro spend some time alone to get a feel of each other if you know what I mean. Haruka want's a go with her Nephew before he get's married. Beside's Haruka and Kanako might be good for a threesome with Keitaro. It is only an idea. How about you start in the morning with everyone waking up with Naru still trying to get the happiness out. It is only an idea. If I come up with anything else I'll send you a message.
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  • From naruto86 on March 30, 2010
    Damn this is getting kinky, I LOVE IT, keep it up!!!
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  • From Megatyrant on March 24, 2010
    Boy, am I happy to see a master-piece such as this in the works. So far, it is shaping up to be very interesting, to say the least.
    The fact that I love harem-fics is just an added bonus. And no-one can say that the MolMol girls aren't hot. :)
    Here's to hoping for more of this great piece of entertainment. :)

    Megatyrant out.
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  • From TheMediocre on March 21, 2010
    And more inspiration
    Mitsune/Naru/Mokoto: http://z14.invisionfree.com/The_Fanfiction_Forum/index.php?showtopic=13367
    Haruka: http://z14.invisionfree.com/The_Fanfiction_Forum/index.php?showtopic=608
    Mitsune/Naru/Mokoto: http://z14.invisionfree.com/The_Fanfiction_Forum/index.php?showtopic=1870
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  • From TheMediocre on March 21, 2010
    Great story, can't wait for more. Will you be including more of the MILF squad, like Mokoto's or Mitsumi's mothers? And of course Tsuroko too?
    More inspiration (if you haven't already read them:
    Molmol queens: http://www.darkscribes.org/site/story.php?story=388
    Mitsumi's mom: http://www.darkscribes.org/story/357
    Large harem including Haruka (because a cousin is fine too) and Nyamo http://www.mediaminer.org/fanfic/view_st.php?id=149015&submit=View
    Mokoto and Tsuroko's mom : http://www.mediaminer.org/fanfic/view_st.php?id=135897&submit=View
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  • From animefan29 on March 21, 2010
    I thought that this was a rather good chapter and think that you should continue this story. Despite its length it was quite easy to read and follow, a good indication of talent.
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  • From Shywanderer043 on March 18, 2010
    A very great story ^^ Can't wait to see future chapters and see what will happen...especially when the hinata girls find out and how they'll react *Grins* I imagine already how motoko and naru will behave >:)
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  • From Killerman83ca on March 15, 2010
    Can you add another chapter to it please. I would love to know what happen's next better all of them.
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  • From DarkMachine on March 11, 2010
    Well damn, this is brilliant. Absolutely brilliant, this is exactly how I've always pictured Kaolla being sexually, out there and in Kei's face. Can we get some hot Shinobu + Nyamo (her tanned twin from Pararakelse) + Motoko anal akshion? Moto always needs to get it in her ass first, and Nyamo is just hawt, I mean when Shinobu gets a tan they're basically twins. Rawr twins! Kitsune could fit in too as the freeloading party girl, but right now this is just damn awesome anyway, give us more you perverted man you.
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  • From naruto86 on March 11, 2010
    DAMN I LOVE THIS ONE YEAH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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