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Reviews for Hit This City

By : cnakitny
  • From JLucPitard on February 02, 2011
    Good set up. I like Ranma's personality here and Akane comes across well. I like the concept and look forward to seeing where it goes. I think Ranma 1/2 has a bit of a following on this website, so you have an audience.
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  • From ANON - My Favorite Dream on December 26, 2010
    Wonderful beginning, and very well written. Honestly, it's just so refreshing to read something intelligent and mature that doesn't rush the sex - I just hope it continues in this vein, and that this doesn't become a piece of erotica with zero substance (if Ranma becomes a willing whore instead of a bodyguard, I'm checking out, lol). And as a Ranma/Akane fan, I hope their relationship continues to evolve in a realistic and intriguing way. In such a unique setting, I don't know how it couldn't! In any case, I'm looking forward to reading more!! Thank you for writing this.
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  • From kagomeisawsome26 on December 05, 2010
    i hope you are gonna write another chapter soon. i wanna see what happens to that guy that beat the crap out of ukyo....:D
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  • From scifinut64 on December 04, 2010
    This is a real good start, love the way you are doing the Ranma cast, looking forward to more chapters.
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  • From Animedevildog on December 04, 2010
    This seems to be rather good, though I am not used to reading the Ranma cast in such roles. As to people not reading Ranma fanfics, it's actually one of my favorite fandoms. And the length, I think it was a really good length for a chapter. Long enough to be enjoyable, but not so long, that it gets boring.

    Keep up the good work, and I am looking forward to the next installment in this story
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  • From Neihaera on December 04, 2010
    Kudos, this has a lot of potential. Only thing I would like to suggest (SUGGEST, mind) is that you don't push Ranma's foot-in-mouth disorder too much. Yes, I'm painfully aware it's a canon-nazi icon, but he(she?) has been living on the street, and is either cast out of the Saotome family or sufficiently ashamed of it to be hiding his/her affiliation. Besides ... I'm a romantic at heart - as much as I don't particularily LIKE the Ranma/Akane pairing (suffering, as so many do, from the extreme shortage of hot ginger) it would be nice to see some level of connection.
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 03, 2010
    Its good, please continue.
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  • From ANON - wispy on December 03, 2010
    You have my attention! I'm always up for a good Akane-fic. Keep writing, and I'll keep reading.
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  • From ANON - spch on December 02, 2010

    Good story so far, looking forward to more.
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  • From hsaotome on December 02, 2010
    Oh, there are still those of us who read Ranma fan-fiction. Although this one is a bit different. Soun, Akane, Kasumi and Nabiki all unrelated? Seems a little weird. It'll be interesting to see Ranma having to get dressed up, including makeup, to work in the place. And I can't help wondering how the curse will make itself known, and what Soun might plan once he finds out about it.
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  • From ANON - Xochen on December 02, 2010
    I have loved this story so far! People definitely do still read Ranma 1/2 fan fiction, however the authors are beginning to dry up a bit. I can't wait to read more of your story should you wish to continue it, the chapter length was great. I look forward to seeing how Ranma-chan interacts with all of the others are Soun's place. Happily, Akane will be able to get rid of those idiot workers she has to deal with.

    Thank you for sharing this story with us all,
    ~Xochen
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  • From theklvkid2 on December 02, 2010
    I'm pretty interested in seeing how this turns out. Sounds great so far.

    klv
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  • From dumbledork on December 02, 2010
    Great start so far. I really like it and I hope that Ranma won't work as a prostitute in this one. There are already enough of those.

    I noticed that you got some personal pronouns wrong in the last part.
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  • From Soverayne on December 02, 2010
    Amazing re-tell of the characters. Looking forward to more.
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  • From Sethite on December 02, 2010
    Wow, that was pretty nice story. He he he. Well done.
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