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Reviews for Hit This City

By : cnakitny
  • From ANON - Crumpet on April 06, 2012
    Probably one of the most interesting Ranma fics I've read in years, and the citrus scent is just icing. I really wasn't expecting anything of literary value on AFF.net, but you have me hooked. Can't wait for the next chapter. It does seem like Ranma might be a little underpowered compared to Ryoga though? Maybe Ranma's just under the weather from starving for who knows how long.
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 31, 2011
    Nice story so far; I hope you continue it.
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  • From tuatara1point0 on October 06, 2011
    This was another great chapter, and it renewed some of my interest byreferring to Ryouga as a "privileged little douchebag." Nice. Good job!
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  • From tuatara1point0 on September 15, 2011
    Yeah, I definitely dug this more when I thought it was a girl-type Ranma story. Oh well. Like I said, it's still pretty interesting stuff...and I'll certainly check out any future chapters!
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  • From tuatara1point0 on September 15, 2011
    Er. You'd be surprised if anyone still reads Ranma fiction? Really? Not to worry, it's still going strong.

    I quite dug this first chapter, all except for one thing. I didn't really want there to *be* a curse in this. It seemed like this was to be a fairly realistic story using the cast as inspiration. I'm usually all for the curse, but the idea of a story about these two girls was quite appealing to me.

    Well, it's still quite an engrossing story. Now to read the second chapter!
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  • From ANON - Kazuma on September 14, 2011
    I am loving the story and am thrilled that it is being updated. I just hope that female Ranma will playa part in the exploitive industry.
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  • From ANON - wisp on September 11, 2011
    happy day. Still writing? Please keep writing.
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  • From dumbledork on September 11, 2011
    Chapter 2

    Great new chapter. Usually I hate Ranma/Akane stories but this one is nice. I wonder if Ranma will be able to work as a guy. I'm sure Soun will think that his girl form would attract a lot more customers, especially so if Kuno had a Ranma-chan fixation in this story.
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  • From ANON - Lyric on September 10, 2011
    I like this story. Not sure (yet) why its here, and not on some other, less adult, website, though I assume thats because of future content.

    I like Akane in this, especially how she tried to buy girl clothes for ranma. Funny, and it shows a fair bit about how they both think.

    Looking foward to more, and to seeing what happened to Genma.
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 12, 2011
    Please continue.
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  • From ANON - Anon on May 21, 2011
    Nice start, I hope you keep writing this.
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  • From A2Carter on April 18, 2011
    I actually found this story by pure luck just now, decided to look for Ranma-fics for old times sake and all xD
    I love what you did so far, actually has a plot and the lenght is awesome. I'm usually suspiscious about too much AU stuff, but the details really made it ok and without the girls being Ranma's crazy fiancees it really seems possible for them to be friends with Akane.
    Hope you update soon or at least not abandon this story. It seems like one of these stories you could easily make your own with a few changes here and there and other character names, the fact that it's a Ranma-ff just makes it all the more endearing to me ^^
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  • From ANON - kaskisproxy on March 13, 2011
    I love the story so far and really hope you continue. best of luck.
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  • From ANON - immo on February 20, 2011
    Please please please continue. This fic looks interesting and *I* still read ranma fanfics. lol. Ranma, oh, that was such a good manga/anime.
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  • From ANON - Anon on February 12, 2011
    More, please!
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