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By : tinkerheck

From ANON - Dez on December 27, 2015
I just got through reading this amazing story. It made me laugh, smile, angry, cry, and think. You are an amazing story teller and had me hooked at chapter 1. I'm going to have to see what else you have written because if any more of it is like this, then I can't wait. Thank you for writing and sharing. Not even sure what the biggest draw was, but your humor definitely matches mine. Good luck in all your endeavors!
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From ANON - NotWhatSheSeems on July 29, 2015
Excellent work! I thoroughly enjoyed it; as an avid Black Butler fan, I found this to be a fresh take. My thanks to the author. My husband would thank you as well due to his reaping the benefits over the three nights I read it.
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From ANON - toki on March 16, 2015
Saved my review for the end. I LOVED this fic. I liked how you made Sebastian more complicated than he appeared in the anime. I liked how cheesy it was in some aspects and dramatic in others. I'm a sucker for cheesy ending so I definitely loved how Gilda and Sebastian (or Alex) were together in the end. 100/100 A+
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From ANON - mar on October 13, 2013
I came here from fanfiction.net. I reeeally loved this chapter as well as the others. Thanks for your work! :)
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From ANON - Squeal on July 13, 2013
I loved this. I just can't even.
I'm going to miss reading this now that it's finished. OH MY GOD, PLEASE CONTINIUE TO WRITE. I am pretty much certain that I will adore anything you write.
EVER.
Ugh I just love this so fuckin much.
AHHHH
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH
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From ANON - Mary on December 07, 2012
I am very sorry you felt your story was not read or enjoyed much. I think it probably has been, much more than you imagine. The plot was interesting and the ending was surprising, but it made me happy to know that Gilda and her demon could still be together... and that Ciel finally found a place to be at peace. I really enjoyed reading this. I think your writing is of a much higher caliber than much floating around cyberspace. So nice to read something without spelling errors and incorrect use of vocabulary! ( I was especially glad to see that Gilda was the demon's PREY, and not PRAY ;-)
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From POHness1 on August 27, 2012
I would like to thank you for this wonderful piece of lyrically written gold. It is THE best Kuroshitsuji fanfiction I have read so far. though I, myself, am not one to read first-person stories and enjoy them, this story grabbed me right from the beginning. The main reason being that is is FANTASTICALLY written in the voice of Sebastian, and what i feel to be so very close the the actual voice of the character that i could hear him in my head. it felt like i was walking in his shoes throughout the entire story, and that made it spectacularly great. Tragic though it became throughout the middle, I just could not walk away from a single chapter. I just started this story yesterday, and it was begging to be finished soon or I would die from curiosity as to the fates of the lovely Gilda (who i also hold my hat out to. she is one of the few female OCs that i actually LIKE. and believe me, that is saying something) and the ever so wonderful Alexander (good choice of a name change, if i say so myself.) this story will be ingrained in my memories for a long time. i thank you for the hours of enjoyment. Truly, it was a bewitching tale. *grand applause*
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From ANON - afrieal on August 24, 2012
I just started with this anime a few days ago at the behest of my little brother and his boyfriend and then started looking for fanfiction *grin* I ABSOLUTELY LOVE your fic and hope you do a few oneshots after this. If it wasn't off someone elses property i'd say publish the sucker. you have a gift truely. My partner and I are both writers altho i do mainly fan fictions and my partner does origional sci fi and some gothic horror. I truely loved reading your work and stayed up all night reading it. Please don't be discouraged by luke warm responces If writing makes you happy then write. screw the haters and luke warm responces do what makes you happy.

Be Well
Afrieal
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From ANON - JasmineRiddleXAngel on August 19, 2012
I remembered seeing this on ff.net but haven't had a chance to read it in its entirety. I adore this piece! You wrote Sebastian/Alexander very well and I really enjoyed his character to the fullest. I also loved how it was in first person, which for his particular character either aren't done well or just not attempted. I also LOVED Hilda, even when she was being a pain for Alex.
Overall this piece is fantastic and I am so glad to have read it!
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From ANON - risi on August 13, 2012
I'm late I'm late I'm late! I feel like the white rabbit, but that's what happens when a relative gets married and darn if there's not a another one next month requiring more flying. I wonder if they plan it this way? Anyway...

Wow, it's over. Somehow I kept thinking it would last longer, which is silly since I knew it was coming up to the end. It took me a while to figure who the mysterious duo was. I kept thinking it was Ciel and Alois, which I knew made no sense, so when I finally figured out it was Ciel and William I was blown away. I simply couldn't figure out what they were up to, just bonding over watching Sebastian up to his old tricks never occured to me. I did think that Ciel would eventually get eaten, thus fufilling his part of the bargain with Sebastian and leaving Sebastian free to not eat Gilda, but I wasn't sure how they would do that. I like the way you did that so now Sebasstian and Gilda can be together without her dying eventually. I'm a bit sorry about Ciel, even though it was what he wanted, but now he really is gone, save for fueling Sebastian, and when that's done there really will benothing left. Maybe Will will miss him a bit now that he no longer has anyone to watch "As the Demon Churns" with anymore. On the other hand, I have my own theroies about souls and what happens to them, so that makes me feel better. So, I loved the story, thanks for sharing and I hope you will write more.
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From ANON - KHRLover1997 on August 12, 2012
i love the ending, i also read this fic at FFN, and was sad when chp 10 says completed until i read the chap!!! ^_^ I love you so much*though i don't know you*
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From ANON - persephone on August 11, 2012
Ugh. OC's -_-

Stop writing self-insert fics please.
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From ANON - Little Black Kitty on August 06, 2012
Well... I am well and truly at a loss for words. If I wasn't in tears at the end of this chapter I was so after going to Youtube and following your instructions.

So, I woke up at 3am and couldn't go back to sleep and now I am here. I had spent some time meditating and... *sniffles*

I want to say so much. My stomach hurts right along with Alexander/Sebastian. I've a knot in my throat. After listening to Thais Meditation I realized I knew of a piece of music I could see fitting the end of this chapter. I write ... used to write, to it frequently. You'll find it at youtube under "sad romance thao nguyen xanh". I'm going to have to go back to meditation in order to go back to sleep, but I don't regret it a bit. The little twinge in my heart from your story is best felt in the quiet dark. I'm going to go cry now.

Loves to you!

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From ANON - Little Black Kitty on August 02, 2012
My dearest, darlingest, most brilliant and wonderful Tinkerheck,

I am sorry I've not been reviewing. I really don't have a good excuse except that I get caught up deep in the throws of something akin to depression, though not quite, it's just the best description. But, I have been reading this whole time. It is five am in the morning and I've not yet been asleep, and amazingly enough I have the energy FINALLY to type you out a review.

I honestly owe you a review as long, brilliant, delicious and satisfying as this chapter has been, but it is five am and I really ought to be at the very least pretending to sleep. Instead I will declare that I love you. I adore you. I am deeply, deeply jealous of you but in the best of ways. I wish I could write like you do.

I love your command of music. It gives Gilda such a realism. She lives and breaths because of these beautiful touches you've given her and Alex (Sebastian), oh my *flutters her hand over her chest* He just ooooooozes sexy and decadent! I love it! I love how you're writing this story. I love how you developed it. I love the lemon. Ohhh the lemon. And the emotions, even Alex's (Sebastian's), even if he doesn't or can't call it love it's just so intense!

When I first started reading your fic, back when you didn't know if you were going to continue it, I believe I told you that anything without Ciel in it is just...meh to me. You make me not miss Ciel. I am dearly in love with Ciel. Not the boy, but what he could have been and *cries* Just... *sniffle* I am so glad you have him here, no matter that he seems to be just a whisper or a wisp or whatever he is... I nearly burst into tears when I realized. *SOB* It's so bittersweet. (I honestly do have tears running down my face...No hyperbole).

I am so glad I happened upon your fic and I am so glad you continued it. I am looking forward with impatience yet trepidation for you continue. I'm very aware that every update brings us closer and closer to the end of a simply stunning work of fic, but I can't help yearning for updates.

Thank you for this story. Thank you for taking the time to write it. Thank you for sharing your talent.

Little Black Kitty
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From ANON - risi on July 23, 2012
Hmm, I could have sworn I reviewed this chapter, but my computer's been acting up, maybe it's out in cyber limbo somewhere. Or maybe I just think I reviewed. (sigh, they say memory is the first to go) Those two mysterious beings, I'm starting to have thoughts on who they might be, but it sounds like they're in the Shimigami library and I can't figure out how they would be there. But whoever they are I really can't wait to find out what they are up to. Time is catching up to Gilda and while I don't think she is regretting the contract I think she's regretting that it's ending. It's one thing to die, everyone does it, but to do die and be nothing afterwords, to be forgotten eventually as those who knew you pass on... that must be a frightening thought. She's not even leaving behind a body of music as a legacy and I wonder if that doesn't sting a bit. Granted Sebastian will remember her, especially as she'll be sustaining him for a good long bit, but she won't know it. Does she wonder if she'll just be another notch on the ol' knife and fork as he goes about looking for a new meal? I can't wait to see what happens.
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