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Reviews for Rockstar

By : Sephy
  • From Sungirl763 on May 21, 2021

    HOLY HOTTNESS, BATMAN! This whole story was chef's kiss! I'm a novice fic writer at best, I wasn't very confident in my writing until after school so for your skills to be that advanced at such a young age? Absolutely jealous. I enjoyed every part of this story and absolutely believed this to be true to Gojyo's character (which I also appreciated). The thought process as to how he got there in the last posted chapter, I mean, I know you have this listed as a WIP but you could almost leave it there with the open ending.


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  • From Devy on October 05, 2013
    I'm not usually a fan of het but this was beautifully written.

    I love how you switch between kinda his and her points of view, and it's definitely HOT HOT HOT!

    Angel is such a badass...the lines like "I'm sorry if you misunderstood. I didn't mean I wanted to buy you a drink at a bar. I meant I wanted to see how many glasses of whiskey it takes once I get you back to my room for you to fuck me.” are amazing. She really knows what she wants, she's not afraid to take what she wants, and I still feel she's the female version of him. The end of the chapter was perfect, honestly I do know what happens up to chapter 3 (present day) but I think you should end it so that they are in SOME sort of relationship. Maybe not with titles and dates, but just something more exclusive. Because she's so great for Gojyo. She just wants in it for the sex, she accepts him for who he is, she gives him what she wants, he trusts her, it's just such a great pair.

    “damn, hottie, you misunderstood me again. I just figured you'd want another go sometime tonight before you take off. Unless of course you just can't keep up with me.” this right there. There is no woman more perfect for him.

    I ship Angojyo! Hardcore!
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  • From Devy on October 05, 2013
    I made an account JUST so I could review your revised fanfics as you post them. That's true love right there!

    So in the Intro, I couldn't help but feel kinda bad for Gojyo. Yeah, he's a perv and kinda a creep, but he's also a good person and girls always give him a hard time for his status and he can't catch a break! Poor guy. I think this is pretty accurate to the manga/anime because he does strike out A LOT...and even though he plays the tough guy you can tell that some of the things that are said about him get to him. So I like how this portrays him perfectly.

    I love the brief interaction between the two at the end, and I think the way she gets his attention is perfect. My favorite line out of the whole chapter was definitely “I almost didn't even recognize you. That would've been a damn shame, for the both of us.”

    She is like the girl version of Gojyo!
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