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Reviews for Cracking the Whip

By : cleverkinkster
  • From ANON - Leeslane on March 01, 2014
    Sorry but it feels like the fic is trying to fuse a Plot What Plot lemon with a Porn With Plot story. They don't go so well together.
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  • From Ryvius on February 28, 2014
    Another good chapter! One detail I like is how Misato is always reflecting over her actions with Shinji (how strict she should be with him or how kind/affectionate she should be, how much she should reward or punish him, etc.) and whether or not those actions will be good or bad for him.

    Another scene I liked was Misato realizing the impact of Shinji's mother's death and the complete absence of his dad (A.K.A. King of the Assholes) has had on his mental state.

    Disappointed Rei won't have much of a role, but I understand your reason for why. That said, I'll be eagerly awaiting Asuka's arrival in the story, both for the interesting character stuff and for the 'action'.

    Looking forward to the next chapter! Keep up the good work!
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  • From ANON - Kylerocks01 on February 26, 2014
    Nice first 4 chapters so far. I was a little scepticle about this until the last point on the list, this is my favourite pairing of this series and it's nice to see Misato helping Shinji become a better person in a very different way. As for future chapters please only leave it with these 2, I think it would be ruined if you add others like Asuka in it even though she deserves something much worse too happen to her. Looking forward the the next chapters.
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  • From Ryvius on February 24, 2014
    Pretty good first four chapters in my opinion. Everything is good, no real problems I can think of.

    I like how Misato still cares for Shinji and such (Rule #8 was a nice touch).

    Will Rei and Asuka have a role in this story later down the line? I think it would be interesting to see how Shinji's relationship with the girls would differ after Misato's training, as well as Misato's relationship with Asuka when she moves in.

    Keep up the good work!




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