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Reviews for Cracking the Whip

By : cleverkinkster
  • From Jackle on December 23, 2021

    Really great story. Shinji is great for a sub and dom position in my opinion, but sub is the much easier and hotter of the two. It would have been intresting to see what was done with Asuka, but that never happened. 


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  • From ANON - Anon on October 24, 2020

    I give this story a solid 90 out of 100, the writing, the pacing and the story themselves are all excellent, but the missing chapters are what makes this not as perfect as it should be. I sure hope you continue writing this story because it is by far one of the best that I found on this site ! :)


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  • From kkk on March 21, 2020

    Excelente historia . tengo ganas de ver como continua


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  • From gerasa on January 04, 2016
    I was beginning to think this update would never come but I'm glad it did. It was really great and I loved it. I can't wait to see more.

    I'm just wondering how many times Misato is going to have to remind Shinji that his focus shouldn't be on sex. it should be on pleasing her. he really seems focused on the idea of one day being able to fuck his mistress like a man.
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  • From ANON - CerberusTheHunter on January 03, 2016
    Great to see an update and well done. I specifically appreciate the twist on the usual taking the s-type shopping experience. Both getting him nice clothing and it not be all fetish gear.
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  • From ANON - nobody on August 10, 2015
    I am intrigued, and I like some aspects of it--it seems semi-plausible, compared with canon.

    At the same time it's kind of creepy and rapey. Misato seems to me to be getting way too aggressive and way too kinky, way too fast.
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  • From ANON - Gurrenninja on December 20, 2014
    I feel like this story can go in a couple of directions but story wise I want misato to take it to far and forget why she's doing this. Maybe she has a bad day and drinks to much and shinji takes the punishment and either runs away again or just loses the will to keep going. Or maybe ritsco sees that shinji is just torturing himself because he thinks she'll abandon him. Maybe shinji has been raped or abused before and thinks this is what he deserves but he should get to experience sex with love as well maybe with rei or asuka
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  • From gerasa on December 09, 2014
    love the update! I've been waiting for it all year. if I had to do my customary complaint it would be that collaring is usually a big thing for these stories and its described in detail because it's the main symbol of a slave's servitude.

    I'm just glad that this story is updating again.
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  • From gerasa on August 14, 2014
    hey are you still working on this story? I set up an account just to send you a PM and check in on how you were doing, but the system doesn't allow for that. You might be able to reply via e-mail to this but if you can't sign up for Darkscribes dot org and find me there. if nothing else you'll find plenty of things to stimulate the creative juices there.
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  • From ANON - gerasa on June 02, 2014
    I really liked this update, and I hope to see more soon, but you really didn't have to worry about perspective changes confusing people. It's a third person story not a first person.
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  • From Ryvius on May 23, 2014
    Nice chapter! I think my favorite parts are once again the scenes where Misato is affectionate with Shinji and the part with Misato doing the whole teaching him he could say no thing.

    Uh oh, wonder what Misato's got in mind for Shinji next.

    Keep up the good work!


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  • From ANON - DragonKnight387 on May 05, 2014
    Aside from the piss (and shit that is to come), I really love femdom stories, especially with Misato. She's way hotter than most of the other ladies on the show.
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  • From ANON - Rommel on March 24, 2014
    Looks good even if the chapters are really short. Cant wait for Asuka to show up and see your plans for her. Dont take too long.
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  • From ANON - ChaddyManPrime on March 07, 2014
    Are you going to have Shinji ask for a normal relationship with Misato after she turns him into whatever she's trying to turn him into? Also are you going to have Misato cheat on Shinji with Kaji? I would love to see Shinji's reaction after he finds out his Mistress doesn't want him anymore.
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  • From ANON - gerasa on March 02, 2014
    I like this story. both because it has the characters trying to be something approaching decent human beings in their perviness and are enjoying themselves and because it's one of the few femdom Eva stories out there that has a male sub instead of a femsub. I like that it doesn't shy away from all the possibilities of the situation either.

    as for Asuka I think that the only two ways for you to go with her is as a domme in training or as Shinji's sister in slavery. the joining him as Misato's slave part is obvious because Asuka is so often a submissive but has only been a slave alongside Shinji (in a slave/slave lvoe story) in a abbandoned story on Darkscribes.org that I encouraged. the domme thing has only been tried once or twice in English lemons and I believe both those cases spring from a series of posts on The Fanfiction Forum where it was pointed out that Asuka has some great personality traits for a domme but no training on how to properly channel those traits. I know you've already decided on what role she is to play but it's fun to speculate. (then again you could go with the theory that she's mentally ill with borderline personality disorder but that seems like way too dark a tone for this story to take that would result in sex scenes that shame the reader more then turn them on.)

    if I have a complaint to make its that some things could use a bit more permanency. like the scene where Misato canes Shinji with 50 strokes. that should have resulted in Shinji having a horribly sore and possibly even bloody rump but he seemed fine as soon as the caning stoped. even if he started to enjoy it he should have been tended to by Misato afterwards or at least had the pain pointed out.

    that's all I had to say. I'm really looking forward to the next update.
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