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Reviews for Rise of the Demons

By : NightCrepper
  • From GFM on April 16, 2017

    I hope you finish this, this is really good


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  • From ANON - Scorpinac on April 28, 2016
    So, read the first three chapters thus far, and I must say, grammar and spelling, mostly grammar, errors not withstanding, this has been a decent ride. Highly disturbing, and giving our heroines a lot of hope of finally coming out on top, but decent to keep me going. But I must point out a rather glaring error at this point before going further, one I'm thinking Sethite overlooked - Hotaru was not Mistress Nine, and Mistress Nine was not Hotaru. They were completely separate characters, though the confusion is understandable. Mistress Nine was an alien parasite, not unlike Stargate SG-1's Goa-Uld, that was implanted inside Hotaru and eventually took her over until she was destroyed utterly. And you don't need to take it from me, feel free to look it up on the Sailor Moon Wiki, or better yet hit up Viz's Neon Alley where all the episodes are currently posted in the original Japanese with subs, you want eps. 90-127. It should be very clear. Well, back to chapter 4. Laters.
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  • From ANON - Hybris on March 06, 2016
    Any chance of corrupting Chibi Moon perhaps? Beyond that this a prime example of just plain old traditional tentacle sex done right, something that seems to be harder to find then it used to be. Good job hope to see more.
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  • From SailorAF on February 27, 2016
    I wrote a lot of Sailor Moon stories, read even more, but this one is outstanding. I like all those kinky ideas you put here, like corrupting the scouts, changing their look, forcing them to marry and breed with a demons. My favorite part was Uranus episode, I like how long she struggled. I wouldn't mind seeing more parts showing what happend to the world itseld after the invasion. And maybe you could use some other magicl girls, like Demon Hunter Yohko, Nanoha and Fate or the other demon hunting cuties? Also, it'd be cool to see demon's everyday life with Sailor Scouts serving them during the baths, fights or feasts.
    I hope you'll continue this epic, it's great story.
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  • From ANON - George on February 27, 2016
    Amazing story. Long, with lot of cruel and sexy things. I wonder if you have any plans for Sailor Stars as well. Anyway, keep on good work!
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  • From ANON - wingsofseyfert12 on February 25, 2016
    I keep picturing the demon that has Sailor Mars as a slave as Amon, Champion of demons from Devilman. To be honest I thought this was going to be a DevilmanSailor Moon crossover. Anyway gruesome story. I love how bitchy Rei is though Makoto still harbors some of her old self. Poor Ami though. I hope Rei becomes a demoness eventually. Anyway if you want to message me concerning this review you can do so at the regular fanfiction website. My pen name there is the same I used to review.
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