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Reviews for Pokemon Advanced: May and Pikachu

By : ccsakurai
  • From ANON - dan on August 13, 2005
    this was a good story, hope you keep it going :)
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  • From ANON - Richard on August 02, 2005
    I love your story. Heres hoping for more chapters.
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  • From ANON - BBmac on May 29, 2005
    Where was Max? I never even saw his name.
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  • From ANON - Rico on February 12, 2005
    that was one hell of a story. i loved it. i never thought that pikachu would fuck may so hard. great. please write more on may and pikachu. or even brock raping max or ash.
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  • From ANON - - on January 27, 2005
    Show more of Marina and Flannery! Having other gym leaders like Jasmine would be even better!
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  • From ANON - stryke on December 21, 2004
    I read it about six months ago and loved it. i was just rereading, and wanted to ask you if you were planning on updating anymore. I hope you do, this is one of the best lemons on the site!
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  • From ANON - someguy on December 08, 2004
    If you are still writing this story I would like to see something between Ash and Duplica. Now that's rarity!
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  • From ANON - Twang on December 07, 2004
    6" isn't big, and you make it likes it 10". kinda lame. more than kinda. weirdo..
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  • From ANON - Yusuke3001 on August 27, 2004
    I want more! MUST HAVE MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!! THIS IS FUKIN' AWESOME SHIT!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 21, 2004
    i liked it alot, but there was a "sizable" (lol) problem. Pikachu is what maybe 16 inches (without his tail)? No one uses real cock sizes but when you say he's holding her head and getting a BJ he's also suposedly groping a breast... with what a foot? as to her bieng forced, pikachue is so small i'm sure she could break free. even a weak 10 year old could grab him and drop-kick him into the wall, his arms and legs are to slim to be strong. he relies upon swiftness and speed. otherwise great fic, if u had used a bigger aggressor it would have been near perfect
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  • From ANON - silvercat on July 21, 2004
    I think you should add Ash to the equation in the next chapters/sequels. you seem to be a fantastic writer, and my vote is firmly in the "keep going" column. Although, you prolly should get a beta; you have a few grammar and spelling slips.
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 03, 2004
    u shud do a thing with a guy an a grl pkmn
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  • From ANON - i am me on May 08, 2004
    you should write a chapter were a snorlax fucks may it would be kinky
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  • From ANON - hector rodriguez on May 08, 2004
    Have a couple of ash's other pokemon come into the story like charizard or bulbasor chickarita or something. Or have givonni come into the plot.havehave a gangbang or three-some or something.
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