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Reviews for Pokemon Advanced: May and Pikachu

By : ccsakurai
  • From ANON - Mario Alvarado on January 26, 2004
    Man, I've read all kinds of Pokemon sex fics, but this one takes the cake!!! This is one of the best fics I have ever read!!

    You said you will take requests for pairings. Well, I have one.

    I want to see Ash and Officer Jenny get it on and I would also like to see Delia get in on the action too!!

    I can't wait to see the next part. Please honor my request.
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  • From ANON - Satsy on January 24, 2004
    I find this amusing. It's a good parody full of sex all about Pokemon and certainot not very serious, and that's cool. So this is good. Yes.

    One thing, however...

    Sometimes the names and sizes all skewer and it's hard to work out sometimes who's fucking who because at one point they're called one name, then they're a bloke, then they're Becky. So... uh, yeah, that might want a bit of sorting.

    Otherwise it was very entertaining.

    Cheers!
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  • From ANON - Ray on January 22, 2004
    Do you think that you may be able to bring Misty in?
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  • From ANON - Ray on January 21, 2004
    Super story. Write more. Very soon. Please.
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  • From ANON - silverwolf on January 21, 2004
    this is such a good story but u should put misty in there and more of ash to !!!!!
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  • From ANON - Ray on January 19, 2004
    I love it. can't wait to read more.
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  • From BigGator5 on December 30, 2003
    About time Ash's mom got some action. I would love to read an Ash/Delia story. No really, I do!
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  • From ANON - Jim on December 25, 2003
    Good, write more.
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  • From ANON - grintalnor on December 25, 2003
    i have no segjestions, cause its already great, just please update soon!
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  • From ANON - Jay on December 24, 2003
    Curious, the foul lane wae was...interesting though I wouldn't expect to hear it from a ten-year old (perhaps a bit of backstory or some such to help explain that away?). And Pikachu's physical description seemed a bit off, for instance when the story started Pikachu was small enouo rio ride on Ash's shoulder but during the sex-scene is made to sound like he's as tall as May.

    Besides that and the age thing it seems okay.

    Two ideas (requests?) came to mind however at the end of the 6th chapter.

    1. Jessie and Meowth. Perhaps James goes out of the room to put Ash in a closet somewhere just for the hell of it, but as it really turns out he slipped some of that alcohol into Jessie's drink so after he leaves she starts to think of having sex with Meowth, when the pokemon wakes up he finds Jessie topless licking his member and asking him if he wants to fuck another bitch, Meowth replies by using something to tie her hands/arms to the headboard and screwing her rotten. Perhaps later on (some hours, maybe a day) Jessie and May wake-up only to find that Meowth is there and he's invited quite a few other pokemon for a little gang-bang action.

    2. A sort of sequal to this where the girls are older (16+) and one way or another end up becoming Pokebitch's in the wild.
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  • From ANON - un named on December 20, 2003
    a Misty, May, and Ash thresome would be the best. Please have one and just what is team rocket up to?
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  • From ANON - He Who Has None on December 09, 2003
    Urrr, okay... Its written alright. I wanna see some more, and include Misty if you can. I think she's a babe, heh... X_X
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  • From ANON - Shizzle my Jizzle on December 06, 2003
    OOOH YEAH!!! ME SO HORNY!!! MNT SNT SEX FOR VERY LONG TIME!!! I WANT YOU O FUCK ME RIGHT NOW!!!
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  • From ANON - No One Knows on November 30, 2003
    Awesome story! I love it! and I'd like to see Misty in this story
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  • From ANON - Ross on November 26, 2003
    Update soon. Its a great story
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