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Reviews for Foot-loose and Fancy-free

By : Robofetus
  • From ANON - S.Tori on January 03, 2007
    This is all kinds of beautiful. Wow. Soft and sweet and a nice ending - at the water's edge, just like where it began. I also like how you wove quotes into the story throughout its progress.

    I wish more KaworuxShinji stories had happy endings like this... **sniffle**
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  • From ANON - PurplePinstripeDevil on June 20, 2006
    This is a wonderful story. You should definately continue. Your way with words are simply amazing.
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  • From jackalsscalpel on November 15, 2005
    Beautiful vocabulary. The flow of it was a little awkward but understandable and the song choice was lovely.
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  • From ANON - Nacht Kind on October 22, 2004
    That was consuming and overwhelming. Filling me with such joy and inspiration that I could hardly breath, eveloping my entire being within its loving beauty. So confliting I felt I was being crushed and at the same time lifted above it all, filling me with the desire to be consumed by tears while laughing with an utter ecstasy. I pray you do not think me foolish, and I'm sorry, I know I'm waxing poetic. However, I beseech you, do not discontinue your writing, if this story is any indication it is truly beautiful and deserves to receive acknowledgement for the masterpiece it is. I pray you are aware that I am being completely sincere and honestly mean all I have written. Please continue your work, it is unbelievably enthralling. I adore it. Yrs~ Nacht
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  • From ANON - Sev on June 12, 2004
    The large spaces... the flashes of the mind... brilliant....
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  • From ANON - Rubba soul on May 29, 2004
    Wow, I love this fic. It's so wonderful. Seme-Shinji! XD~~
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  • From ANON - Cruci on May 07, 2004
    Seme Shinji!!! Wh00t!!! The pranks were so random... I was just sitting there and staring at the screen and snickering rather loudly... and all the while wondering what on earth Kaworu was on XD. Loved it. Really loved it. Lovely yaoi... sweet sweet yaoi. If I have one qualm, then it would be that Kaworu's POV seems so distant and analytical. Yes, it seems like Kaworu is indeed very emotional... but the writing itself wasn't as emotion-invoking. *shrugs* Its an interesting style that seems to suit him.
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  • From ANON - Trinity7 on April 25, 2004
    This story is absolutely beautiful. I love how you portray Kaworu, your characterization is wonderful. The sex was loving and well written as well. Great fic.
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  • From ANON - MidnightMoon on March 28, 2004
    This is... beautifully written. Job well done! It's interesting how Shinji was the "top" but i'm not complaining. I liked the whole Kaworu's POV. I say again, job well done.
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  • From ANON - Chrissy Sky on March 16, 2004
    Beautiful. Just... beautiful. The middle, the pranks, made me stare at the screen totally dumbfounded. The sex had me squirming and squealing. The end made me want to cry. *snugs* I love it and wish there were more Shinji/Kaworu out there like this.
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  • From ANON - Vladimir on February 08, 2004
    (ten-me ste standing ovation)
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  • From ANON - Em on January 20, 2004
    That was, without a doubt, the BEST Kaworu/Shinji fic I have ever read. I really don't know what else to say. I'm just surprised this hasn't gotten more reviews. You shoud be extremly proud of yourself, for it takes talent to write something like this. There are not many people out there with such a beautiful outlook on life, such as the one you have; people who can look at life and see only the beautiful things, though it is obvious that this world is an ugly place. You portrayed Kaworu wonderfully, just like an angel. The depth of emotion you used along with your amazing style of writing made this, quite possibly, the best fanfiction I've ever read. Thank you for letting the world know your beauty through words. Never stop dreaming.
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  • From ANON - Zapgirl on January 19, 2004
    I especially like it because Shinji is the seme...it's a first! I like it, it's romantic :3
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