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Reviews for Sibling Rivalry

By : SpiralBreeze
  • From Animedevildog on November 15, 2008
    Overall, I found this to be an excellent story, though the court scenes began to remind me of the court scenes in the Pink Floyd movie The Wall. I did notice a few spelling errors here and there, but not many. I look forward to reading more of his (my assumption there) writtings.
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  • From ANON - Anon on October 20, 2006
    cool
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  • From ANON - Skid42 on December 21, 2005
    Wow... that was just... wow... great job. You're a very good writer. I didn't actually read the first two chapters because... well... I don't like seeing May raped... nor anybody. Especally May... yup... I like May. Scratch that, I adore her. Anywayz, the story itself was actually what kept me loving it. You were very creative with both your characters and the original ones... such as that first judge, Father O'conner(or whatever his name was. Forgot already. :3), John, the other judge... that stuff. Norman was hillarious, aboslutely hillarious; what with the drinking and all that. My favorite part though had to be when Ash was finally freed... warmed my heart...

    Anyway, once again, great story! Keep it up! Although next time... if you ever want to write outside of the reality of this one, if you ever want to do another May/Max, maybe it could be consensual or May dominated? Perferrably the latter... sort of like her getting payback, you know? (Muhahahaaa...)
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  • From ANON - pheonix on October 28, 2005
    Ohh, very messes up, but very good work, it was one of the best stories I ever read.
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  • From ANON - Mike on October 09, 2005
    Despite the random Bush bashing, though I wonder if that actually would happen.... And the usual spelling/grammer errors in fanfics, I found it interesting to say the least. It seemed well thought out and very good plot, you twisted psyco. I thought my head was messed up, then I read this. I almost expected May to get it on with her father after he took her away, but thankfully, you didn't. Atleast Max met a satisfying end. I hope you go on to make more fanfics and if you are ever in the York/Harrisburg area, let me know so I can flee lol.
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  • From ANON - Robin Holmes on October 05, 2005
    We need more insane people in this world. Like you
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  • From ANON - kouga\'s girl on August 20, 2005
    ok WTF you have many Mental issues to make this story i mean oh my fucking god that was a twisted and gross story.
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  • From ANON - Cody on July 07, 2005
    Amazing, although, I wanted to strangle you when I thought Ash really was gonna catch the blame.
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 02, 2005
    Even tho this story was fucking sick and twisted...hell, I might have nightmares from it. It was a great story, very well written. It was a very...original story to say the least. I hope you keep writing, you have a definate flare for the art.
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  • From aok1992 on May 31, 2005
    Man,Great Plot,Story,Desciption,...............-Everything in the story is good keep it up

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  • From ANON - chell on May 09, 2005
    wow. a bit thrown together. but it was sweet. you really don't like max, do you?
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  • From ANON - weird on April 08, 2005
    I can barely type.

    my mind will be haunted forever.

    please dont write a sequel!!

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  • From ANON - dread on April 08, 2005
    yuo have the sickest mind!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Typewriter on March 27, 2005
    My god. That was a long enthralling story. I take it you don't like Max. Anyways great job and never, nerver, NEVER write a sequel to this fic or you'll be hearing from lawyers, ninjas, and of course law ninjas.
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  • From ANON - X on March 03, 2005
    hmmm, I got a few things to tell you. First, great fic for being creative.

    I take it you dont like Max.

    And you certainly dont know the court system.
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