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Reviews for Loss and Redemption

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  • From ANON - Doss on April 30, 2004
    great story,this is really good but add a lemon please.......FOR ALL OF GOD'S MECIES WRITE A LEMON I BEG OF YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!(SORRY FOR FRAKIN YOU OUT THIER...)
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  • From ANON - Ragnarok on April 26, 2004
    Whoa!, nice to see the first love Hina Fanfic on AFF.net is so good.

    Even though I like Kei/Mo pairings, i don't like it when Naru is getting hurt so bad. Quiet honestly, i don't know if you're gonna make this story a Kei/Mo or a Kei/Naru, but right now i wish it was a Kei/Naru, I think she's the one that deserves Keitaro the most kus she was the first one to accept him in the Hinata inn when everyone realized he wasn't a Tokyo U student. Anyway, if you're gonna make this a Kei/Mo fic please don't make Naru suffer so much
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  • From ANON - Nida on April 25, 2004
    Read the whole thing in one shot. Wrenched my gut. I WANT MORE. GO MO-CHAN!!111
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