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By : twishinky
  • From ANON - Valerie on February 27, 2005
    Hi,
    I tend to only read fanfictions that are set in the same time /environment than the manga . That's all past.
    your fanfic is great, Aoshi and Misao's " personalities " haven't been changed or just a bit (as Misao is older) and of course I just love this pairing so,
    keep up the good work!
    Valerie
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  • From ANON - anubis on February 27, 2005
    haaaah!!! success, you got my msg in a bottle --huzza!!!-- ahoy, welcome back!!! Your story is taking a very interesting turn, evil you for letting us wait for more... BTW there's a lil problem with the formating of chap 8 (the scene with Omasu is somewhat cut and we go straight to aoshi and misao in her apartment...), ok moooore, hope inspiration will come to you
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  • From ANON - dacrayzblaze1 on February 26, 2005
    i am, how do i say this. DISSAPOINTEDDD at the lack of a lemon. but still utterly utterly funny. that is why this still deserves a ten out of 5 ^_^
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  • From ANON - The Last Samurai on February 26, 2005
    hehe! woot first reviewer! *does happy dance in my mind*. *hugs you* i luv ye....so worth the wait...! This is simply one of the best lemon stories I have ever read, damn you! you got me hooked!
    You got the plot...you got the drama...you got the comedy...you got the sex!
    Whee! elements of wonderful story!


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  • From ANON - anubis on February 07, 2005
    I've already review this but, here's nothing: *ECHO...'echo'...* is some there? hellooooo? if there is I'll just toss this message-in-a-bottle just in case: "PLEASE UPDATE. LOVE YOUR STORY. CANT HAVE ENOUGH OF AxM PARING. WANT TO KNOW WHAT'S NEXT."
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  • From ANON - Excellent on February 06, 2005
    Excellent! Please continue!!
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  • From ANON - dacrayzblaze1 on September 14, 2004
    this was by fhe bhe best chapter, with much better language. your writing grows and i commend you for it and your story
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 10, 2004
    Well, actually I read chapter 8 a few days ago, but couldn't make a decent review. So I'm doing it now. This chapter was just GREAT. I loved to see Aoshi lonely and drunk, and this anger towards Kenshin was positively hilarious! (by the way, Kenshin's anger on chapter 6 was very good too).
    I'd love to be a good reviewer and also talk about the bad points in your story, but the truth is that I couldn't find any. The sex scenes are amazing, the humor is great and now ths mos more romance! What else can I ask for?
    I'm curious to know what's gonna happen next. Who's that guy asking for Misao's hand? Soujirou?
    I'll wait anxiously for the next chapters, and meanwhile, see you on shinobi love!
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  • From ANON - Kanzen ne Tsuki on September 09, 2004
    Twisha, Twisha... superbly satisfying. You write the best lemons, girly. What I want to know, is who is this well dressed jerk waiting to talk to Okina about Marrying Misao? No no no no no no no! That is way to big of a kink in the pipe work.
    I love this story, sweet friend. I'm so glad you're writing again. I didn't know you were over on MM.org. I'll go looking for you over there. Love you, you wonderful woman. Don't ever stop writing.

    Tsuki-san
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  • From ANON - LinkinParkBabeoX on September 03, 2004
    I loved your story. It was great. I sat reading all the chapters in lyk 20 minutes. It was awesome
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  • From ANON - the last samurai on September 01, 2004
    dude u rock. i was waiting for when this would be updated and i must say this was sooooooooo worth thit. it. angst in the beginning though, but i loved the sex. Must say this is a gooooooood story

    bless
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  • From ANON - Kyte on August 31, 2004
    YAY! You updated the fic! I would check everyday on both AFF and Med for updates. This chapter was great ^-^ How much I love Aoshi/Misao more now. I'm trying to picture what is next to come, but you know I rather have the author tell the storyline. Don't care when you put up the next chapter, but hope I won't die before you do ;)
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  • From ANON - Zerianyu on August 30, 2004
    Hey

    ACKKKKKKKKKKKKK TWO CLIFF HANGERS TODAY WAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! PLease post soon I love the fic. sniffles so good. LOl hope you post soon.
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  • From ANON - Shadiyaray on August 22, 2004
    I really like. I can't wait for the next chappie!!

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  • From ANON - dacrayzblaze1 on July 24, 2004
    u needa update this business soon!!!!! its freaking great!!!!
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