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Reviews for Internal Affairs

By : twishinky
  • From ANON - dacrayzblaze1 on July 24, 2004
    damn! aoshi and misao are horny lil bastards! lol.... i love this story its great
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  • From ANON - ERICA on July 21, 2004
    wow really detail and good cant really wait for more
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  • From ANON - Kanzen ne Tsuki on July 19, 2004
    Hysterical! Kaoru the Kamikazi driver! I can see it all now... and the part about making her Aoshi's cousin? Fabulous. Good chappy, Twish, my lovely. And I know what you mean about trying to get into Aff.net. It took me a month almost to get in to update my Vamp story. Finally did it just a couple of days before you did this. It's like pulling teeth out of a dead dogs head... damn hard.
    Keep up the good work, Baby. You're on a roll.
    God Bless, dear Friend.
    Tsuki-san
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  • From ANON - pola on July 18, 2004
    is simply the best lemon I have ever read, and apart from that the story is great, matvalous, amaizing etc.etc,etc, I hoper you update soon, because I can stop thinking of what is going to happend and trust me is driven me mad, well congratulation
    see ya
    atte
    ana paola
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  • From ANON - the last samurai on July 17, 2004
    dude i have to say This was sooooooooooo worth the wait. i lauged so hard i loved Kaoru's psycho pregnant lady behavior. ooooooo the Icy bitches comment was mad funny. I especialy cracked up for " you’re in deep shit, ...etc" all in all mad props for this chapter, *eagerly awaiting next one*
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  • From ANON - anime on July 17, 2004
    Great story! Can't wait for more updates. The last update was great but one quick question-- what advice did the pregnant lady give Misao? I missed it. sorry...

    I love your story. Your writing is great please keep writing. I am anxious to know how Aoshi will handle things. I certainly hope that Misao is strong. I hate it when she loses her pride too soon in Fanfics.

    Keep up the good work!
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  • From ANON - Sephiress on July 17, 2004
    YAY another chapter of Internal Affairs! I have been waiting for this and I love this chapter with Kaoru. I realyy like how Misao is trying to be strong since that i fit fitting to her character not to show emotions. I am happy to see her and Kaoru have become friends, while Aoshi and Kenshin seem friends as well.

    I can't wait to see the stuff that goes on between Himura and Aoshi-sama next time. And what's the future look like for Aoshi and Misao? I'll just have to glue myself to the somputer until the next chappie!

    much luv
    Sephiress
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  • From ANON - Zerianyu on July 17, 2004
    Hey

    AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO THAT WAS AMEAN ENDING. PLEASE UPDATE SOOOOOONNNNNNNNNNNNNNN PLEASEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE YAYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY CHAP 777777777777777777777!





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  • From ANON - Zerianyu on July 17, 2004
    Hey

    AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO THAT WAS AMEAN ENDING. PLEASE UPDATE SOOOOOONNNNNNNNNNNNNNN PLEASEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE YAYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY CHAP 777777777777777777777!





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  • From ANON - The Last Smaurai on June 17, 2004
    Dudeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee i woulda reviewed sooner but this site is real screwed up and it only let me in till now. Great chapter dude i actually made popcorn to read this chapter. I was thinking along the lines of where the story would go and what dark cloud u were talking about. to tell u the honest truth i thought she was pregnant but N e how i cant wait for the next chapteeep eep writing,
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  • From ANON - Kyte on June 12, 2004
    *Sigh* I wish FF.N would let you post this up. I would add this to my favourite's story list in a split second. I love your fiction so far. Keep the sex going even if the drama is builting. Nothing like frustration to fuck each other. Hope to read another chapter as soon as possible!
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  • From ANON - yue on June 12, 2004
    ohh and the plot thickens. oohh im still so in love with this fic. updaet soon. oh yeah wasnt kens's w's wife there too. what the hell are they doin up there and whats the wife doin when this went down. got to clear it up.
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  • From ANON - Kanzen ne Tsuki on June 11, 2004
    NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!! You stopped it... THERE???
    AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!! You wicked, wicked woman... I can't believe you did... THAT!!! Mwwwahhhahhaa!! T.T That was a... horrible cliffy... (You've been reading my stuff too long... you're learning bad habits... LOLOLOL) Ahh, Excet cht chapter, Trish... just Excellent... bloody brilliant actually. Kenshin being such hard nosed businessman prude? I loved it... I laughed my ass off and choked on my coffee. It was GREAT! Hell, I was afraid she was getting ready to tell Aoshi she was pregnant... but this is much better... oh the wicked webs we weave... hehehehhehehehehe... Brilliant... ewwwww, btw. I updated 'Bad Kid' and 'Do you want to live forever'. ~o^.
    Much love, Trisha girl.
    Hope to see you again soon... take it easy... love this story and you.
    take care my dearest friend.
    Tsuki-san
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  • From ANON - duke of spades on June 10, 2004
    yes i'm of age....somewhat anywho i'm a rather poor writer ...i'm working on it as best as i can yeah know college and stuff anywho i have waited very long and thats all i get please do a follow up quickly i'm very anxious to see what happens next!! ^_^
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  • From ANON - Arashi on June 10, 2004
    It is an absolutely GREAT story! I'm dying to know what happens next. You know, it's hard to find an adult story with a plot, and yours is making me more interested every chapter. Congratulations for the great job!
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